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This was written by Skyblade012. I thought I might bring it back. I have added a little information. I may update it with more information as we go on.

[quote]Information leaked to use by Cerberus indicates that Shepard is alive.  As welcome as this news is, it is disturbing that Shepard would be working with Cerberus.  Our most trusted agent alongside one of our most cunning enemies.  The Salarians suggest we downplay this matter, and I concur.[/quote]

[quote]The matter was confirmed earlier today.  Shepard arrived on a Cerberus frigate, a redesigned and improved version of Shepard's original Normandy.  Our security is weaker than we thought, even our most guarded co-development projects have been infiltrated.  Cerberus has proven its ability to deceive and manipulate yet again.  We cannot afford to share our plans or information with Shepard.  The Reapers are the worst threat we could have imagined, but we cannot risk Cerberus learning what we are planning to counter them.[/quote]

[quote]Commander Shepard came by to meet us alongside Anderson. Thankfully Udina was absent from the meeting, despite the opinion of Councilor Tevos. Shepard had interesting information concerning the attacks on human colonies in the Terminus.  Apparently the Collectors are behind the attacks, and Shepard and Cerberus suspect that they are working for the Reapers.  Anderson agrees, but, per our previous agreements, we cannot let Shepard, know this. If this information is true, it is most disturbing. We were hoping to have more time to prepare before the Reapers could begin taking active steps again.  Still, it could be misinformation leaked by Cerberus yet again, though we doubt they are behind the attacks, given the cost of human lives involved. Shepard was unhappy with our reaction, of course.  Though the commander accepted a reinstatement to Spectre status, Anderson confirmed for us that Shepard felt betrayed by the lack of faith we displayed.  Anderson also said the "air quotes" might have been going too far, we don't want to alienate Shepard or appear so oblivious that Shepard, and through Shepard, Cerberus, might catch on.  Regardless, the safety of the galaxy comes before any one individual.  Even after all the Normandy crew did for us.  I only hope we can correct Shepard's interpretation after Shepard's work with Cerberus ends.[/quote]

[quote]Despite the risks, the Council has agreed to leak the schematics for the Thanix Magnetic-Hydrodynamic cannon to former C-Sec agent Garrus Vakarian. Despite the assurance of Cerberus getting their hands on this weapon, we need to do what we can to outfit Shepard against these threats.[/quote]

[quote]The information Commander Shepard provided has been confirmed.  An Alliance operative, and former member of the Normandy crew, was stationed on Horizon when the Collector's attacked.  Shepard and the new crew, was able to drive the Collectors away before the colony was entirely abducted.  The information on the seeker swarms is most disturbing, and we will have to develop counters right away (possibility to extract the information from Cerberus?  No, too risky, not enough resources in that organization, might tip our hand).  But the fact that the GARDIAN lasers were enough to repel the ship is comforting.  We will set up more automatics for such systems.  Even if the swarms paralyze the gunnery officers, we might be able to keep the lasers active.[/quote]
After Horizon you will hear a story about how other species are looking to their own borders for security. The Turian Hierarchy is bolstering their crew complements, and the Salarian STG is reportedly investigating the colony attacks.
[quote]Whatever the reasons may be, the constant attacks on human colonies have provided us an excellent excuse to accelerate our plans against the Reapers. We can now build fleets and defenses much more publicly, with the justification that we must protect our colonies from attacks.  We still cannot go fully public with it as long as the only targets are human colonies, but we can still instigate investigations and increase recruitment.  And the Alliance can do even more, and we will help.[/quote]

[quote]The Salarians have suggested moving the Alliance into position as galactic peacekeepers, alongside the Turians. They already have a great deal of ships patrolling Citadel space, and have taken huge steps forward in roles such as C-Sec as well.  This would let us funnel more resources to the Alliance to increase our buildup of vessels to help combat the Reapers, without appearing to be actively militarizing, which could incite public panic and possibly spark the Terminus Systems against us. But there is still a lot of concern about humanity's swift rise to power already, and taking that step might shift things against them.  We can ill afford such instability, especially with criminal idiots like Joram Talid actively running as anti-human.  For now, we will help fund the Alliance to get their ships up to the number allowed them as council members under the Treaty of Farixen, and we will discuss the situation again once they reach that point.[/quote]

[quote]The Normandy forwarded us information acquired from a Cerberus agent who had been captured by Eclipse mercenaries.  This may be an indication that Shepard still realizes the danger Cerberus poses to the galaxy, or it may be another attempt by Cerberus to manipulate us. Regardless, we still hope that once the Normandy completes her mission, we might be able to convince Shepard to rejoin us.[/quote]

[quote]The Normandy apparently encountered the Collectors again.  A false distress signal sent by the Collectors indicated that a destroyed Turian patrol crippled the ship, at least temporarily.  The council has decided to allow the Normandy to proceed into the trap, to conceal from Cerberus the fact that they failed to properly prevent the signal from reaching us.  If Cerberus can be made to underestimate us, it will be most welcome.  The Normandy succeeded in infiltrating and escaping from the Collector vessel.  What information was extracted is unknown, but
hopefully it will help facilitate Shepard's safe journey through the Omega 4 relay.[/quote]

[quote]Colonial countermeasures still insufficient.  The Alliance's New Canton colony was abducted by the Collectors. Despite a delay when their efforts at Horizon were stymied, the attacks are increasing in frequency.  We still have no knowledge of what the Collectors are after.  Soon, we may have to take official notice of the situation.[/quote]

[quote]Cerberus crews have taken our leaked information from the Alliance's survey of the Great Rift on Klendagon and backtracked it to the weapon that caused it and the Reaper that the weapon was
targeting. This gives us even more confirmation that the Reaper threat was not isolated to Sovereign.  The Normandy successfully boarded the Reaper shell, and destroyed it.[/quote]

[quote]The Salarian STG confirmed that the Normandy has passed through the Omega 4 relay.  In all likelihood, the ship is now vaporized on the other end.  But the Normandy has done the impossible before.  We will wait and hope for as long as we can for her return.  But we cannot wait long.  If the Normandy is unsuccessful, we must take action immediately. If the Reapers are on the move, even through agents, then our time is more precious than we thought.  The fleet is coming, and we must be prepared.[/quote]


What do you all think? Wouldn't this be interesting if this was actually going on behind closed doors in ME2? I hope that we'll get to see something like this concerning the original Council in ME3.

Modifié par UpDownLeftRight, 31 août 2011 - 07:46 .


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wetnasty

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I see no air quotes

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I like it. I was pretty annoyed with the Counciler Valern in my playthrough before, but seeing this made me rethink my opinion towards him (if it *is* actually what was going on in his head. I might even forgive his air-quote sooner than I thought.)

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I kinda hope someone at Bioware will see this and add them in as like a Shadow Broker esque dossier. Or maybe we'll visit his private estate on Palaven and find his records.

It'd just be a nice touch to make him seem like less of a complete ****.

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Haha, I agree, this would not only make the council seem far less incompetent, but would make the story itself feel more, well, intelligent in that regard, as well as give the player some feeling that maybe their choice to save the council wasn't a total waste of lives and ships.

That reminds me, I've always wondered which means more deaths in total, saving the Ascension at the cost of several human ships, or losing only the Ascension. Sure the Ascension is bigger and would have a larger crew, but it's just one ship compared to several smaller ones. Which had more people total I wonder...?

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Well written behind the scenes journal and very plausible. Despite everyone and their dog blasting the council for being blind or plain stupid this is how politics works. Public front says one thing, in private is another matter.

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nicely done however there is lacking a certain arrogance

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Zandercode wrote...

Haha, I agree, this would not only make the council seem far less incompetent, but would make the story itself feel more, well, intelligent in that regard, as well as give the player some feeling that maybe their choice to save the council wasn't a total waste of lives and ships.

That reminds me, I've always wondered which means more deaths in total, saving the Ascension at the cost of several human ships, or losing only the Ascension. Sure the Ascension is bigger and would have a larger crew, but it's just one ship compared to several smaller ones. Which had more people total I wonder...?

The Alliance loses 8 cruisers if you save the Ascension, a ship which has a crew of over 9000. Don't know how many humans were killed, though.

If you let the Ascension die, you'll lose 10000 plus x, as the Alliance will still lose ships to Sovereign.

PS: I really like the idea and would like the Council not to look completely incompetent.

Edit: Not saving the Ascension also means more destroyed turians, because you don't assist them either. Even bigger casualties.

Modifié par Darkelefantos1, 30 août 2011 - 02:53 .


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This is good...

I really hope the council is doing something like this because the level of incompetence they displayed in 1 and 2 is likely to doom the galaxy if genuine. Well except for Shepard's intervention obviously.

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LPPrince

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I like this quite a bit.

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I really like this as an explanation for the ridiculous comments the council made in ME2. I hope it turns out like this in ME3, I'd hate to think the galaxy was being run by the kind of people they seem to be.

Modifié par Slowtch, 30 août 2011 - 03:13 .


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Kyria Nyriese

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Very interesting, thought it was done well. It definitely gives a new perspective on the way the council reacts in ME2.

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This would be awesome! I hadn't thought it this way, and it really makes sense. This would make the Council a lot less stupid than many of us think they are.

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Except the Council was full of s*** before Shepard even worked with Cerberus. The turian Councilor clearly never cared much for Shepard, or humans in general for that matter.

- We won't be dragged into a conflict over a few dozen human colonies, or something to that effect. My paragon still saved them and will do his best to work with them.

Modifié par RocketManSR2, 30 août 2011 - 04:25 .


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maxpowers2525 wrote...

nicely done however there is lacking a certain arrogance

Truly well written,but yes,it's lacking that arrogance.

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LPPrince

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Anyone ever wonder if maybe his arrogance was an act to fuel Shepard's fire?

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" Information leaked to use by Cerberus indicates that Shepard is alive. As welcome as this news is, it is disturbing that Shepard would be working with Cerberus."

It's not disturbing I'm a zombie? Wow way to go girl only worried I may be a terrorist what if I was brainwashed and held against my will because you didn't want to waste the man power looking for me?Wow...

"The Reapers are the worst threat we could have imagined, but we cannot risk Cerberus learning what we are planning to counter them."

At least they've been working on it. Fooled me I figured they wanted to keep pretending everything was fine.


"Even after all the Normandy crew did for us. I only hope we can correct Shepard's interpretation after Shepard's work with Cerberus ends."

Wow they actually don't have amnesia that's a start but like the VS they've got alot of ground to make up for. Personally the Asari is the most reasonable of the three for me I don't have many bad feelings towards her I know she's always made to walk the line and be the negotiator but the Turian....he's really got to try hard.

"A false distress signal sent by the Collectors indicated that a destroyed Turian patrol crippled the ship, at least temporarily. The council has decided to allow the Normandy to proceed into the trap,"

This is interesting...they knew what was happening and pulled a Churchill sitting on the info so the enemy doesn't catch on to the fact they're listening. To me being on the receiving end its nearly as bad as TIM faking the whole thing just to see what shep could do.

Overall it really sounds like the Asari it's well written and if BW allowed such info to be picked up by shep I would really like that so I could see their view. Right now I'm feeling alienated by them and I'm disappointed and upset with them not nearly as bad as I'm tossing daggers at the VS but I'm still not all positive about them right now.

I would like to be an official spector as opposed to the name in only one I am now. I liked working for them and then volunteering for the Alliance.

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RocketManSR2 wrote...

Except the Council was full of s*** before Shepard even worked with Cerberus. The turian Councilor clearly never cared much for Shepard, or humans in general for that matter.

- We won't be dragged into a conflict over a few dozen human colonies, or something to that effect. My paragon still saved them and will do his best to work with them.


He never cared because Shepard hadn't done anything yet. At the end of the first game you see a change of attitude, and the fact that they allowed the alliance to join them really proves it

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I love this idea. Really gives another dimension to the otherise one note Coucillor.
Basically, 

Harry Potter <------> Professor Snape
Shepard <------> Councillor Velarn

Maybe he would even be killed somehow and we'd discover his diary or records after the fact and Shepard has a little cry. In the end it turns out the Asari Councillor was the most uselss of them all going so far as to cut down military spending and claim the whole Reaper business is a joke.  Even better if Velarn turns out to be a former military turian who worked with deep intelligence operatives and is used to keeping mum about plans against an unknown enemy.

Although like Snape and as the charecter has been written, he should be a bit more arrogant as other's said.
"I know Shepard's angry at me know but soon he will understand and see how I saved the galaxy! Ha! Ha!"

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Destroy Raiden wrote...

" Information leaked to use by Cerberus indicates that Shepard is alive. As welcome as this news is, it is disturbing that Shepard would be working with Cerberus."

It's not disturbing I'm a zombie? Wow way to go girl only worried I may be a terrorist what if I was brainwashed and held against my will because you didn't want to waste the man power looking for me?Wow...

"The Reapers are the worst threat we could have imagined, but we cannot risk Cerberus learning what we are planning to counter them."

At least they've been working on it. Fooled me I figured they wanted to keep pretending everything was fine.


"Even after all the Normandy crew did for us. I only hope we can correct Shepard's interpretation after Shepard's work with Cerberus ends."

Wow they actually don't have amnesia that's a start but like the VS they've got alot of ground to make up for. Personally the Asari is the most reasonable of the three for me I don't have many bad feelings towards her I know she's always made to walk the line and be the negotiator but the Turian....he's really got to try hard.

"A false distress signal sent by the Collectors indicated that a destroyed Turian patrol crippled the ship, at least temporarily. The council has decided to allow the Normandy to proceed into the trap,"

This is interesting...they knew what was happening and pulled a Churchill sitting on the info so the enemy doesn't catch on to the fact they're listening. To me being on the receiving end its nearly as bad as TIM faking the whole thing just to see what shep could do.

Overall it really sounds like the Asari it's well written and if BW allowed such info to be picked up by shep I would really like that so I could see their view. Right now I'm feeling alienated by them and I'm disappointed and upset with them not nearly as bad as I'm tossing daggers at the VS but I'm still not all positive about them right now.

I would like to be an official spector as opposed to the name in only one I am now. I liked working for them and then volunteering for the Alliance.



Uhh, you know Valern is the turian, right?

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He's nothing more than bits of carapace and intestine floating about in space because I told Hackett and the others to concentrate on Sovereign.

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If all that is true I might just stop thinking the Council are a bunch of complacent idiots.

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Thank you for all the comments. I really hope that the council was doing some of these things in ME2. There's only one way to find out!

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wow I like that. Would give the whole thing a different perspective.... like the that the Council is competent and gets things done.

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RocketManSR2 wrote...

Except the Council was full of s*** before Shepard even worked with Cerberus. The turian Councilor clearly never cared much for Shepard, or humans in general for that matter.

- We won't be dragged into a conflict over a few dozen human colonies, or something to that effect. My paragon still saved them and will do his best to work with them.


Yup, he is not a fan of humans and why should he be, the other races are correct, humans are new comers that are pushy as all get out.

They were also correct in the comment about not being dragged into a conflict with the batarians.   One can argue that the council is not correct in how they handled things for sure but it is not unrealisitc at all to have them say one thing in public while doing all sorts of other stuff behind the scenes.