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[meanieweenie]

VampOrchid wrote...

How about the Chior boys lol, i so don't know how to spell that

I'll second The Choir Boys!

[SamaraDraven]

LolaLei wrote...

Gah, I can't think of a decent band name for them!

Chantry Rebels? They're all Chantry boys after all.

[VampOrchid]

SamaraDraven wrote...

LolaLei wrote...

Gah, I can't think of a decent band name for them!

Chantry Rebels? They're all Chantry boys after all.

LOL

[SamaraDraven]

meanieweenie wrote...

VampOrchid wrote...

How about the Chior boys lol, i so don't know how to spell that

I'll second The Choir Boys!

Ooh! That works! I didn't see it as I was busy trying be clever still...

[VampOrchid]

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

[meanieweenie]

VampOrchid wrote...

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

I fully support a new fic. Sucks to rewrite but I'm sure it'll be amazing ,as always.

On a side note, I may have to kill Lola for bringing up the 80's. I am now trapped on Duran Duran.

[SamaraDraven]

VampOrchid wrote...

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

Have fun! And good luck!

Speaking of fic... Would any of you like to beta mine? I have several chapters' worth done but find mistakes every time I reread it. I suspect I'm too numbed to it so I miss stuff. If not, do you ladies have any links to Dragon Age beta resources?

[SamaraDraven]

meanieweenie wrote...

I fully support a new fic. Sucks to rewrite but I'm sure it'll be amazing ,as always.

On a side note, I may have to kill Lola for bringing up the 80's. I am now trapped on Duran Duran.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! She's really kind of evil, isn't she? :innocent:

[meanieweenie]

SamaraDraven wrote...

VampOrchid wrote...

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

Have fun! And good luck!

Speaking of fic... Would any of you like to beta mine? I have several chapters' worth done but find mistakes every time I reread it. I suspect I'm too numbed to it so I miss stuff. If not, do you ladies have any links to Dragon Age beta resources?

I have never beta'd before but I am a grammar ****. Let me know if I can help.

[LolaLei]

Submitted!

[LolaLei]

SamaraDraven wrote...

meanieweenie wrote...

I fully support a new fic. Sucks to rewrite but I'm sure it'll be amazing ,as always.

On a side note, I may have to kill Lola for bringing up the 80's. I am now trapped on Duran Duran.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! She's really kind of evil, isn't she? :innocent:

That's what I'm here for!

[SamaraDraven]

meanieweenie wrote...

SamaraDraven wrote...

VampOrchid wrote...

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

Have fun! And good luck!

Speaking of fic... Would any of you like to beta mine? I have several chapters' worth done but find mistakes every time I reread it. I suspect I'm too numbed to it so I miss stuff. If not, do you ladies have any links to Dragon Age beta resources?

I have never beta'd before but I am a grammar ****. Let me know if I can help.

The grammar mistakes are what keep jumping out at me because I skim too much when I attempt to find them. Some of Word's suggestions though, go against what I want the sentence to say. But I also want someone who can read through it and tell me if I've tripped over my own continuuity or let me know if the characters are getting OOC. It's easy to lose sight of what someone would say or do when you're in the thick of writing so much. <_< If you'd like to take a look, I'll send it to you.

[meanieweenie]

LolaLei wrote...

SamaraDraven wrote...

meanieweenie wrote...

I fully support a new fic. Sucks to rewrite but I'm sure it'll be amazing ,as always.

On a side note, I may have to kill Lola for bringing up the 80's. I am now trapped on Duran Duran.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! She's really kind of evil, isn't she? :innocent:

That's what I'm here for!

It's ok. I love Duran Duran. And they love me. The voices said so.

[meanieweenie]

SamaraDraven wrote...

meanieweenie wrote...

SamaraDraven wrote...

VampOrchid wrote...

I'm so rewriting my third chapter to my new fic...there's something...bleh...yay off I go to rewrite 7k words....booo lol

Have fun! And good luck!

Speaking of fic... Would any of you like to beta mine? I have several chapters' worth done but find mistakes every time I reread it. I suspect I'm too numbed to it so I miss stuff. If not, do you ladies have any links to Dragon Age beta resources?

I have never beta'd before but I am a grammar ****. Let me know if I can help.

The grammar mistakes are what keep jumping out at me because I skim too much when I attempt to find them. Some of Word's suggestions though, go against what I want the sentence to say. But I also want someone who can read through it and tell me if I've tripped over my own continuuity or let me know if the characters are getting OOC. It's easy to lose sight of what someone would say or do when you're in the thick of writing so much. <_< If you'd like to take a look, I'll send it to you.

Sent you a PM if you're interested.

[berelinde]

SamaraDraven wrote...

The grammar mistakes are what keep jumping out at me because I skim too much when I attempt to find them.

No one can find all of their own errors. It's the law.

Some of Word's suggestions though, go against what I want the sentence to say.

And that's the flip side of it. At the end of the day, it has to sound natural. Perfect grammar doesn't.

But I also want someone who can read through it and tell me if I've tripped over my own continuuity or let me know if the characters are getting OOC. It's easy to lose sight of what someone would say or do when you're in the thick of writing so much. <_< If you'd like to take a look, I'll send it to you.

You want an editor. I don't blame you. They totally rock and if you've got a good one, it can make all the difference in the world. I do fanfic by the seat of my pants, pretty much, but I've been privileged to work with one of the best editors in the world for some recent (BG2) mods.

May I recommend Google docs for editing? It lets multiple readers comment on text without changing the original. I'm thinking about doing a fanfic that way and just posting a links sheet somewhere.

[Destria]

R2s Muse wrote...

So, I had a random thought that... didn't Paul Walker have long hair at some point? Alas, couldn't find it

His hair was long enough to show his curls in Timeline.

[R2s Muse]

OMG, that jibjab. So funny!

I vote for Andraste's Knickers, altho Choir Boys is pretty good. For something metal-ish you could just call them Abomination or Smite the Abomination or something. Or something about the Void or the Abyss?

EDIT: doh didn't realize I was a page behind! nevermind! Lola you are awesome for submitting that!! LOL

Modifié par R2s Muse, 17 mai 2012 - 02:36 .

[meanieweenie]

Destria wrote...

R2s Muse wrote...

So, I had a random thought that... didn't Paul Walker have long hair at some point? Alas, couldn't find it

His hair was long enough to show his curls in Timeline.

Wow. I forgot about Timeline. Totally overshadowed for me by Gerard Butler. Yum.

[R2s Muse]

Destria wrote...

R2s Muse wrote...

So, I had a random thought that... didn't Paul Walker have long hair at some point? Alas, couldn't find it

His hair was long enough to show his curls in Timeline.

Yeah, I ran across that one... but not long enough! I thought he had done some surfer movie with long hair, but in the Jessica Alba movie it was short and I couldn't find a good pic of him in the Meet the Deedles or whatever one he did when he was young.

Modifié par R2s Muse, 17 mai 2012 - 02:39 .

[R2s Muse]

berelinde wrote...

May I recommend Google docs for editing? It lets multiple readers comment on text without changing the original. I'm thinking about doing a fanfic that way and just posting a links sheet somewhere.

Doesn't ff.net also have a beta function for sharing docs? I haven't used it myself, but I always see it in my Login area.

[LolaLei]

R2s Muse wrote...

OMG, that jibjab. So funny!

I vote for Andraste's Knickers, altho Choir Boys is pretty good. For something metal-ish you could just call them Abomination or Smite the Abomination or something. Or something about the Void or the Abyss?

EDIT: doh didn't realize I was a page behind! nevermind! Lola you are awesome for submitting that!! LOL

I've submitted it as "The Thedas Three" for now until we come up with one everyone likes, then I'll change it's title. Mine was the first entry to go in LOL!

[Destria]

R2s Muse wrote...

Destria wrote...

R2s Muse wrote...

So, I had a random thought that... didn't Paul Walker have long hair at some point? Alas, couldn't find it

His hair was long enough to show his curls in Timeline.

Yeah, I ran across that one... but not long enough! I thought he had done some surfer movie with long hair, but in the Jessica Alba movie it was short and I couldn't find a good pic of him in the Meet the Deedles or whatever one he did when he was young.

Yeah, Meet the Deedles wasn't a big hit on Google images, lol.  Oddly, I did find one of his hair doing this freakish poofy hi-top look from the 90's.  Not pretty.  I do like the shaggy curls though!  Cullen with shaggy curls... 

[meanieweenie]

Time to make like a gerbil and disappear.... until tomorrow my friends!

[ladyshamen]

I was just popping in to see what I missed and Holy Cow! I had to go to the Er again and the nuts there gave me an Antivan and I'm sooo messed up. I've been laughing so hard my son is asking me if I need to go BACK to the hospital. I'm going to go sleep this off and see ya'll in the morning when things make sense. Hopefully. Thanks for making me feel better! Good night:)

[SamaraDraven]

Thanks Berelinde, R2; I didn't know ff.net had the beta function. Guess I've just overlooked it. I tried using google docs once and didn't care for it. I could always give it a second shot, though. Thanks! =D

@Destria That's a good pic! The Medieval outfit makes him look even more like he could be Cullen from DA, if he was in civilian duds.