Dunquixote wrote...
Don't be sorry! It's really so sweet of you. I'm glad I've made some great online friends--including you, from the last few weeks. You all have been inspiring me to write again, which has greatly cheered me up from my depression (bi-polar). I'll scan it tomorrow before I start studying (last minute) for my finals x_X.
I now realize the benefits of actually "risking" your work being stolen by posting it---or at least by asking questions--constructive criticism helps me get better at something. That's why I think I'm going to post my fan fic on deviant art too, since I've only gotten comments from you, r2, and orchid. :]
Speaking of which, I'm on my epilogue now. 
I just wanted to be clear that I'm not trying to convince you to do something you don't want to, that's all. I don't want you to think I'm pushy but rather more encouraging. I'm glad to have met you and I hate losing new friends because I didn't express myself right (it's happened).
It's heart warming to know that we've all helped and inspired you.

I'm not trying to diminish what you're going through when I say that I think we all can relate. We've all been there. If you're up for it, I'm more than happy to add whatever pointers I can to help, though I'm no expert. Maybe some of the others here can offer advice too. If it makes you feel better, I can upload my Cullen art I've been working on lately. I'm struggling with the angle of my subjects and making everything the right proportions at the right angles. Dynamic anatomy sucks and it's even worse when it's under layers of cloth and plates.

I do a looooot of erasing.
I have yet to read your fic. Not because I don't want to but I've been so busy preparing for a move that I just don't have time unless I halt writing on my own stuff. But as soon as something is done and out of my way, I'll check it out.

Edit: I can't recall. Do you mean when Meredith talks to him about saving the mages? Or after that? Because I never got the end where Hawke became Viscount. As a warrior, I sided with the mages and fled. As a rogue, I sided with the Templars but had accepted Isabela's offer to sail away with Fenris in tow. I have yet to reach the end as a mage but I feel too much like a hypocrite to side with the Templars, being a mage myself.
Modifié par SamaraDraven, 23 avril 2012 - 05:05 .