DiebytheSword wrote...
While this is absolutely true, and something we agree on, it is patently false to say that we have no impact from deaths outside of the close circle. In the end it is empathy and identification that make the death impactful.
True enough, but I never stated that would have no impact, but the impact will always be less compared to actually experiencing seven million deaths. That's what the child in the vent is meant to represent; he is a particular instance of death/trauma intended to indicate to us what is actually happening across Earth. That is true with respect to real life. In the case of fiction, merely hearing that a person died is far less likely to provoke an emotional response since 1) it's not real and 2) we have had no connection to the event, aside from having heard that it happened. In that sense, the child in the vent is even more critical to illustrate the suffering, since this is a fictional tale and we need to breach that barrier.
There are all kinds of tragedies which occur in day to day life. It's always possible to feel empathy when we hear about these things on the news. What I find atypical is the idea that someone will experience an equal amount of pain/suffering at large-scale death they are far removed from compared to large-scale death close to home. In the first case, the only "reminder" of this is the news. In the second case, they experience the actual effects/consequences in their day to day life, as they witness people around them experiencing this tragedy.
These things are obviously also needed for freindship; so you are inciting a trauma by killing off someone the observer has identified with and empathized with, through several struggles. Through that same method, it is impossible to discount the inner child in each of us that might be hiding in that vent if 2km tall alien ships came to melt you into past or disintegrate you outright. I can Identify because I was once his size. I was once at the same scope of wonder, and terror, in the world. I can empathize with him because he was obviously sans his parents during this. This too creates more identity.
All true, accepting the implication that seeing/speaking to the child makes that trauma even worse compared to simply hearing about it through a second party. That's my essential point: not that large-scale death cannot trigger emotion, but that tragedy is always made more severe when we are forced into physical contact with it.
I can completely see how horrifying the current event is without, say, Garrus being incinerated on the ramp of the Normandy. Yes I am extending a bit, but I am also pointing out that sometimes close deaths make no sense for the sake of the story. For all the clamoring over how it makes sense to have death, we never hear about death that makes sense.
Certainly depending on the story, death presents us more or less satisfaction, depending on how a character "goes out". What I (personally) am against, from a realist stand point, is the idea that a writer shouldn't even consider killing a character, particularly when they have chosen a war of galactic genocide as the backdrop against which the events of the story must occur. If they never wanted to consider character death (even as an option), they should not have chosen that as the setting of their story.
If the Character dies in a meaningful way, I might be satisfied with the emotional pull, but I also might be less apt to enjoy what follows. Another good example might be Sirius Black in Harry Potter, my wife nearly dropped the series after the character died. It seemed to snuff out the last bit of hope for Harry's happiness. I felt the death was actually forced in that scene, there were plenty of other opportunities later on, in fact, ones that made far more sense defending Hogwarts, I'll omit the names for the sake of movie only people. Those deaths were meaningful and impactful.
In the case of Sirius, I would agree that his death certainly may not have felt satisfying for the reader, however I would argue that it was a very necessary element of character/plot development, given how it serves as a focal point for Harry to completely go crazy, as well as for Dumbledore to realize the necessity of explaining the prophecy, at long last. In a sense, Sirius' death isn't atypical in a coming of age story, where the protagonist is expected to overcome the loss of mentors/protectors who serve as a security blanket, similar to Obi-Wan Kenobi in Star Wars or Gorion in Baldur's Gate.
Modifié par Il Divo, 25 octobre 2011 - 11:48 .