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LiveLoveThaneKrios wrote...

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twilight seems to be incredibly hated round here, it often gets a bashing in random threads quite randomly lol. Yes its overhyped as a piece of writing but plenty of people love it and i think it serves as a good bit of fluffyness when in the mood for it, much like a disney etc...
Anyway, a private group might be your best bet lol, im sure more people would join than admit to being a fan in here :P

Haha Yes. Like I said before, I just made the thread for people who Liked the movie.
I didn't expect everyone too bash it, and that will probably be the reason this gets a lockdown.
As also as I stated, this wasn't the smartest idea too make a thread here on this site.
I'd probably get a better chance with a group which I might make, and make it private.
Or just do a Facebook fan page. Haha
And I don't think you can remove threads.


no need to defend your actions to me, i never showed dislike for the movies/books. Just suggesting a group so you can avoid the usual 'i hate this therefore it must be crap so i must criticize it because ive never heard of the word subjective' malarky.

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EternalAmbiguity wrote...

I like it because I take it as an action/slice of life story; I'm not looking for deep meanings. I'm reading/watching purely for enjoyment. It doesn't particularly relate to me, I don't take much from it, and there are some valid criticisms, but you know what? If one were to stop over-analyzing the story and just read to read (same as someone watching to watch--insert action movie of choice here) it's not bad at all. And, I think it has the best version of werewolves that I've seen recently (Huge creatures, not just a mean wolf).


It's kind of hard to "stop over-analyzing" when Meyer opens her prologue in the first Twilight novel with:

"I stared without breathing across the long room, into the dark eyes of the hunter, and he looked pleasently back at me."

I'm not sure how Bella expects to breathe across a long room and into the eyes of the hunter here. Honestly, this woman is bad. Bad, bad, bad, bad. I know every author has strengths and weaknesses. Some authors have excellent prose that delivers the exact amount of words and their proper usage to create a powerful effect, some authors are capable of creating brilliant stories with three dimensional characters, and others are good at creating tangible worlds a reader can get lost in. Rarely do authors manage to possess all three, and I can forgive that, honestly, I can. But Meyer doesn't manage to pull off either of the three.

Her prose is subpar. She uses unnecessary vocabulary to make herself seem smarter than she is, which ultimately leads to that awkward moment when you realize that Bella is only 17 and instead of saying that Forks was a small town she ends up saying contrived things like Forks is "inconsequential." Meyer tries to bank on the idea that Bella is really smart (debatable) to get away with it, but I highly, highly doubt that even the smartest 17 year old girl thinks in complex vocabulary and needlessly flowery phrasing. It's impractical. Meyer's sentence structure is also painfully awkward. Take this as an example:

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Furthermore, as far as her writing being story driven; it isn't. Her books are a meandering mess of self-fulfillment that lack cohesion in the plot department. The first Twilight novel literally lacks a plot (i.e. James, Victoria, and Laurent) until past the 400th page. The previous 400 or so pages are just Bella spending sentences and sentences describing needless things that do nothing for imagery, Bella complaining, a lot of "He loves, he loves me not!" back and forth, and pages and pages of Bella describing Edward's "perfect angel face", his "liquid topaz eyes", his growl, his veins, his "marble chest", his "sweet breath", his golden brown hair, etc. It's like Meyer forgot she was writing a novel and then about 3/4th of the way in she remembered suddenly that she had to actually have a plot, then threw in the most ridiculous situation she could possibly come up with (I won't even get into how stupid the plan was for Bella to return to Phoenix).

Her characters and world are probably the absolute worst part of her writing. Her characters constantly change personality or lack any personality at all, their powers are hilariously implemented plot devices (Alice can see the future, UNTIL SUDDENLY NOT!), her protagonist is painfully anti-feminist and a bad hero in general regardless of her gender, Edward is unintentionally abusive, etc. Her world also lacks any kind of cohesion when it comes to setting rules and boundaries. The most important part of fantasy fiction isn't figuring out what your characters CAN do, it's figuring out what they CAN'T do. You have to limit them and you have to keep to the rules so that there is no breaking of the suspension of disbelief. Meyer violates her own rules without a second thought (Bella's pregnancy being the most obvious example) and it really shatters what little credibility her world has. She is also terrible with basic research; this is the same women who originally placed the entire country of Brazil on the wrong side of South America in Breaking Dawn (now corrected). It's called "Google" and it takes about five seconds to locate a map of South America.

I could go on and on for pages, but I think I've written enough. My general point is that it's not "over-analyzing" when Stephenie Meyer is a legitimately bad author and her novels are lauded as being the second coming of Anne Rice. You can't expect us not to analyze every word of her novels when we've been told, before reading them, how absolutely wonderful they are, by other readers and critics alike. It comes with the territory of being a famous author; your work is up for scrutiny. My ultimate question, however, is: where the hell is her editor? It's like her editor doesn't even exist considering the kind of literary murder she gets away with.

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^ That should have been on the first page of this thread. Those are valid reasons not to like the series...and I can appreciate them. You get kudos for actually thinking about it and writing out your response.

A couple things, though:

On the vocabulary, that isn't unnecessarily complex at all. I was using words like "inconsequential" when I was younger than seventeen. So it's very plausible to me that she could think in such language (I remember my little sister being about twelve and asking our mother "what's Caucasian mean?" because she read it in a book. Twelve).

Note what I said about it being slice-of-life storytelling. A slice-of-life story doesn't NEED a plot--at all.

When you say that Alice can't see the future, are you talking about the werewolves? How is that invalid? And how exactly is Edward abusive?

And how is the pregnancy breaking her rules? Does she say somewhere before in the previous novels that it's impossible? Even if she did, there have been plenty of novels that have said something was impossible, often been built around the premise of it being impossible, but it's suddenly found out that it IS possible. What rule does this break?

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EternalAmbiguity wrote...

^ That should have been on the first page of this thread. Those are valid reasons not to like the series...and I can appreciate them. You get kudos for actually thinking about it and writing out your response.


Glad I could get a logical response from my post. Thanks for that! :]

On the vocabulary, that isn't unnecessarily complex at all. I was using words like "inconsequential" when I was younger than seventeen. So it's very plausible to me that she could think in such language (I remember my little sister being about twelve and asking our mother "what's Caucasian mean?" because she read it in a book. Twelve).


I don't know. I don't really buy Bella as a character. My problem isn't her using big words once in a while, it's her using them at nearly every single possible moment. I always found it ironic that Meyer tries to pass Edward off as being "old-timey" and speaking like if he was from another era, yet his speech is perfectly normal and modern and Bella talks in her own head like she just fell out of a timewarp from the Victorian Era. I feel like Meyer really damages Bella as a character here; smart as she may try to portray her (and again, that's highly debatable), I just don't see her as a real character or a proper narrator for her age and the setting of the story. Even if I could forgive her use of needlessly "big" words, I can't get over her use of flowery sentences. Her thought process just comes off as contrived and incredibly out of place when you combine both of those problems.

Mind you, Bella's narration is the least of my issues with her as a character.

Note what I said about it being slice-of-life storytelling. A slice-of-life story doesn't NEED a plot--at all.


I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "slice-of-life story." Mind defining it for me?

When you say that Alice can't see the future, are you talking about the werewolves? How is that invalid? And how exactly is Edward abusive?


Alice's powers only work when Meyer needs to move the plot forward and can't figure out how. For example, Alice could see that Bella had jumped off of the cliff in New Moon but couldn't see that Bella had left the hotel room to go meet up with James in Twilight. In the first case, Meyer uses it because she has no other way of having Edward keep tabs on Bella and can't come up with a logical reason as to why Edward would want to commit suicide. In the second case she ignores Alice's ability because it becomes a hinderence for her writing. It's extremely convinient to have a character who can see the future but only when the author wants her to. It's a really easy way for Meyer to cheat in story telling, and while it's bad in its own right, it's also lazy. A good writer wouldn't need Alice as a plot device to keep the story moving forward.

Her powers are the least offensive in the story though. Bella has a mind shield made of love, which IIRC, is never really explained, but which lets her protect everyone around her. Yet, despite this mind shield, Jasper can affect Bella's mind and change her mood, which Meyer claims happens because Jasper's powers are chemical. My question is: as opposed to what? Okay, let's say I by the idea that Jasper can somehow get around Bella's shield through chemical reactions in her body and by affecting anything about her that isn't really her mind. So why are Jane's abilities not chemical? And why can't Jane hurt Bella if this is actually true? Jane's power is to cause intense pain and pain, if we think about it in the most logical form, relates more or less to the nerves on your body. If Jasper can bypass Bella's mental shield with his "chemical abilities" (whatever that means) then there is no reason that Jane shouldn't be able to as well. The only explanation I can see is if Jane's power is the ability to cause the ILLUSION of pain, but Meyer clearly tells the reader that she actually causes excrutiating physical pain to anyone she wants to.

The absolute biggest proof of Meyer using powers as plot devices to make her story more believable in a "tell-instead-of-show" manner though is Marcus' ability to "sense relationships." Basically, Meyer wasn't the reader to accept by default that Bella and Eward are "in love" and in order to legitimize this, rather than actually showing it, she uses Marcus as a big arrow to tell the reader: "HEY! HEY! YOU! LISTEN! THESE TWO ARE TOTALLY IN LOVE BECAUSE HIS POWERS SAY SO!" 

More or less, it's obvious she makes up these powers as she goes along and doesn't give them much thought. She's relying on the ridiculous abilities of her vampires to push the story forward instead of using dialogue, character interaction, or creative situations. It's lazy on her part. Meyer is very much guilty of telling and never showing, which makes everything about her writing just come of as flat. I'm supposed to believe Edward is perfect simply because Bella tells me so, I'm supposed to believe Bella is smart simply because Meyer tells me, I'm supposed to believe they're in love because Marcus tells me so, etc., etc., etc. She doesn't do much to SHOW me these things.

As far as Edward is concerned:

He stalks Bella. He watches her sleep at night, follows her everywhere she goes, and keeps her under very tight control. Mind you, Bella is to blame too for letting it happen, but Edward is kind of an enormous jerk. He threatens Bella when she wants to visit Jacob and removes the engine from her truck. Whe she DOES go to see Jacob she's in absolute panic at the thought of Edward stopping her before she reaches the treaty line, and that's not exactly a good reaction for our heroine to be having for her boyfriend, is it? Edward also refuses almost vehemently to allow her to make any choices whatsoever; he doesn't want her to become a vampire and he even further wants to dictate whether she gives birth to Renesmee or not. But the pinnacle of his abussiveness comes when he basically leaves Bella behind in New Moon under some idea of "good intentions." He basically abandons her and leaves her psychologically broken. No matter how much Meyer tells the reader that he's perfect, Edward just isn't. 

I don't think Meyer meant to write him as intentionally abusive; he just comes off that way.

And how is the pregnancy breaking her rules? Does she say somewhere before in the previous novels that it's impossible? Even if she did, there have been plenty of novels that have said something was impossible, often been built around the premise of it being impossible, but it's suddenly found out that it IS possible. What rule does this break?


Her vampires are frozen the moment they get turned. They can't age or change whatsoever, so I'm not entirely sure of why she thinks she can get away with making Bella pregnant when she already stated this to be true. Even if venom could mimic the abilities of sperm, sperm is produced often by the male body, so it doesn't make sense that a vampire that is frozen in time and can't even physically change to show a wrinkle can physically change enough time and time again to create sperm/venom/Random DNA carrier. Then there's the fact that vampire "venom" is also the same one-size-fits-all solution for anything vampire related, including it being used to turn humans into vampires. I don't see why Bella didn't immediately turn into a vampire when she first had sex with Edward. There's more, but this is all that comes immediately to mind.

And yes, usually that's the premise, but remember that Meyer has shown she isn't exactly laying out the plans for a great story arc; she's just making these things up as she goes along. If you're wondering what rule this breaks: it breaks the very basic foundation of fantasy literature and good story telling. 

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1. That's understandable.

2. I don't have a very good definition, but a slice-of-life story is a story that's more about the people involved than an actual plot.

3. Also understandable; I agree that Jasper shouldn't be able to affect her.

4. Keeping Bella away from werewolves who don't have full control over themselves doesn't strike me as abusive. You remember Sam's wife? Her face mauled, ruined for life because she was just a little too close one time. Not wanting her to become a vampire is understandable as he IS one and knows the agony of it. I can see your point about Renesmee (which is a retarded name, by the way). And in New Moon, he does it because Jasper attacked Bella at the sight of blood; he couldn't control himself enough to stop. And they really couldn't send just a couple of them away, could they? People would start asking questions, and the ones left behind might not be able to answer them.

4. Understandable.

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awww people still insist on calling them vampires.... It'd be cute if it wasn't so sad.

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just to be fair, id like to know what you all see in this book? show me your side.


I've never even read the books.  I'm like the other forum poster above, I like going to see the movies with my friend.  It's a good time, she likes staring at shirtless dudes.  I like the attractive women and hey there's some romance/action thrown in there for good measure.  I don't think too much about what makes sense and what doesn't.  If I sat there and tried to criticize and see sense in every single thing out there, then I couldn't enjoy anything then.

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*rolls eyes*

If you want to try, don't ask about it on these forums, because you're not going to get a true opinion, you're just going to get what everyone has heard everyone else say and is regurgitating.


Preach it.

People do this about many things out there that everyone is "supposed" to hate or think is weird.  Take Justin Bieber for instance, most people love to hate him and even want him dead because he makes music that makes
little girls happy.  Same instance with Lady Gaga.  "Oh, brah.  She's copying Madonna and her music isn't even original...it sucks!"

You ask people why and they just run around in circles saying the same things that they heard their friends say.

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My thoughts on Twilight is this. I respect that Ms. Meyer has gained as many fans with her books as it seems she has. Quite a few people close to me love these books, and the films based on them, and I respect that even though it isn't up in my alley. Vampire & Werewolf movies might not always be my cup of tea, but I accept that they are there. People who likes to read the books, and watch the movies, well they have their rights to love them and praise them as much they want. It's a matter of taste and taste is subjective from each individual. I'm tired of the constant bashing of Justin Bieber on every video on Youtube and what not as well. I think it's immature, to go around constantly flaming the poor boy for no good reason. Some people like his music, and others do not. He is not asking of you. People are different in several aspects.

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If I sat there and tried to criticize and see sense in every single thing out there, then I couldn't enjoy anything then.


Pieces of fiction, no matter how much work is put into a universe, will always have missing pieces and holes. It can't be helped - not completely. However, people still need to be vocal if there are genuine issues with a story. One friend of mine in particular is borderline livid about a series I enjoy, and pointed out insights I had missed. I'd rather be aware than ignorant.

awww people still insist on calling them vampires.... It'd be cute if it wasn't so sad.


Well put, Rockworm503. Your verbal prowess and keen intellect continues to surpass mine in every possible facet. Bravo.

I'm tired of the constant bashing of Justin Bieber on every video on Youtube and what not as well. I think it's immature, to go around constantly flaming the poor boy for no good reason.


He's got a great voice. I have absolutely no interest at all in his music, but he does have(some) talent. The internet will always be a brewing cauldron of vitriol, and justin is an easy ingredient for their concoction.

Back on topic... Breaking Dawn was my favorite of the 4 books. The pacing issues that were rampant in the first 3 are lessened significantly.

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Bella complaining, a lot of "He loves, he loves me not!" back and forth, and pages and pages of Bella describing Edward's "perfect angel face", his "liquid topaz eyes", his growl, his veins, his "marble chest", his "sweet breath", his golden brown hair, etc.

The former felt relatively appropriate to me, the latter did not. I got the feeling she was spending more time trying to rile up the ladies, rather than, you know...write something meaningful and avoid superficial nonsense. Didn't bug me to the same extent, but it was irk-worthy.

Their powers are hilariously implemented plot devices.

Pretty much. They're like superheroes, except thirsting for blood and lacking in character beyond the occasional flashback.

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If I sat there and tried to criticize and see sense in every single thing out there, then I couldn't enjoy anything then.


Pieces of fiction, no matter how much work is put into a universe, will always have missing pieces and holes. It can't be helped - not completely. However, people still need to be vocal if there are genuine issues with a story. One friend of mine in particular is borderline livid about a series I enjoy, and pointed out insights I had missed. I'd rather be aware than ignorant.


I agree with you there, Dom...criticism can also help to make something better, afterall...though I doubt it has much effect in the case of Twilight...Oh well.

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EternalAmbiguity wrote...


4. Keeping Bella away from werewolves who don't have full control over themselves doesn't strike me as abusive. You remember Sam's wife? Her face mauled, ruined for life because she was just a little too close one time. Not wanting her to become a vampire is understandable as he IS one and knows the agony of it. I can see your point about Renesmee (which is a retarded name, by the way). And in New Moon, he does it because Jasper attacked Bella at the sight of blood; he couldn't control himself enough to stop. And they really couldn't send just a couple of them away, could they? People would start asking questions, and the ones left behind might not be able to answer them.


The problem is that Edward isn't keeping her away because they're dangerous, he's keeping her away because he's jealous. Ultimately though, his attitude is still too controlling and he doesn't respect Bella's ability to make choices. If Bella wants to see Jacob he shouldn't do much more than advice her against it; I think removing the engine of her car is a little much. I thought that was bad in itself, but he continuously shows no respect for her at all and her decisions.

As for the agony of being a vampire: see, this is where Meyer fails again. I don't question the idea of a vampire having an agonied life, but I question the idea of HER vampires being in pain. She spent so much time trying to make the Cullens "perfect" that she basically goes back to telling us and not showing. She tells us Edward is a tortured soul, but doesn't actually show it to us and in fact goes out of her way to show us the opposite. What's so bad about being a vampire in Meyer's world? You get to live forever, be eternally young, and you don't even have to work very hard to fit within society. The story has examples of vampires that can't control their hunger, but it doesn't seem like it's an enormous problem, to be honest. Even Jasper manages to do it, and once you have it figured out it doesn't seem to be a challenge anymore unless incredible circumstances show up. They don't even have to worry about living during the day because they're not harmed by sunlight. It gets worse when you specifically analyze Edward's case: the Cullens are filthy rich, they can afford pretty much an anything (even a private island).

So to recap:

- Edward has eternal youth.

- Edward has incredible beauty (it's a rule of Meyer's world that most vampires are beautiful).

- Edward can live among normal humans.

- Edward isn't hurt by sunlight.

- Edward has a caring family.

- Edward is filthy rich.

- Edward can have any girl he wants.

- Edward doesn't have any predators; the story makes no mention of vampire or demon hunters that would try to hurt him or his kind. At most, he's at danger from the Volturi, who - let's be honest here - outside of Jane not a single one of them has any real kind of power. The Volturi are nowhere near as strong as the Cullens are if we're going by super powers alone. Edward could read their minds, Alice could predict their next moves, Jasper could probably put them in a chemically induce coma, etc. And aside from Jane, what are the Volturi going to do to the Cullens? Detect their relationships?

- Edward has super powers, including the ability to move at extreme speeds, super strength, and the ability to read minds.

So outside of some teenage angst that he should gotten over nearly a hundred years ago, there really isn't much of a case for him being "tortured" and not wanting Bella to experience the same. His life is pretty 'effin' awesome in every way.  His only real "qualm", Meyer tells us, is that he fears for "Bella's soul," which is a bit of a joke if you sit there and analyze it. Edward is over 100 years old and he's a VAMPIRE, he should know very well at that age and with his situation that the rules of the supernatural in his world are not really defined. If he was really 17 I would understand, but he isn't. He's live over 100 years and doesn't seem to have ever questioned the idea of a soul or an afterlife or seems to have at all changed his beliefs. Most people are completely different in five years time, but Edward isn't. I'm not sure it even makes logical sense for him to believe in a god whatsoever.

There's also no reason they couldn't send a couple of them away. They could have easily explained it, or at least explaining it better than the entire family splitting town and barely giving anyone notice beforehand. Even worse is the fact that they return and NOT ONE CHARACTER ever mentions them leaving ever again or shows any kind of surprise. If Meyer doesn't explain how the Cullens returned without giving good reasons, I think the other vampires leaving is definitely less offensive. You also have to remember that Cullens have been doing this for ages; they're supposed to be masters at keeping themselves hidden. There's no reason they couldn't come up with a good explanation as to why Jasper left.

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Nice post, and not trying to judge your opinion, just saying mine here :)

[quote]FoxHound109 wrote...
The problem is that Edward isn't keeping her away because they're dangerous, he's keeping her away because he's jealous. Ultimately though, his attitude is still too controlling and he doesn't respect Bella's ability to make choices. If Bella wants to see Jacob he shouldn't do much more than advice her against it; I think removing the engine of her car is a little much. I thought that was bad in itself, but he continuously shows no respect for her at all and her decisions.[/quote]

Well that's the point with him! The thing is that Edward cares about Bella. Though the problem is that he cares too much about her. He cares so much that he even leaves her in New Moon b/c he thinks this is better for her. Ridiculous? Absolutely! And that's exactly the point! Bella complains about it when they are reunited. Jacob even tells her that he left her. Meyer is not trying to hide it, it's the opposite in fact. Suddenly Edward is not so perfect after all.

[quote]As for the agony of being a vampire: see, this is where Meyer fails again. I don't question the idea of a vampire having an agonied life, but I question the idea of HER vampires being in pain. She spent so much time trying to make the Cullens "perfect" that she basically goes back to telling us and not showing. She tells us Edward is a tortured soul, but doesn't actually show it to us and in fact goes out of her way to show us the opposite.[/quote]

Um, you did read the books, right? Yes, you're right about the Cullens are portraid as being "perfect", and that's exactly the case. They are portraid as such, but aren't that perfect. Some vampires in Meyer's books consider themself perfect, like the Volturi, though in the Cullens family, they have their "weakness". For example, Rosalie despises Bella for being human, which she as well would want to be. She even said that if she could choose to be human or be with Emmett she would choose to be human. The Cullens even sees themselves as "dead", only having powers, which aren't satisfying to them.

[quote]You get to live forever, be eternally young[/quote]

To you it might be a good thing, not to everyone. Granted, many millions of people would want to life forever and such, but is it really that good? Seeing everyone you love pass by your life? Your mum and dad and friends? Oh sure, some would say that you can get new friends after the "old" friends are dead. Well that's kinda creepy imo. And vampires have extremely long memory, so you would always remember them for the rest of your life (which is a very very long time).

[quote]The story has examples of vampires that can't control their hunger, but it doesn't seem like it's an enormous problem, to be honest. Even Jasper manages to do it, and once you have it figured out it doesn't seem to be a challenge anymore unless incredible circumstances show up.[/quote]

Jasper did snap in New Moon, remember? And you must have forgotten, even Edward-- whose been in control of his bloodlust for decades-- almost snapped when he first met Bella. Edward even explains that people have certain "flavours" to vampires. Some smell differently than others. Some have a much sweeter scent, and sometimes you just might snap. Edwars says in the first book that he must always be in control when he is close to Bella. Otherwise he might snap. Bella even says late in the book that "he's gotten much better being close to her" which he repies that it might seem like it, but it isn't even close to that.

[quote]They don't even have to worry about living during the day because they're not harmed by sunlight.[/quote]

Harmed or not, it doesn't change the fact that they still can't live among humans. There's a reason why they live in Forks; there's very very little sunlight there. It's always cloudy. Cloudy equals no sunlight. Simple logic. They disappear when the sun is actually shining.

[quote]- Edward has incredible beauty (it's a rule of Meyer's world that most vampires are beautiful).[/quote]

Yes, and? Don't tell me there's a rule where vampires have to be ugly and vicious.

[quote]- Edward has a caring family.[/quote]

So does a few hundred thousands of other people too.

[quote]Edward is filthy rich.[/quote]

So being rich is a bad thing now? Well we all have different opinions. And you do know how they got those money? I'll give you a hint. It starts with an 'A'.

[quote]Edward can have any girl he wants.[/quote]

That's usually the case when you're handsome and beautiful.

[quote]Edward doesn't have any predators; the story makes no mention of vampire or demon hunters that would try to hurt him or his kind.[/quote]

Do humans have a predator? I think not. And Edward even describes this in the first book; He is the ultimate predator. You can't hide, you can't run, and you'll never deafet him in a fight. Wouldn't the point of him being the ultimate predator be kinda dumb if there was a predator?

[quote]So outside of some teenage angst that he should gotten over nearly a hundred years ago, there really isn't much of a case for him being "tortured" and not wanting Bella to experience the same. His life is pretty 'effin' awesome in every way.  His only real "qualm", Meyer tells us, is that he fears for "Bella's soul," which is a bit of a joke if you sit there and analyze it. Edward is over 100 years old and he's a VAMPIRE, he should know very well at that age and with his situation that the rules of the supernatural in his world are not really defined. If he was really 17 I would understand, but he isn't. He's live over 100 years and doesn't seem to have ever questioned the idea of a soul or an afterlife or seems to have at all changed his beliefs. Most people are completely different in five years time, but Edward isn't. I'm not sure it even makes logical sense for him to believe in a god whatsoever.[/quote]

These underlinings I didn't even bother to explain, b/c you should read what you wrote and think about it again.

[quote]There's also no reason they couldn't send a couple of them away. They could have easily explained it, or at least explaining it better than the entire family splitting town and barely giving anyone notice beforehand. Even worse is the fact that they return and NOT ONE CHARACTER ever mentions them leaving ever again or shows any kind of surprise. If Meyer doesn't explain how the Cullens returned without giving good reasons, I think the other vampires leaving is definitely less offensive. You also have to remember that Cullens have been doing this for ages; they're supposed to be masters at keeping themselves hidden. There's no reason they couldn't come up with a good explanation as to why Jasper left.[/quote]

I couldn't make sense what/where you was heading at here, so if you could please explain that would be nice.

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Not quite what you were expecting, huh OP.

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[quote]Fenris_13 wrote...

Well that's the point with him! The thing is that Edward cares about Bella. Though the problem is that he cares too much about her. He cares so much that he even leaves her in New Moon b/c he thinks this is better for her. Ridiculous? Absolutely! And that's exactly the point! Bella complains about it when they are reunited. Jacob even tells her that he left her. Meyer is not trying to hide it, it's the opposite in fact. Suddenly Edward is not so perfect after all.[/quote]

The thing is that I don't mind him being flawed or "caring about her too much" to a point where does things he shouldn't. I mind the fact that the author tries to pass him off as perfect, that Bella thinks he's perfect, and that millions of readers think he's perfect. Edward wouldn't be a bad character if Meyer actually went out of her way to point out his character flaws and their consequences. Instead, we have Edward acting jealous and taking apart Bella's truck and "it's okay because he loves her" and abandoning her for months and that's okay too "because he loves her." In neither of the two cases does he actually give Bella any semblence of choice and treats her as not being mature enough to make descisions on her own. He has no respect for her, but "it's okay, he only does it because he loves Bella SO much." The relationship between Bella and Edward is unhealthy and Meyer tries to pass it off as being a perfect love, even if you disagree with me here. Bella BARELY complains TO EDWARD about being left behind when she gets Edward back. She sees him about to step out into the sunlight and kill himself and all of a sudden everything is okay. Bella even mentions that getting him back made her "whole again," not like if the wounds had healed, but as if the "wounds had never existed in the first place," or something to that effect. Let me find the quote for you:

"It was very strange, for I knew we were both in mortal danger. Still, in that instant, I felt well. Whole. I could feel my heart racing in my chest, the blood pulsing hot and fast through my veins again. My lungs filled deep with the sweet scent that came off his skin. It was like there had never been any hole in my chest. I was perfect — not healed, but as if there had been no wound in the first place."

There. That's hardly complaining. Meyer makes it so that Bella not only immediately gets over the abandonment and the months and months of pain; it's like it never even happened in the first place. That's page 452 of New Moon. This is NOT okay.

Mind you, the best proof that Meyer doesn't seem to comprehend how unhealthy the relationship between her two characters is actually reaches its pinnacle when she brings Romeo and Juliet into the mix. We are expected to believe that Edward and Bella are the new Romeo and Juliet, while completely ignoring the fact that Romeo and Juliet is NOT a romance story. Romeo and Juliet is a tragedy about two idiot kids in lust who risk everything because they can't understand their feelings and then have to face the consequences of their idiotic actions. Meyer not only tries to paint the romance between Bella and Edward as perfect, but she even goes a step further and completely misunderstands the point of Romeo and Juliet and likens her characters to Shakespeare's couple. It's kind of awful.

[quote]Um, you did read the books, right? Yes, you're right about the Cullens are portraid as being "perfect", and that's exactly the case. They are portraid as such, but aren't that perfect. Some vampires in Meyer's books consider themself perfect, like the Volturi, though in the Cullens family, they have their "weakness". For example, Rosalie despises Bella for being human, which she as well would want to be. She even said that if she could choose to be human or be with Emmett she would choose to be human. The Cullens even sees themselves as "dead", only having powers, which aren't satisfying to them.[/quote]

Rosalie's hatred for Bella has nothing to do with her being a vampire and everything to do with Meyer's need to treat her female characters as incomplete on their own. I don't mean to sound like a crazy feminist here, but 90% of the female characters in Twilight are defined by either a man, marriage, or motherhood. The only clear exceptions to this are Alice and Leah. Rosalie wants a baby because she's incomplete as a female character, Bella wants Edward because she's incomplete without him, etc. Rosalie is an example of an incredibly weak female character.

[quote]To you it might be a good thing, not to everyone. Granted, many millions of people would want to life forever and such, but is it really that good? Seeing everyone you love pass by your life? Your mum and dad and friends? Oh sure, some would say that you can get new friends after the "old" friends are dead. Well that's kinda creepy imo. And vampires have extremely long memory, so you would always remember them for the rest of your life (which is a very very long time).[/quote]

They're not technically immortal. They're biologically immortal. They don't age and they're hard to kill. But New Moon has shown us that if vampires want to die they can easily just commit suicide. That was Edward's plan when he thought Bella was dead. Regardless of whether or not being young and beautiful forever is so painful, and regardless of whether or not seeing the ones we love die is also so painful, then vampires don't really have much to complain here. They have a clear choice of whether they live or die.

Mind you, I'm not sure how fair it is to say that they would suffer so deeply; after living several hundreds of years I am sure the psychology of a human being/vampire would probably be very different than the way you and I think about it. That's another problem I have with Meyer: her vampires live for hundreds of years and yet the only one to have gathered some sense of wisdom is Carlisle. Everyone else seems kind of incredibly naive by comparison.

[quote]Jasper did snap in New Moon, remember? And you must have forgotten, even Edward-- whose been in control of his bloodlust for decades-- almost snapped when he first met Bella. Edward even explains that people have certain "flavours" to vampires. Some smell differently than others. Some have a much sweeter scent, and sometimes you just might snap. Edwars says in the first book that he must always be in control when he is close to Bella. Otherwise he might snap. Bella even says late in the book that "he's gotten much better being close to her" which he repies that it might seem like it, but it isn't even close to that.[/quote]

I guess I could give you this one.

[quote]Harmed or not, it doesn't change the fact that they still can't live among humans. There's a reason why they live in Forks; there's very very little sunlight there. It's always cloudy. Cloudy equals no sunlight. Simple logic. They disappear when the sun is actually shining.[/quote]

I won't even get into the cloudy day = no sunlight debate here. But saying they can't live among humans isn't true: they obviously do live among humans. Let's ignore the Cullens for a moment; the Volturi seem to be doing just fine in Volterra. Heidi even goes out during the daylight to "fish for tourists." I'm not sure how, considering that Voleterra has enough sunlight to expose Edward, but she does. Remember that Alice is in Volterra too.

Edward also visits Florida, which, as a Floridian I can tell you there is no way to hide from the light here during the day. He also visits Brazil with Bella. He's pretty well integrated into the world of humans.

The "sparkling" of the characters seems like a very small problem, to be honest. It's a minor annoyance at best, and a far cry from stepping out into the sunlight and catching fire.

[quote]Yes, and? Don't tell me there's a rule where vampires have to be ugly and vicious.[/quote]

That wasn't my point. I don't mind vampires being beautiful. It makes sense really; vampires need to lure their victims and what better way to do it than by using lust? I'm simply pointing out that Edward has incredible beauty. It's not like the guy is hideous or has some sort of deformity. We're not talking Cyrano de Bergerac here.

[quote]So does a few hundred thousands of other people too.[/quote]

Your point? I'm explaining that Edward has got it pretty damned good. He's a vampire with a family that loves him. It's hard to have a good family for a normal human being, but Edward has a great one that loves and supports him. Take Bella and Jacob as an example: Bella's parents are separated. They're still "good people" but Bella lacks the support of one or the other depending on where she's living. Mind you, she still has it good, but it's worse than Edward. Jacob only has his father and his father is handicapped. Edward has no right to complain here. He's immensely lucky, even by human real world standards.

[quote]So being rich is a bad thing now? Well we all have different opinions. And you do know how they got those money? I'll give you a hint. It starts with an 'A'.[/quote]

On the contrary! Being filthy rich is a great thing! That was my point! Edward can buy anything he wants and needs and never has to worry about being poverty stricken. Again, he's got it made.

And yes, I know Alice helped the Cullens cheat the stock market to get their money. I've read the books and seen a few interviews with Meyer.

[quote]That's usually the case when you're handsome and beautiful.[/quote]

Exactly.

[quote]Do humans have a predator? I think not. And Edward even describes this in the first book; He is the ultimate predator. You can't hide, you can't run, and you'll never deafet him in a fight. Wouldn't the point of him being the ultimate predator be kinda dumb if there was a predator?[/quote]

Again, that's exactly my point. Edward doesn't have anything to worry about. Being the ultimate predator means he's not going to suddenly get a stake through his heart from Buffy. He's safe.

[quote]These underlinings I didn't even bother to explain, b/c you should read what you wrote and think about it again.[/quote]

Why? We're in agreement that he's incredibly beautiful, that being rich is great, that he has nothing to worry about, and that he has a great family. If anything, I think you should reconsider my points about Edward having a pretty fantastic life and that his complaints and negative feelings are unfounded. Edward suffers from "first world problems."

[quote]I couldn't make sense what/where you was heading at here, so if you could please explain that would be nice.[/quote]

I'm simply saying that the idea of sending Jasper away temporarily for losing control makes more sense than having the entire Cullen family move away. It's less conspicuous and there's no reason that the Cullens couldn't come up with a nice reason as to why Jasper went on an extended vacation.

Modifié par FoxHound109, 22 novembre 2011 - 08:28 .


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fdgvdddvdfdfbdfb wrote...

Not quite what you were expecting, huh OP.


LOL! I feel bad for hijacking the thread. D:

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Hmm, interesting point of view, Fox. I'll return tomorrow to continue this debate. For now, I need my beauty sleep.

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Fenris_13 wrote...

Hmm, interesting point of view, Fox. I'll return tomorrow to continue this debate. For now, I need my beauty sleep.


No prob! Take your time!

Also, I'm glad no one went off the handle with my comments. Some Twilight fans try to stab me when I bring any of this up, ha, ha! :D

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Funkcase wrote...
King compared the Mormon author to JK Rowling, saying that both authors were "speaking directly to young people". "The real difference is that JK Rowling is a terrific writer and Stephenie Meyer can't write worth a darn. She's not very good," - Stephen King.

If Stephen King says you cant write you probably cant.

Anyway I dont care if people enjoy Twilight, I dont understand why though but everyones different.


Fan Rant against Stephen King. (Painful to watch/listen to. The stupidity, it burns!)

Stephen King's response.

And I'll just leave these here.

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and then bella gets naked with willow - the better end.

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No Willow likes WOMEN!

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Sorry Foxhound, I just got back here. I have to say those are good points, and I'm enjoying your discussion with Fenris.

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I have read the Twilight Saga and have seen the movies. I have no plans on seeing Breaking Dawn anytime soon. BUT.... I do like Buffy the Vampire Slayer and I think she could take him.

Buffy vs. Edward

On a serious note, have you noticed the parallels between Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Trueblood and Twilight?

Example: The love interests, one has dark hair and other other light.

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^ Haven't seen any Buffy. Watched a few of Trueblood. I'm not sure that's enough to really call a similarity though.