Ariella wrote...
I'm addressing the comment about being in a coma, which I took to be a referrence to the inbetween years, not within act three itself. If I was mistaken, I apologize.
Nothing to apologize for. I meant between the Acts, which does include between Acts II and III. After Act I, Hawke achieves money and status, but does nothing with it. After Act II, he becomes Champion, but does nothing about the dictatorship taking place in his city-state across the span of three years, and we see this is true in Act III.
Ariella wrote...
As for act three, I agree that it does have some narrative problems is is the weakest of the three acts, which is unfortunate. There are things I personally, would have done differently both in act two and three to make it make more sense, and if Bioware (as in the dev team) wants to know what those things were, they can PM me, and I'll happily detail it.
However, saying he does nothing goes too far in the other direction. Hawke, to me, seems ready to defend her home, and both sides want to woo her to their cause. And remember you can agree with Meredith and things happen differently than if you agree with Orsino or tell them both to take a leap.
But if Hawke agrees with Meredith, why are pro-templar players denied the option to have a pro-active Hawke who has been supporting her for the past three years? Why are pro-mage players denied the option of having a pro-active Hawke who has disputed Meredith's dictatorship for the past three years? The dialogue options and the voice actors make it clear that the Champion of Kirkwall isn't doing anything.
Ariella wrote...
As for the ends of Sheparding the Wolves and Legacy. Those are two different issues. First,
a refugee is discovered having murdered a sister of the Chantry... Hawke's hanging by a rope at that point.
You mean a refugee isn't discovered having killed a sister and a templar because they are in an abandoned house where killing two people isn't going to be traced back to him, especially since no one else knows the sister and the templar are there. He could have dragged the bodies to the gang in the Undercity he took care of. Hawke doing nothing is what caused people to die later on.
Ariella wrote...
The second is based completely on implication, and information that Hawke doesn't have, as Hawke's not a Grey Warden.
The Legacy ending, we'll just have to wait and see what's really what in the next installment.
I hated the ending to Legacy - Hawke, once again, doing nothing. I gave them a chance, and they disappointed me again. Would it kill BW to write Hawke as an intelligent person who doesn't let the bad guy walk away? Larius acting completely different and sounding like Corypheus should have tipped Hawke off. I'd have no problem with Larius escaping without the writers depicting Hawke as a dim-witted fool.