[quote]Tootles FTW wrote...
[quote]Golden Owl wrote...
[quote]Tootles FTW wrote...
As far as ME LI turn-offs:
I love Thane, but his solipsism/flashbacks are cringe-inducing, mostly because I hate how they're implemented. I get that Bioware wants us to know what he's "seeing", but I
despise the overly flowery language. I'm perfectly fine that he was married before, it's really just the constant "sunset colored eyes" references that drive the nail in...if they just removed the overly romanticized verbage it would make it a million times better (IMO, of course).
Dead wife, estranged son, space cancer? - Fine, whatever. Kodak memory with poetic sensibilites? - F* that, you've gone too far!
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...I like the expressive language myself and love what it adds to his character...as for the flashing memory thingie though, I concur, more so for the way BW implemented the fast flash pics of his face though, I feel like I'm on the verge of having a fit....

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No sad faces!! I love Thane, and my 2nd FemShep is all his! Maybe it's because I have an aversion to poetry? It's one thing to read flowery descriptions in a novel, and another to have someone use them in a sentence in a completely non-ironic fashion. I had a guy try to woo me by saying my eyes were "the color of beautiful watermelon seeds" (omgkillmenow) and I about died with laughter, then out of embarassment.
Also, Feron doesn't seem to have the same issue as Thane where he compulsively goes into flashbacks. I expected it when you asked him about the torture he endured, but he just...responded normally. [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/uncertain.png[/smilie]...*little tear trickles from corner of my eye*....

You have water melon seed eyes huh?...

....yeah it doesn't really work....

...just makes them sound kind of leaky and wet....

....he seriously needs to work on his style, poor dude...

...And yes an end to Thane's too often flash backs would be much appreciated....take notes from Feron's book.