Blacklash93 wrote...
How is the story a mess? I think it's held together pretty well so far.
Sure there's the issue with Leliana and a few codex/dialogue-exposition contradictions, but that's pretty much it.
Look, if you want me to explain all the ways DA2's story was held together with chewed bubble gum, you're going to have to pay for the carpal tunnel treatment.
The most obvious point for me was that so much of Kirkwall's problems were the Enigma of Kirkwall making the town into a vortex of insanity and dialing it up to 11 for mages. Things being so bad that in the undercity even ordinary people could contact demons because the Veil was so sundered. We went from only a small handful of blood mages and abominations in DAO to having more of them than sane NPCs in DA2. All because of the Enigma of Kirkwall (because "ancient Tevinter ****s who put the Veil in a giant paper shredder for reasons unknown" got tiring to write after the first time). ... And
no one noticed anything was out of the ordinary. They basically put the Circle of Magi in the house from Poltergeist and nobody thought "geez, something might be wrong with this place, I don't think the walls are supposed to bleed with the blood of the innocent..." Even though so many of the inhabitants were from places that were unhaunted, they didn't notice that Kirkwall was the mouth of Hell. People like Bethany and Anders especially should have noticed pretty much immediately the unusually high demon population. But they don't. Anders doesn't even notice and blame it on the Chantry or templars.
How about where, if you sided with the mages, you can save every mage in the room and they'll all instantly die of a congenital heart defect just so Orsino can have his mental breakdown and decide that the best course of action is to to commit suicide so he can become a giant corpse monster while surrounded exclusively by allies? They later admitted that part was just because they wanted the mage route to have 2 boss fights too.
How about how Thrask, an otherwise intelligent and reasonable person, along with his entire conspiracy decide that Hawke is Meredith's puppet even if they know first-hand that Hawke has been actively working against Meredith for many years and even one of the few that dares to publicly speak out against her even now? Instead of thinking "this will be our greatest ally," they decide that blackmailing Hawke by kidnapping and threatening to kill a loved one (or Carver) is the correct course of action. That storyline was worse than New Coke.
"Petrice, you scum! You tried to get me killed so you can start a religious war?! I'll kill you right here in this abandoned house where no one knows you and Varnell are and we outnumber you. Prepare to meet your Maker!" "Nah." "Oh. Okay then. Bye."
"Hi, my name is Merrill." "I'm Hawke, a templar supporter." "Oh? That sucks, 'cuz I'm a blood mage." "What! How--I'm going to turn you in or kill you or something!" "Nah. I'd prefer it if you covered up my existence for the next 6 years while I experiment on an ancient darkspawn murder device in the middle of the biggest city in the Free Marches." "Ok, I'll do that then." (Note to TEWR: I'm not saying I agree with such a course of action, but the option definitely should have been there for Hawkes who are vehemently anti-blood mage/pro-templar.)
I could go on, but I don't have direct access to an OC-192 and my piddly DSL couldn't handle pointing out every "wait, what?" in DA2. Like trying to send a lake through a drinking straw.
The Ethereal Writer Redux wrote...
Should I be happy I was right about Bioware's disconnect between themselves? Or upset?
Upset, I'd say. I know I am.

I seem to have passed through a corridor of darkness and entered another realm where threads seemingly dealing with Dragon Age characters and plots actually deal with Mass Effect characters and plots....
Cool with me as long as no one spills anything from that damnedable leak. I'm still afraid to read ME forums. Especially when The Day is so close.
EDIT: Not that I'm trying to say there's anything wrong with it. I'm just saying what I said for snarky lulz, as I had a God of War series discussion in another DA thread with Rifneno and Xilizhra a while back.
That was fun. I actually had some more theories later on too, but I forget what they were. I eventually realized I'm putting
way too much thought into a game whose plot can be reduced to the word "KILL!"