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Ups. I posted mine since it was said it would be alright after the tenth.  :crying:

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I'm sure you'll be fine Color, it just undermines the competition a little bit, say if you win, and it's presented by David Gaider :D

But I'm sure that awesome fact will redeem you anyways.

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ColorMeSuprised wrote...

Ups. I posted mine since it was said it would be alright after the tenth.  :crying:


It reached the point for me where it was more important to share than to win, if sharing today ends up disqualifying me. I've got mine on my ff.net profile now; can't wait to read everyone else's!

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I just realized that my title page (author name, address, story title, word count, etc.) put the word count of the entire document over 2,500 words (at 2,527, to be exact), but the story text itself is at exactly 2,500.

What are the chances that the title page overage is going to disqualify me?

I didn't know about the challenge until yesterday, and was rushing to finish and get submitted before midnight. The title page was a last-minute addition and I didn't even THINK to include it in the word count.

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Jamie9 wrote...

I'm sure you'll be fine Color, it just
undermines the competition a little bit, say if you win, and it's
presented by David Gaider :D

But I'm sure that awesome fact will redeem you anyways.


I guess it will. ^_^

After reading all the abstracts I guess I won't be winning but it was fun to participate and I would like to stand at least a tiny chance instead of being disqualified. If I don't win, that's alright but being disqualified? That would make me sad.

BrennaCeDria wrote...
It reached the point for me where it was more important to share than to win, if sharing today ends up disqualifying me. I've got mine on my ff.net profile now; can't wait to read everyone else's!


Oh! Do you have a link?  Since we can't edit our Abstract-posts maybe we can just put them here with the abstract we posted?

Modifié par ColorMeSuprised, 11 janvier 2012 - 06:28 .


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I wish my English was better.

But alas, my writing skills only go as far as my mother language, and it's hard to expand beyond that. Especially when you have to deal with preset universes and from a specific viewpoint, like in this creative writing contest.

Perhaps next time I will participate in an event such as this one, if there's ever another event like this one. Until then, I'll keep on working on my skills.

Modifié par Whacka, 11 janvier 2012 - 06:41 .


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ColorMeSuprised wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...
It reached the point for me where it was more important to share than to win, if sharing today ends up disqualifying me. I've got mine on my ff.net profile now; can't wait to read everyone else's!


Oh! Do you have a link?  Since we can't edit our Abstract-posts maybe we can just put them here with the abstract we posted?


The link to my ff.net profile is in my sig; the story that I wrote for this is the one that I ended up titling "Past Entombed in the Present".

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Mande Gray wrote...

I just realized that my title page (author name, address, story title, word count, etc.) put the word count of the entire document over 2,500 words (at 2,527, to be exact), but the story text itself is at exactly 2,500.

What are the chances that the title page overage is going to disqualify me?

I didn't know about the challenge until yesterday, and was rushing to finish and get submitted before midnight. The title page was a last-minute addition and I didn't even THINK to include it in the word count.


I'm almost positive you won't get disqualified on title, author name, and such, mostly because it would be ludicrous. The 2500 word restriction should only apply to the story itself (I don't think the abstract's included in this count unless your abstract is actually part of the story).

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You know, I didn't think about including the title and name and such on the actual story itself. I did put it in the e-mail body, including word count. Hope that doesn't disqualify me because it didn't say it was a requirement on the actual document itself. dfljsbndskjfb Crap.

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RenaissanceDweeb wrote...

You know, I didn't think about including the title and name and such on the actual story itself. I did put it in the e-mail body, including word count. Hope that doesn't disqualify me because it didn't say it was a requirement on the actual document itself. dfljsbndskjfb Crap.


I did the exact same thing. I'm hoping that since I put the info in the body of the email and the document was titled with the story title, that that will be enough. Fingers crossed!

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Chris Priestly wrote...

thats1evildude wrote...

I'm pretty sure "unpublished" means "original". As in "if I do a Google search, I shouldn't be able to find this anywhere else".


This is a very good way to phrase it.

We want a NEW work from entrants. We know there are people who have been wrting DA fan fic for years now and that gives them a bit of an advantage. So, we want an entry of up to 2,500 words that you have not published on your blog or where ever previously.

And if you have submitted, make sure you give your brief of the story here in 50-100 words. If you don't NO PRIZE FOR YOU!!!



:devil:


Wait, we're supposed to put our extract in this thread? I put mine in the thread that was linked in the contest rules. Is that okay? :(

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Something I'm wondering about this contest ... I wonder if it's supposed to be based more around Dragon Age: Asunder as opposed to just the whole "mages versus templar" theme in general. I didn't think so, since the book is a potential prize, and why would they award you with a book if they expect you to have read it already? Argh, I should have asked for clarification. (Because I'm sure otherwise my totally awesome and b!tchin story was sure to win first place were it not for this small issue XD)

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AprilJoy4 wrote...
Wait, we're supposed to put our extract in this thread? I put mine in the thread that was linked in the contest rules. Is that okay? :(


You did fine. :D


Here is my story. Don't look at the other stories. They are what you call Jugendsünden.

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BagelBomber wrote...

... I just want to say I love your av'. The derpy warden expression is the most beautiful one ever.


It's why pretty much all of my characters have it. I like to pretend that's their default expression, and that every time they meet someone new, they just stare at them like o __ O and the other people are too polite to say anything.

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I thought quite highly of your idea, akshully.


*PUMPED because someone likes something I did*

BUT, my other idea was to write about a Tranquil mage that is aware of how depressing not being able to feel emotions would be if he was able to feel emotions. So in his off hours he just hangs around the city trash-talking passersby in his boring monotone and pulling terrible pranks on people, because he figures that if he could feel, then he would find these things hilarious.

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ColorMeSuprised wrote...

AprilJoy4 wrote...
Wait, we're supposed to put our extract in this thread? I put mine in the thread that was linked in the contest rules. Is that okay? :(


You did fine. :D


Here is my story. Don't look at the other stories. They are what you call Jugendsünden.


Yay! Yours was one that I had saved the abstract for to go locate when the time came, so I've def got it loaded now. Will read as soon as I finish my work!

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BrennaCeDria wrote...

Yay! Yours was one that I had saved the abstract for to go locate when the time came, so I've def got it loaded now. Will read as soon as I finish my work!


Oh, thank you! That's quite the compliment. After all, there were so many stories, it's a suprise mine was even noticed! :wub:

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ColorMeSuprised wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Yay! Yours was one that I had saved the abstract for to go locate when the time came, so I've def got it loaded now. Will read as soon as I finish my work!


Oh, thank you! That's quite the compliment. After all, there were so many stories, it's a suprise mine was even noticed! :wub:


Haha, I've gone through pages 1-10 in the abstract thread and saved probably two dozen or so that I'm going to try and find to read. As for yours? I guessed where it was going, and was so glad that I was right. I put a review up on ff.net for it!

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OdanUrr wrote...

Mande Gray wrote...

I just realized that my title page (author name, address, story title, word count, etc.) put the word count of the entire document over 2,500 words (at 2,527, to be exact), but the story text itself is at exactly 2,500.

What are the chances that the title page overage is going to disqualify me?

I didn't know about the challenge until yesterday, and was rushing to finish and get submitted before midnight. The title page was a last-minute addition and I didn't even THINK to include it in the word count.


I'm almost positive you won't get disqualified on title, author name, and such, mostly because it would be ludicrous. The 2500 word restriction should only apply to the story itself (I don't think the abstract's included in this count unless your abstract is actually part of the story).


Thanks for the reply -- that's put my mind at ease.  :)

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BrennaCeDria wrote...

ColorMeSuprised wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Yay! Yours was one that I had saved the abstract for to go locate when the time came, so I've def got it loaded now. Will read as soon as I finish my work!


Oh, thank you! That's quite the compliment. After all, there were so many stories, it's a suprise mine was even noticed! :wub:


Haha, I've gone through pages 1-10 in the abstract thread and saved probably two dozen or so that I'm going to try and find to read. As for yours? I guessed where it was going, and was so glad that I was right. I put a review up on ff.net for it!


Woah! So fast! I just started reading yours. I will comment as soon as I have finished. :)

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So...do any of you guys/girls know when they'll announce the winners? I would like to read the stories that won:D. It would be nice, though, for them to send us an email so we know that they got the mail and they read it or they will read it....ah, well, I'll just check this topic and hope...hope that they at least read my story:crying: 

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Oh God, I've already spotted sentences that could have been dramatically improved... hate the torture of waiting. I bet I won't get anywhere near the top! The experience was good enough to counter that, though, except for the stress and heartbreaking slaughter of my precious... uh... words. XD

Yeah... I hope something like this happens again. 'Twas a nice change from the norm. Oh, and good luck everyone! Always helps to have a bit of luck, as I learnt today in an epic fail game of Monopoly.

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Ok guys, since some people have started to post their stories already (or don't care :D), I've started a thread for you. :)

Go here to add your entry to the list! I'll update it in a few hours once a few of you have posted.

@Corker: I'd forgotten about that. Good call :)

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Wahoo!! Thank you kindly--reading 'em will help my nerves, prolly.

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Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...

Ok guys, since some people have started to post their stories already (or don't care :D), I've started a thread for you. :)

Go here to add your entry to the list! I'll update it in a few hours once a few of you have posted.

@Corker: I'd forgotten about that. Good call :)


Added mine! Thanks for making the thread!

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Saw this contest on and wrote on a whim since I love Bioware's games. Been lurking here too for a few days and y'all seem like a pretty cool bunch, so I might as well not be shy and say hallo. My forum n00b might be showing, but it won't let me post in the story thread,  so if anyone would like to read, I posted it on my blog jarrydbailey.blogspot.com/2012/01/please-be-gentle.html

Constructive criticism of the non-flame variety is always welcome. Cheers and Good Luck everybody! :D