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[Sandtigress]

And as of this post, I have added everyone who SoLD had on her list. I'll keep an eye out periodically for new additions. :-)

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Updated! (phew)

I've included Sandtigress's announcement on the OP, and highlighted those entries we have that made the 20-and-5 cut

Well done everyone!

[ColorMeSuprised]

Thanks for the hard work you two. =)

[jenovan]

I'm a late one, me. ;P


Conspiracy Theory (BSN Blog)
Author: jenovan
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis:
The Circle Tower at Kinloch Hold has finally been cleared of blood mages, abominations, and demons with the help of new Grey Warden Devin Amell. In accomplishing this, however, Devin has uncovered a secret that makes him question the true safety — past, present and future — of the Tower, and the wisdom of those meant to guard and guide the mages there...

Modifié par jenovan, 02 février 2012 - 01:49 .

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Updated again, including stuff from the other thread

Including:
Somniari's Sleep
In Another Life
Horses, and the Smell of Snow (Top 5)

Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 02 février 2012 - 02:15 .

[Mahati]

 Here's mine 

Tranquil Whispers (http://social.biowar...30/blog/211241/ )
Author: Mahati
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes

When Hawke sides with the mages, frail and young Nimue tastes freedom for the first time. But the exhilaration of independence quickly turns to weariness and despair – for freedom brings with it its own heavy price. Nimue discovers a world that she could not have imagined. Soon, her misery turns to a deep longing for reprieve…at any cost.

Modifié par Mahati, 02 février 2012 - 02:45 .

[Firky]

Lord. (I'm a bit fragile about posting it. Poor old Pinch has been a companion in progess with the toolset for me, for an insanely long time. She/He actually is very different to how I've presented "her" in this story, btw.)

Pinch's Fascinations https://docs.google....ST5xwD9S1Z7tb6I
Firky
Summary

A man, once wrongly mourned by the Templar Order, recounts an erstwhile experience of Pinch, Tranquil of Denerim’s Dossiers, from the brief time before the Battle of Ostagar.

This is a winding tale of love and of loss. It is a story that raises questions about the unexpected ways a mother’s gifts might be received.

Please also find within, a BioWare-style cameo and a BioWare-style easter egg. Thank you for the opportunity to submit a story.


Thanks, SoL. (Sorry, I don't know how to do the code right, and I gotta run.)

Modifié par Firky, 02 février 2012 - 02:45 .

[eternalshiva]

Defection
Author: Liedral (eternalshiva on ff.net)
Criticism: Sure? All is welcome.
Synopsis: The Templar Order had become a stranger to him. The violence that
erupted throughout the spire had devastated his beliefs, destroyed the
trust he held in the order's conformity.

You can add it to the community there too, if you wish.

[Nickerson]

I'd love my entry to be included  Thanks! Congrats to all the contest entrants and especially the winners - what an achievement!

Title: The Orlesian Girls
Author: Nickerson
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes please!
Synopsis: Orlesian by birth, the apprentice mage Corinne and the young templar Adele both stand out in the Circle of Tantervale. Their shared heritage draws them together, and they become unlikely friends. But when a new Knight Commander arrives from Kirkwall, will changes to the Circle tear them apart?

[Sagacious Rage]

Title: As We Are
Author: Sagacious Rage
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes!
Synopsis: Ser Thrask lost his daughter, Olivia, twice. Once to the Gallows,  and once to the demons. As the situation in Kirkwall worsens, he forges  an unlikely friendship with the erstwhile apostate, Grace. One quiet  evening on the Wounded Coast, he tells her of his past.

Modifié par Sagacious Rage, 02 février 2012 - 08:31 .

[Hakurou]

The Order of The Halfstaff [Tumblr]
Author: Hakurou
Constructive Criticism Requested: Please.
Synopsis: My name is Eobert Braegat. There's an apostate loose in Ansburg, and he's taken hostages. Templars have died at this man's hands, and if I'm not careful, I could join them. But I come from...unusual circumstances. Circumstances that intersect in just the right way to maybe, just maybe, give me an advantage against this blood mage. One thing's for sure: long story short, I will not be what he expects.

Modifié par Hakurou, 02 février 2012 - 08:46 .

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Last update for tonight. ~.~ Thanks for posting, guys!

[Momiji.mii]

Prelation
Author: Momiji.mii
Constructive Criticism Requested: Comments welcome!
Synopsis: In hindsight, I'm not sure what I was expecting, but it certainly wasn't what I'm facing right now. This was supposed to be my first, real assignment as a Templar, tracking and killing a dangerous apostate, but once we defeated him, as I lifted my sword for the final blow, something happened that changed everything. All of a sudden I'm faced with an impossible choice. My whole life has led up to this moment, but how could I possibly have prepared for anything like this?

[Anchor5]

The Circle of Hatred
Author: Anchor5
Constructive Criticism Requested: (Yes)
Synopsis: Having witnessed the death of a promising young
apprentice at the hands of a templar, Lara Silvertome’s faith in the circle
begins to wane. Fearing her own life might also be at an end, she writes a letter to
her childhood sweetheart to confess her feelings and confront her guilt before
taking justice into her own hands.

Modifié par Anchor5, 02 février 2012 - 11:36 .

[Bethadots]

More than half of the top 20 are on here now!

[Ashman1986]

Title: Spirit of Compassion (http://www.themarrie...-of-compassion/)
Author: Ashman1986
Constructive Criticism: Yes, please
Synopsis: Knight-Commander Presten's return from the Circle Tower is delayed by a
meeting with Ser Kellin on the roads outside of Gwaren. An unsavory
informant has teased knowledge of an apostate living near town. The man
shows at last, and the templars are spurred to action as they learn that
Presten's elven wife may be in danger.

EDIT: If you need me to post the story somewhere other than my blog, just let me know.

Modifié par Ashman1986, 02 février 2012 - 03:10 .

[Kilyra]

Last Strands of Childhood: www.fanfiction.net/s/7798510/1/Last_Strands_of_Childhood
Author: Kilyra
Constructive Criticism Requested: Sure
Synopsis: A young child's first step into magehood

Modifié par Kilyra, 02 février 2012 - 03:38 .

[DiBernsGB]

Thanks for keeping the thread going, SoLD!

[Croc484]

Vengeance: social.bioware.com/2199392/blog/211249/
Author: Croc484
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: A zealous Templar struggles in his faith after a blood mage kills his wife and sons, while attempting to stay focused on his mission.

Modifié par Croc484, 03 février 2012 - 02:52 .

[Muirin]

The Palimpsest (http://www.fanfictio.../The_Palimpsest)
Author: Muirin
Constructive Criticism Requested: Yes
Synopsis: It's funny how fate can lead a person from a night of drunken misadventure to a discovery of phenomenal proportions. The palimpsest -- hiding the secrets of the greatest magisters beneath the trappings of a Chantry prayer book. That this should come into his hands at such a propitious point in time, why, it could almost make Aengus believe in Andraste!

[ElvishPenguin]

Congratulations to all the winners/finalists!  I'd like to add my story to the list so that I can get some feedback/critiques. 

Vagary (www.fanfiction.net/s/7798882/1/)
Author:  ElvishPenguin
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Synopsis:

"We have to get out of here."  Ezra cradled Lara's sobbing form in his arms.  The flayed and desecrated Knight-Lieutenant lay in a pool of blood in front of them, and it was all Ezra could do not to look at it.  The man had deserved his fate, but he needed to concentrate on getting his friend help.

"Kill me," she whispered.

"What?!" he cried, astounded.

"Kill me.  I'm not--"

"No," he cut her off.  "We're going to get out of here and go somewhere safe."

"Safety, for a mage, is a fallacy."

[The_11thDoctor]

I finally have my fanfiction site page up! same extended story.

www.fanfiction.net/s/7798969/1/classifications

Modifié par aang001, 02 février 2012 - 07:51 .

[Brynna1998]

 Sorry I'm so late posting this!

Story:  Chaff in the Wind
Author:  Brynna1998
Constructive Criticism Requested:  Yes
Synopsis:  Magic can heal, or it can destroy.  The story of one family's choice.
Link:  www.fanfiction.net/s/7796434/1/

Modifié par Brynna1998, 02 février 2012 - 08:46 .

[deekeh]

Normal
Author: deek eh
Constructive Criticism Requested: Always!
Synopsis: An apprentice has been haunted her whole life. She hopes the Rite will ease her suffering. The story of Isla the Bloody, who thought the voices were Fade demons. Set before the Fifth Blight.
(http://www.fanfictio...799339/1/Normal)

I spent most of last night reading all of these, I couldn't get enough of them!

[Shadow of Light Dragon]

Woo! Keep 'em coming!

We haven't hit 100 entries yet, BUT we have 15 of the stories that made the 20 cut, including the top 5 which also includes the overall winner (grats to you all, btw )

Modifié par Shadow of Light Dragon, 03 février 2012 - 07:23 .