Lotion Soronnar wrote...
SpiffySquee wrote...
My argument was not only completely hand-waved, but done so in a condescending way. People keep saying that he makes good points despite the way he presents them. It is true that the points are valid or not regardless of the presentation, but that does not mean presentation is irrelevant. When trying to convince someone of your views, HOW you present them is just as important as what you present.
Due, you do that ALL THE TIME.
You accuse him of being mean and condesending and you're doign the exact same thing. And do a far worse job of hiding it b.t.w.
Sentances like "his arguments make as much sense as a manatie attempting to ski" ... you throw cheap insults at him constantly and come off far more emoptional.
No offense, but if we're talking about presentation, he wins by a Everest avalanche.
Whenever Squee insulted Smudboy, he often promptly backtracked and clarified that his disagreement is no reflection on Smudboy's general intelligence and personality. In fact, he complemented him several times. He repeatedly said that his only problem with smudboy was his arguements.
From what I saw, Smudboy just said that Squees' disagreement with him proves he's an idiot.
When Squee sort of agrees with Smudboy, he says something like "I don't agree with you, but I can see why you'd think that way and I have no probems with your arguement" or something like that.
When Smudboy agrees with Squee, he sarcastically says something like "my, an intelligent point. How unexpected, considering the rest of the drivel you've been spouting."
Smudboy is simply more patronizing, condescending, and all out rude. His veneer of cultured discussion just exacerbates the patronization. Squee at least pretends to respect his opponent. Smudboy just spits on him.
But yeah, Squee's constant stuttering didn't help his argument any.
Nashiktal wrote...
Detailed exposition? No. But it feels rather pointless to throw a traitor in their without knowing why he turned traitor. If not knowing why, then who he worked for. If not who he worked for, than at least why he wanted to kill shep, you know they guy he worked two years and twelve days to patch together.
It just feels silly, if they wanted to make miranda feel ruthless they could have done so with far less work.
We know enough. We know it was for money. What more do we need?
I'm not saying it would have hurt to explore more, but it still works as it is. Wilson is a slimy bald guy who sells you out. He's a minor character who exists just to give the opening a sense of danger and uncertainty and to put the resurrection thing behind you (almost everyone and everything involved is destroyed). Further exploration isn't needed. Again, not saying it would have hurt, but the whole thing Smudboy complains about is that these small gaps aren't just missed opportunities, but actually break the story. In short, that they're mandatory. They aren't, and they don't. It works just fine without taking time to explore Wilson's psychology and childhood or something. The hints we get are enough.
Modifié par The Interloper, 05 septembre 2011 - 04:43 .




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