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[Ardinal]

Title: Purpose 
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Author: Ardinal
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: A man is being pursued along the Wounded Coast. Mortally wounded, he reflects upon his time in the Gallows. and learns of his true purpose under the Maker in a final confrontation. 

(Terribly short - wished I could have elaborated on a few things - TOO LATE NOW!)

Modifié par Ardinal, 18 janvier 2012 - 06:13 .

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Updated and added mine:

Na Mortius Lerno Libertas
Author: Shadow of Light Dragon
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: "You were a magister, you knife-eared traitor!”
It was too much. Tathera’s paws skidded on the grass as he rounded, claws scoring lines in the dirt. He sprang back up into elvhen form and hissed, “Was. I was a magister, and never again, shem! There is no place in your world for mages with a scrap of conscience. Beyond the Imperium we are slaves and criminals, within we must vie with one another for dominance and become monsters to survive! I didn’t leave Minrathous with the intent of joining the Dalish, I did it to be free.”

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Added:
For Dead Is Dead
The Right
Stained Glass

[Tryynity]

ALLUVIAL SOLACE

Author: Tryynity
Constructive Criticism Requested:  Yes
Synopsis: 
My name is Anieran. I am an elven male. Templars brought me to Ferelden’s Tower at a young age. I have no memories prior to this.
I discovered early, I was not like the others. The Dalish believe I am a Somniari, what they call a Dreamer; one who can enter the Fade at will and change things as they desire, changes that can also be brought into the natural realm, but I believe there is much more.
I am determined to find out who I am, and the reason behind my uncommon gifts.

Modifié par Tryynity, 18 janvier 2012 - 12:37 .

[bunny_girl1022]

Atonement

Author: bunny_girl1022 (BSN) / suilven (FF Net)
Constructive Criticim Requested: Yes (via PM/review on FF Net preferred)
Synopsis: Cara had done something very bad, he knew this much. Everyone was talking about it… the templars had come. Her bed was empty now, except for the doll that lay forgotten on her pillow. From his hiding place beneath the table, Cullen could hear the adults talking, completely unaware of how his sister’s fate was about to change his own.

Modifié par bunny_girl1022, 18 janvier 2012 - 03:17 .

[BrennaCeDria]

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

[BlazePT]

Blood Of The Pure

Author: BlazePT

Constructive Criticism Requested: (Yes, send me a private message)

Synopsis:

"Guyn fears the Harrowing like the world fears the Darkspawn, but the hand of Enchanter Egret calms her fears.
He promises her to guide her overcome her fears; he promises her success and greatness. 
The Harrowing, said Enchanter Egret, is like a trial of love. If you pass, then love isn’t just a word and a mage isn’t just a jester doing tricks for fools.
But the Fade, the Fade isn’t a place for neither pretty words nor promises."

[thesnowtigress]

I posted my story, here are the details, thanks for doing this.


An Apostate's Lot (Link)
Author: thesnowtigress
Constructive Criticism Requested: Sure
Synopsis: The desire to be free is strong in many mages. When the opportunity appears, they seize it with a death grip and won’t let go. But what happens next? An apostate’s life is not easy. It is difficult and fraught with all kinds of dangers. This is the story of one such mage, Anwen.

[ShadowCatJen]

To Believe As We Have Sinned ((Link))
Author: ShadowCatJen
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: There comes a time in every man's life where they're forced to question their path. Ser Dylan always believed he'd been right to join the Templar Order. With his brother unable to choose his own destiny, he thought it only fair that this would become his. However, fate had other ideas and now Dylan needs to solidify his direction. Will betrayal jade him or will he hold on to hope?

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 19 janvier 2012 - 04:08 .

[Perivayne]

The Lost Circle
Author: Perivayne
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: The Templars split from the Chantry; adherents follow their leaders
commands and others find slaughter unacceptable. Senior Enchanter Petra
must face the knowledge that the Templars will kill the mages. When
Tavish forces the issues and demands the circle be annulled, Hadley
makes a choice and Petra’s fate hangs in the balance.

[Sandtigress]

Eyes on Me 
Author: Sandtigress
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis:
There are many observers here at the Circle.  Most of them seem harmless enough.  Many are distant, aloof.  Some appear almost benevolent - kind, protective, compassionate, quick to intervene when trouble arises.  With others, the malevolence is unmistakable.  There is a cruelty, an evilness that emanates so thickly that even the most naïve child would not be fooled. These, strangely enough, are the safest. It's easy to avoid the obvious trap.  More perilous are the ones you can't see.  The ones you suspect but aren't entirely sure about.  

My watcher is one of these.   

Thanks SoLD 

[Fortlowe]

Remnants

Author:  Fortlowe

Constructive criticism is  welcome

Synopsis:
A Mage of the Circle of Fereldon has fled the Tower, kidnapping his
young son in the process, in an attempt to protect his charge from the
outbreak of Blood magic that is unfolding there. Now Apostate, he and
his son trek across the Blighted wilds with their every step dogged by a
single silent Templar and his dreams haunted by the woman he loved.

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

All added, along with:
A Harrowing
Three Days Prior
Wounded Iris
Remnants
Trace

[bunny_girl1022]

Shadow of Light Dragon wrote...

All added, along with:
A Harrowing
Three Days Prior
Wounded Iris
Remnants
Trace

Thank you for doing this! 

Modifié par bunny_girl1022, 19 janvier 2012 - 03:04 .

[Ryuu814]

Flight of Ice
Author: Ryuu814
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: Karin Silvers was a Circle Mage. Unknowingly assisting in the escape of a friend, she flee's the Templars that are pursuing her. This is her tale of her flight. 

[Sad Dragon]

Rites
Author: Sad Dragon
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: Set in Kinloch hold, home not only to the circle of mages in Fereldan
but also to those tasked with guarding the world against them. This
story follows three templars on their journey leading up to the
Harrowing of the young mage apprentice Alina Fairchild, and the events
that follows.

And thanks to Shadow of Light Dragon for creating this thread and keeping it updated!

-TSD

Modifié par Sad Dragon, 19 janvier 2012 - 07:55 .

[JoeLaTurkey]

Some truly fantastic work here; I'm both humbled and inspired.

[loquaciousquark]

Song of Brummagem
Author: LoquaciousQuark
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis:  "O mortals, you quick-hearted children, you bright-eyed children, come to us." The keepers of the Fade meet their dream-shaper; the voiceless free their song. The Maker's first children in five aspects.

I really appreciate you organizing this thread, by the way. It's awesome to be able to see the links for everyone's entries in one cohesive place!

Modifié par loquaciousquark, 20 janvier 2012 - 02:58 .

[CuriousArtemis]

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

Hope it's okay to reply here  I don't mind my story being included

[BrennaCeDria]

motomotogirl wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

Hope it's okay to reply here  I don't mind my story being included

I don't mind if SoLD doesn't! I'll make sure yours is added!

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

I certainly don't mind

Thread updated with the above posted fics, along with:
Now Sleeps the Crimson Petal
Sowing and Reaping
The Fisherman Mage

[ConstantineCousland]

The Amulet of False Gods
Author: ConstantineCousland
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis:  
Draconus, a scientist and mage from Tevinter is researching old scrolls found in the Deep Roads when he comes across a peculiar one telling the tale of an amulet that bestows great power. As his research in the Fade carries on, he begins to have strange dreams, and before long he finds himself in possession of that very amulet. As he tries desperately to remove it, he begins having blackouts and waking up in strange locations. Visions of horrific deeds committed by his hands plague his dreams, and before long word reaches Vigil's Keep as these reports begin to surface near Ferelden. A group of Grey Wardens led by Nathaniel Howe is dispatched to deal with this, because only the Wardens know the true nature of the amulet and what it really contains. 

[ColorMeSuprised]

motomotogirl wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

Hope it's okay to reply here  I don't mind my story being included

I don't mind, either.

[BrennaCeDria]

ColorMeSuprised wrote...

motomotogirl wrote...

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

Hope it's okay to reply here  I don't mind my story being included

I don't mind, either.

Yay, was hoping you'd say okay to being added! I was just about to message you and flat-out ask!

[Fortlowe]

BrennaCeDria wrote...

Just curious, I was going to compile a decent number of entries into a Word doc to make a .mobi out of to read on my Kindle, since that's easier than at the computer for me. Is anyone specifically interested in being included OR in getting a copy of the .mobi file when I have it ready? All stories will include their title and BSN username for credit. (Cross-posting this to the main contest thread as well, just in case.)

Go for it.