If you need a review of Dragon Age II just go to link below:
This is my first commentary ever. And remember. I am not a native speaker so I sound a little strange. View and comment please.
Dragon Age II Review
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netfrik
, oct. 11 2011 09:19
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Posté 11 octobre 2011 - 09:19
netfrik
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Hi guys!
If you need a review of Dragon Age II just go to link below:
This is my first commentary ever. And remember. I am not a native speaker so I sound a little strange. View and comment please.
If you need a review of Dragon Age II just go to link below:
This is my first commentary ever. And remember. I am not a native speaker so I sound a little strange. View and comment please.
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#2
Posté 14 octobre 2011 - 01:19
Chiramu
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I loaded it on youtube and you're talking a bit too much about the menu. Perhaps it'll be a good idea to watch some(or a lot) of other video reviews. AngryJoe seems like a very popular reviewer, but also IGN has decent reviews and Gametrailers(my fav) has very good reviews.
I think you just need to do some more research about how to plan and cut your review and how to write you dialogue for the review. It just needs more planning.
Your voice isn't strange
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I think you just need to do some more research about how to plan and cut your review and how to write you dialogue for the review. It just needs more planning.
Your voice isn't strange
.
