SamaraDraven wrote...
I have a Cullen centric question for you all. I'm having trouble with this part of my fic. I have plenty for after this point but I'm stuck on something and maybe you all can help.
Ok: What kind of idea do you think Cullen might come up with to keep a mage Hawke under closer supervision - strictly his, the Order doesn't know - without resorting to arresting her? I thought maybe she could come to the Gallows every so often under the guise of "training" so that new recruits could learn basic forms from her - she does fight,shes a rogue - since the templars lost several knights here and there... But then I was worried that it was too unrealistic for Hawke and how she likes to traipse about everywhere and Cullen can't just follow her around. So I'm stumped. Any ideas?
1. He offers to pay her handsomely for the training.
2. The training strokes her ego.
3. She has a crush on him, so of course she'll come.
Both of the first two fit with Hawke's personality IMO, although perhaps slightly less a diplo!Hawke... but it still fits. Hawke is always interested in making money, and she does know she's good at what she does. She has an ego, even if you're writing/playing a nice Hawke.
My only question would be, how does getting her to come train the recruits from time to time help him keep an eye on her? He would literally have to follow her or have her followed or pay people near her to tell him what she's up to.





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