Dragon Age: Asunder Creative Writing Challenge
#76
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:38
#77
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:40
2) POV. Am I right in assuming this includes "tight third person", as well as first person?
3) Fantastic contest, BioWare. Not sure I'll take part, but... yeah, awesome stuff.
Modifié par Ulicus, 21 décembre 2011 - 01:41 .
#78
Guest_Aotearas_*
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:40
Guest_Aotearas_*
Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...
Finally!Writing contest! Thank you, Bioware (and extra awesome for having finalists judged by one of your writers!)
write a short story from the perspective of a Mage or Templar.
Guys, you can easily write from a character's perspective in third person. Just stay with what the one (main) character thinks, sees and feels, rather than jumping in between heads. Avoid telling the reader what other characters are thinking other than your mage/templar, and don't have the 'camera' follow them out of the room if your main character doesn't.
(Or break these rules, but do it cleverly.)
How about writing that cryptic that no one knows who or what you are talking about but still making sense?
Because that's the road I intend to go ... let's see if I can mindscrew Mr. Gaider in a comprehensible manner (see the level of mindscrew I am about to unleash? Subtle, isn't it?).
#79
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:41
#80
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:46
Or to make it more specific: could I do something centered on Malcolm Hawke in Lothering?
#81
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:50
Neofelis Nebulosa wrote...
How about writing that cryptic that no one knows who or what you are talking about but still making sense?
Because that's the road I intend to go ... let's see if I can mindscrew Mr. Gaider in a comprehensible manner (see the level of mindscrew I am about to unleash? Subtle, isn't it?).
Well, I think Gaider's only reading the (5?) finalists, as decided by the Community Team, not all the pieces that are submitted. So you'll have to mindscrew the primary judges first and hope they understand, and want to subject DG to it.
#82
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:53
But you can get around that easily by only using original characters that are based in the DA world -- no Hawkes, no Morrigan etc, save as points of reference. And no Alicorn.
Edit: IMO it just means "No crapping all over our world and characters, please. We're letting you play with our toys, so please treat them nicely," but even fanfic writers have opinions on what amounts to respect for the franchise. And in some circles, that's "Nothing is sacred."
Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 21 décembre 2011 - 01:56 .
#83
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 01:57
Perhaps a PM chat here on the forum as an alternative for non-skype users?
#84
Guest_jollyorigins_*
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:02
Guest_jollyorigins_*
Challenge accepted.
#85
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:04
Chris Priestly wrote...
Please do not include explicit sexual descriptions or excessive violence.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't Dragon Age have both? lol
Well within reason on the former -- nothing erotica sounding. But DA is full of excessive violence.
- Duncan stabbing Jory.
- The Warden can throw a knife into the back of Genetivi's skull and can cut people's head's off in combat.
- And let's not forget all the other kooky things the player can do with the murder knife.
#86
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:05
#87
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:07
#88
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:09
Maybe I'm saying it wrong or not making it clear enough, but that's how I view it.
Essentially don't take the characters in Asunder and make them into your own character. You can mention, overhear, etc., but not modify these particular characters. And it is clear that the expectation is that the Lore you use must match Dragon Age Lore.
#89
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:16
I am trying to be careful not to even repeat conversations, just to be safe. Oh look there's Senior Enchanter Rhys, oops I gotta go this way. LOL!
Modifié par DreGregoire, 21 décembre 2011 - 02:21 .
#90
Guest_Aotearas_*
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:18
Guest_Aotearas_*
Davillo wrote...
have fun nerds
Thanks. I will try to!
#91
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:20
I'm not 100% sure, though, so I would kinda like to see this clarified before I write some story on Anders in the circle*, or something, only to find out that's not qualified.
*Not actually one of the ideas I'm considering, just an example.
#92
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:23
Modifié par DreGregoire, 21 décembre 2011 - 02:24 .
#93
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:28
#94
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:30
The Grey Nayr wrote...
Chris Priestly wrote...
Please do not include explicit sexual descriptions or excessive violence.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't Dragon Age have both? lol
DA has sex and violence, but it's not excessive. It doesn't go to great lengths to wallow in depravity.
If your 2,500 word story contained a scene where a templar raped a mage, and did so in excrutiating detail, that would be excessive.
In contrast, Duncan murder-knife'd Jory, but it was over in a couple of seconds and there was barely any blood. There are also sex scenes in the game, but they are relatively tame/tasteful. If something is written explicitly then it leaves absolutely nothing to the imagination.
#95
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:31
There's Knight-Vigilant, Knight-Commander, and Knight-Captain that I know of. I also know the Lord Seeker is very influential within the Templars, but what are the other ranks?
#96
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:44
The Ethereal Writer Redux wrote...
Another question, what are the ranks of the Templars?
There's Knight-Vigilant, Knight-Commander, and Knight-Captain that I know of. I also know the Lord Seeker is very influential within the Templars, but what are the other ranks?
Taken directly from the Dragon Age wiki:
Knight-Vigilant
Knight-Commander
Knight-Captain
Knight-Lieutenant
Knight-Corporal
Templar (I assume this one is for Recruits and Unranked Knights)
Source: http://dragonage.wik...i/Templar_Order
#97
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:44
I'm not an expert on copyright laws or anything, but I think just writing a story set in the Dragon Age universe is infringement. Obviously they're giving you some permission to do so with the contest--the question is just "how much".DreGregoire wrote...
Well the requirement is to write a short story as a mage or templar and Anders is the intellectual property of Bioware so to write as Anders, in this instance (I believe) would be considered infringment. But a much more clear example would be if you wrote as Rhys.
#98
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:46
Liedral wrote...
So, we can't write from an established character's perspective? Like Shale's? It has to be a created character?
Would you consider writing from Shale's perspective to be an original work of your own, something you created? You can't be original if you are using somebody elses intellectual property (creation by another). Shale is Bioware's intellectual property. I'm not saying anything against the norm in fanfiction writing but this Writing Challenge is very clear in its' requirements.
#99
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:49
#100
Posté 21 décembre 2011 - 02:50
Finnian Valko wrote...
The Ethereal Writer Redux wrote...
Another question, what are the ranks of the Templars?
There's Knight-Vigilant, Knight-Commander, and Knight-Captain that I know of. I also know the Lord Seeker is very influential within the Templars, but what are the other ranks?
Taken directly from the Dragon Age wiki:
Knight-Vigilant
Knight-Commander
Knight-Captain
Knight-Lieutenant
Knight-Corporal
Templar (I assume this one is for Recruits and Unranked Knights)
Source: http://dragonage.wik...i/Templar_Order
Thanks! I'm writing my story from the perspective of a Circle Mage from Kirkwall who's traveling with a decent Templar from Kirkwall. Now that I know the ranks below Knight-Captain, he'll be a Knight-Lieutenant.
Now I just need to know if I can tweak certain events from DAII's story to help enforce my story.
EDIT:
*in Orlesian accent*
This is my idea! Mine mine mine!!
Modifié par The Ethereal Writer Redux, 21 décembre 2011 - 03:20 .





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