111987 wrote...
They lured Shepard to a series of platforms suspended like a hundred or more feet in the air, where he would have been trapped without EDI. It was a great trap that was foiled by unforseeable circumstances.
Not a great trap at all. Where were all the collectors? Why wasn't the path back bloced by en entire devision or a blockade? Why wasn't the shuttle blown up? Why allow Shep to get in that deep (and to the central terminal) in the firt place?
Handing a character the idiot ball doesn't work in a serious story. If it's a parody or comedy, sure. But not in a serious story.




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