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[LolaLei]

LOL!

[R2s Muse]

OK, another quick drabble before we get to for page 101. (LOL - not fast enough! ) This one is fluffier and set after my story "Knight's Bloom," but only slightly spoilery.

First Haircut by R2s Muse (Bioware owns DA and its characters, etc.)

“But, why?” the two-year old asked again, shifting in his chair and drumming his foot impatiently against the chair leg.

Marian Hawke smiled indulgently at her son and repeated, “Because without a haircut you can’t see.”  She reseated the sheet around his shoulders and leaned in to continue trimming his unruly curls. “And, Malcolm, if you can stay very, very still, then it won’t take long at all.”

At that moment, however, Cullen walked in, causing yet another distraction. “Papa!” the little boy cried, turning his head. Marian gave Cullen an exasperated look and then placed her hands on either side of the boy’s face and turned his head back into position again.

Cullen shrugged and gave his wife a mischievous grin,adding, “You’re doing a splendid job, Malcolm. Not much longer now.” Malcolm’s resemblance to his father was almost uncanny, including a head of tightly curled golden hair that seemed to turn red in certain lighting.

Marian shook her head in amused resignation and then moved around to face her son, preparing to cut the front of his hair. “So, Malcolm, should we cut your hair short just like Papa’s or leave it long?” She looked up just in time to see Cullen grimace. “What?” she asked him.

Cullen’s face clouded. “I… I think we should leave it… free.”

Marian stepped back and said to Malcolm, “Okay, short break, sparrowhawk. Stay sitting, but you can move your head, okay?” He nodded back at her, a bit too emphatically as he immediately exercised the right the move his head as much as he wanted.

She set down the shears and walked over to her husband with a faint look of concern. She reached out and ran her fingers through his closely shorn locks, loving the feel of his hair against her fingertips. His hair was so tightly curled one might expect it to feel wiry, so she was always amazed at how soft it was. In fact, his hair was perhaps her favorite of his features, something he knew well. She moved her hand back to cup his cheek. “What is it, love?” she asked in a soft voice.

He took her hand from against his cheek and placed a slow kiss in the center of her palm. “It’s nothing, really…” He saw that she wasn’t taking this for an answer when the look in her eye became stern, so he searched for an explanation. “It’s just… keeping my hair short… it’s a habit from my templar days.” She nodded, already knowing this, but waited for him to continue. “I say habit… but really it was a requirement.” He paused again, looking away. “I guess I’ve always… sort of envied Malcolm a bit for being able to be so… free with his hair. I try to imagine that perhaps that’s what I looked like, once upon a time. Back when I was just a grimy-kneed altar boy. Before I had such… structure in my life.”

She searched his eyes for a moment and then gave him a quick kiss on the lips, trying to show him that she understood. His childhood as a Chantry orphan always evoked a mix of emotions for him, some good and some bad. He held her fast against him and soon the kiss had deepened. Marian pulled herself away reluctantly, touching a hand to her flushed cheek, before glancing behind her at Malcolm. But he was facing the other direction, oblivious to his parents, and was practicing making wet raspberry sounds with his lips.

She walked back over to the boy and, with a smile at her husband, announced, "Okay, free it is."

Malcolm's head perked up at once. "Free? Yes!" Then, faster than they would have thought possible, the child had whipped off the sheet and was sprinting out the door. Marian and Cullen shared a rueful laugh.

Cullen enfolded her in his arms, his lips twisting in chagrin. "Perhaps a poor choice of words," he said with a chuckle.

She smiled up at him fondly and shook her head. "No. I think it was the perfect choice of words."

Modifié par R2s Muse, 25 avril 2012 - 01:32 .

[LolaLei]

D'awww that was a sweet story. And look! We're on page 101!

[Destria]

R2s Muse wrote...

OK, another quick drabble before we get to for page 101. (LOL - not fast enough! ) This one is fluffier and set after my story "Knight's Bloom," but only slightly spoilery.

First Haircut by R2s Muse (Bioware owns DA and its characters, etc.)

*snip*

Nicely done!  Loved both stories.

Side note:  Where is this DA3 romance thread I keep hearing about?  Search function on this forum stinks.

[LolaLei]

It's in the DA2 general discussions forum, under "companions and romance wish list for DA2"

[LolaLei]

*DA3 even.

[Destria]

 Ah, found it!  Thanks.  

[R2s Muse]

Thanks, Destria and LolaLei!

So, no pics on this page... so here's one that always just cracks me up. Not about hair, but about... science! :shrug:

For Science by sagacious rage

Modifié par R2s Muse, 24 avril 2012 - 11:08 .

[VampOrchid]

Perfect Mage/Cullen song lol



Every little thing she does is magic by the Police

[VampOrchid]

LolaLei wrote...

It's in the DA2 general discussions forum, under "companions and romance wish list for DA2"

Hellz yeah i made a post

[VampOrchid]

http://www.fanfictio...agons_and_Mages

Here's my quick poem lol

[R2s Muse]

VampOrchid wrote...

http://www.fanfictio...agons_and_Mages

Here's my quick poem lol

That was awesome! Love the part : A Templar Knight, not fully enthralledBy the idea of Andraste not loving us all.

[VampOrchid]

R2s Muse wrote...

VampOrchid wrote...

http://www.fanfictio...agons_and_Mages

Here's my quick poem lol

That was awesome! Love the part : A Templar Knight, not fully enthralledBy the idea of Andraste not loving us all.

LOL thanks!

[Destria]

VampOrchid wrote...

http://www.fanfictio...agons_and_Mages

Here's my quick poem lol

Very nice!  I can't write decent poetry to save my life, so my hat's off to you.  Wish I could've had some time to write something to add to the celebration, but my anatomy final took up all my time.  Done for now, but start microbiology in a week.  I haven't had any writing time for months and I'm going crazy with my over-active imagination.   

I will have to wait a bit longer to tribute Cullen's sun-kissed ginger hair...

[VampOrchid]

YAY! I was finally able to finish and add chapter 10 to my ff.net fic!

http://www.fanfictio...e_of_The_Circle

[Dunquixote]

Congrats :].

Now that I'm done with finals, I can start reading it again. Sorry for being slow.


Man, I'm trying to open up my chapter one (i did a prologue) for my second story, with a sex scene, but blah... nothing matches Crisium's quality work. I just deleted what would've been a full page of a scene.. <.< The other scene I had made near the end of my 1st story, it wasn't even that long. it's so awkward to write.

[SamaraDraven]

I am sooo late in adding mine but I've been madly scrambling to get it done on top of searching for a new home and 2 kids!  Plus this - originally - short thing grew on me. I've decided it can fit into my other fic since I did grab some of the inspiration for it from there. I tried to end it neatly but in the interest of getting "hair" in there, it was delayed. So here's mine at my journal. ff.net says it'll be awhile before my story will show up there.

samara-draven.livejournal.com/56873.html

Edit: Apparently ff.net lies on itself. So if you'd prefer to read it there.

www.fanfiction.net/s/8057406/1/Spirited

Modifié par SamaraDraven, 25 avril 2012 - 06:42 .

[R2s Muse]

SamaraDraven wrote...

I am sooo late in adding mine but I've been madly scrambling to get it done on top of searching for a new home and 2 kids!  Plus this - originally - short thing grew on me. I've decided it can fit into my other fic since I did grab some of the inspiration for it from there. I tried to end it neatly but in the interest of getting "hair" in there, it was delayed. So here's mine at my journal. ff.net says it'll be awhile before my story will show up there.

samara-draven.livejournal.com/56873.html

Edit: Apparently ff.net lies on itself. So if you'd prefer to read it there.

www.fanfiction.net/s/8057406/1/Spirited

Samara, that was fantastic!! Loved it! Left you a review at ff.net.

[VampOrchid]

Dunquixote wrote...

Congrats :].

Now that I'm done with finals, I can start reading it again. Sorry for being slow.


Man, I'm trying to open up my chapter one (i did a prologue) for my second story, with a sex scene, but blah... nothing matches Crisium's quality work. I just deleted what would've been a full page of a scene.. <.< The other scene I had made near the end of my 1st story, it wasn't even that long. it's so awkward to write.

I've read a few more of your chapters sweety! And you're doing great!

Everyone's style of writing is different. Just like drawing. Don't consentrate so much on how other people write  As long as you're enjoying telling the story the way you think it would happen, it should be just fine!

[VampOrchid]

SamaraDraven wrote...

I am sooo late in adding mine but I've been madly scrambling to get it done on top of searching for a new home and 2 kids!  Plus this - originally - short thing grew on me. I've decided it can fit into my other fic since I did grab some of the inspiration for it from there. I tried to end it neatly but in the interest of getting "hair" in there, it was delayed. So here's mine at my journal. ff.net says it'll be awhile before my story will show up there.

samara-draven.livejournal.com/56873.html

Edit: Apparently ff.net lies on itself. So if you'd prefer to read it there.

www.fanfiction.net/s/8057406/1/Spirited

Aww that was well written! Cute! I'm not the biggest Hawke fan, but I did enjoy that! 

[SamaraDraven]

Thanks everyone! :happy: You know, now that I've published it, I found all the other errors in it! lol! Some of them are things Word should have flagged but didn't <_< so I'll be editing it as I go. Thank you for the praise. They're like my cookies.

[ladyshamen]

So much fanfic goodness! Great work ladies:) I posted in the "companions and romance wish list for DA3" and not 30 minutes later Mr. Gaider had posted! He seems to be showing some interest in that thread.

[SamaraDraven]

ladyshamen wrote...

So much fanfic goodness! Great work ladies:) I posted in the "companions and romance wish list for DA3" and not 30 minutes later Mr. Gaider had posted! He seems to be showing some interest in that thread.

That's awesome! I think I'll go check that thread out. See what people are saying. Do you think D.G. really is fishing for ideas about what fans want and would find acceptable in the next game's companions? Hopefully he's paying loooots of attention. hehehehehe

[R2s Muse]

Indeed. He keeps coming back. Which means I keep going there... like a bug drawn to a bright light... LOL