111987 wrote...
So now the Bioware writers didn't invest any thought or feelings into their writing? Good lord, how am I supposed to debate people when THAT is really their argument?
There are INSTANCES of bad/lazy writing. Every writer in the history of the world has had these instances; it's part of being a flawed human. Charcterizing the writers themselves, in their entirety, as lazy is just crazy.
Instances?
The plot of the game is lazy writing, to the point where the plot only makes sense if you observe it in backwards fashion.
The collectors have a base we can blow up using a small team of specialists, Good thing we had the foresight to assemble a team even though we didn't know what waited beyond the Omega 4 relay.
I'm going on a quest to assemble a team of specialists so i can blow up that base i don't know about yet but will be there.
I'm the illusive man I'm gonna spend billions reviving Shepard and countless millions on constructing the SR2 so he/she can find a small team of specialists though the Omega 4 relay and blow of the base we have no idea exist yet.
Alright I'll admit it doesn't make that much sense in reverse but it still makes a whole lot of more sense than going forwards... let's try.
Hi I'm the illusive man : "Humanity is in peril, countless colonies have just dissapeared so I'm gonna revive a dead hero".
Servant : "Ehh mr illusive can i ask..why?"
Illusive man :" Ahem want?"
Servant :"Sure Shepard is a great hero and all that but why spend all these resources on reviving him/her.. i mean what does Shepard bring to the table?"
Illusive man "Well Shepard destroyed a reaper and.."
Servant "And?"
Illusive man : "hmmm shut up okay?... now moving on".
Servant :"okay".
Illusive man :" Now after reviving Shepard I'm gonna send him on a quest to find a bunch of specialists".
Servant :"Okay.. ehh why?".
Illusive man :"Why what?".
Servant :"How will a group of specialists help you discover why the collectors are attacking colonies.. you know satellites and probes are very effective on gathering such information?"
Illusive man :"I don't know.. just because."
Servant :"Okay".
Illusive man : "And then.. get this I'm gonna send Shepard into a trap on a stranded collector ship!"
Servant :"Ohh how dastardly of you sir... why?"
Illusive man :"I like toying around with my investments.. that's what got me so far".
Servant :"I see..."
Illusive man :" And then I'm gonna send Shepard to a 37 million years old reaper so he/she can fetch a Mcguffin that will allow access to the galactic core where they will find a base Shepard can infiltrate and blow up using his/her bunch of specialists that i had the foresight to put him/her on a quest to pick up even though i don't at this moment have any idea what will happen.. it's just screwy like that".
Servant : "Ehh okay i see".