FluffyScarf wrote...
I wonder what the draft for ME 1 read like. It was probably just as bad, if not worse than 3.
Shepard goes to planet; think beginning of b-movie, lots of obscure camera angles and 'homages'
Shepard and crew of ship (USS Berlin Wall? Something to that effect) go to political hub; shark-jumping politician and zany, unsure aliens; Shepard digs up intel on bad guy and becomes savior while gaining party members (let's do a krogan [the klingon guys, kind of like frogs]) and a turian [the bird people] and maybe a girl with chicken legs)
USS Berlin Wall (or whatever) goes to various worlds following bad guys on wild goose chase; reaches fourth world (Vector? Vir? Something that starts with a 'V'; 'V' is an ominous letter) and sacrifices someone (human, preferrably; there are a lot of those) and then discovers Big Revelation (bad guy is working for another bad guy, perhaps an organization, vast and all-powerful)
Shepard and Berlin Wall survivors go to new world, find out more about bad guys
Shepard fights bad guy at political hub; wins (please insert a cheesy grin)
Modifié par JeffZero, 08 novembre 2011 - 12:57 .