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[Jehuty]

Paragon should let Rah deal with Impulse in his Fate A&M thread fanfic.

 

It would be way too fitting.

It would be an amusing read. But if Rah doesn't kill me in a horrific and painful way I'd be gravely disappointed. 

[Simfam]

Spoiler

Rah approached, his piece hard and ready, a mad grin crossed from cheek to cheek. Impulse lay unknowing on his bed, his body naked and sheets already on the floor. "Stop... please" Impulse's voice trembled, too weak and afraid: Rah's metal was too long and thick, why can't I move? Impulse tried in pathetic convulsions of resistance. He turned left, then right and saw the Ikaros Melon cup he bought last con, the water! It came to him with apprehension and terror. He was drugged. Rah had stayed for that moment and now his grin turned manic, his hand gripped it harder, the veins around it pulsed with a grim ecstasy, a forewarning to the coming violation of his rights.

 

Closer.

 

Closer.

 

And closer.

 

Rah knelt on the bed, the mattress creaked as he shuffled and took him by force. With one hand he pierced, thrusting forward he plunged into the depths of his figure.

 

Impulse didn't even scream.

 

Rah breathed heavily as the height of his sin had come suddenly to an end. He threw the steel shaft to the side, its body stained with the boy's blood. The lights turned and so did he.

 

"Good job" said a silhouette by the door.

 

"Anything for my bro!" Rah skipped happily to the exit.

 

The Ikaros cup had shattered on the floor.

 

Okay everyone f*cking happy now?

 

Rah/Impulse fanfic (my first and last) up there.

 

Too lewd for some people.

[Mr.House]

So lewd.

[Liamv2]

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[Colaman172]

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[CrazyRah]

Spoiler

Rah approached, his piece hard and ready, a mad grin crossed from cheek to cheek. Impulse lay unknowing on his bed, his body naked and sheets already on the floor. "Stop... please" Impulse's voice trembled, too weak and afraid: Rah's metal was too long and thick, why can't I move? Impulse tried in pathetic convulsions of resistance. He turned left, then right and saw the Ikaros Melon cup he bought last con, the water! It came to him with apprehension and terror. He was drugged. Rah had stayed for that moment and now his grin turned manic, his hand gripped it harder, the veins around it pulsed with a grim ecstasy, a forewarning to the coming violation of his rights.

 

Closer.

 

Closer.

 

And closer.

 

Rah knelt on the bed, the mattress creaked as he shuffled and took him by force. With one hand he pierced, thrusting forward he plunged into the depths of his figure.

 

Impulse didn't even scream.

 

Rah breathed heavily as the height of his sin had come suddenly to an end. He threw the steel shaft to the side, its body stained with the boy's blood. The lights turned and so did he.

 

"Good job" said a silhouette by the door.

 

"Anything for my bro!" Rah skipped happily to the exit.

 

The Ikaros cup had shattered on the floor.

 

Okay everyone f*cking happy now?

 

Rah/Impulse fanfic (my first and last) up there.

 

Too lewd for some people.

 

A true masterpiece!

 

[Mr.House]

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Our moe protag loves it.

[Milan92]

Spoiler

Rah approached, his piece hard and ready, a mad grin crossed from cheek to cheek. Impulse lay unknowing on his bed, his body naked and sheets already on the floor. "Stop... please" Impulse's voice trembled, too weak and afraid: Rah's metal was too long and thick, why can't I move? Impulse tried in pathetic convulsions of resistance. He turned left, then right and saw the Ikaros Melon cup he bought last con, the water! It came to him with apprehension and terror. He was drugged. Rah had stayed for that moment and now his grin turned manic, his hand gripped it harder, the veins around it pulsed with a grim ecstasy, a forewarning to the coming violation of his rights.

 

Closer.

 

Closer.

 

And closer.

 

Rah knelt on the bed, the mattress creaked as he shuffled and took him by force. With one hand he pierced, thrusting forward he plunged into the depths of his figure.

 

Impulse didn't even scream.

 

Rah breathed heavily as the height of his sin had come suddenly to an end. He threw the steel shaft to the side, its body stained with the boy's blood. The lights turned and so did he.

 

"Good job" said a silhouette by the door.

 

"Anything for my bro!" Rah skipped happily to the exit.

 

The Ikaros cup had shattered on the floor.

 

Okay everyone f*cking happy now?

 

Rah/Impulse fanfic (my first and last) up there.

 

Too lewd for some people.

 

[Simfam]

A true masterpiece!

 

 

True to life too.

[Liamv2]

Our moe protag loves it.

 

Yes.

[CrazyRah]

True to life too.

 

It managed to capture the finer details too. Especially the at the crucial point of the story

[Chewin]

Even Stephen King would be terrified.

 

Bravo!

[Simfam]

One thing it does is question the reader.

 

Who really was the villain in this?

 

To me Rah was definitely the hero.

[Liamv2]

Rah did nothing wrong.

[Colaman172]

One thing it does is question the reader.

Who really was the villain in this?

To me Rah was definitely the hero.

I'm going to say it was Liam?

[ObserverStatus]

Spoiler

Rah approached, his piece hard and ready, a mad grin crossed from cheek to cheek. Impulse lay unknowing on his bed, his body naked and sheets already on the floor. "Stop... please" Impulse's voice trembled, too weak and afraid: Rah's metal was too long and thick, why can't I move? Impulse tried in pathetic convulsions of resistance. He turned left, then right and saw the Ikaros Melon cup he bought last con, the water! It came to him with apprehension and terror. He was drugged. Rah had stayed for that moment and now his grin turned manic, his hand gripped it harder, the veins around it pulsed with a grim ecstasy, a forewarning to the coming violation of his rights.

 

Closer.

 

Closer.

 

And closer.

 

Rah knelt on the bed, the mattress creaked as he shuffled and took him by force. With one hand he pierced, thrusting forward he plunged into the depths of his figure.

 

Impulse didn't even scream.

 

Rah breathed heavily as the height of his sin had come suddenly to an end. He threw the steel shaft to the side, its body stained with the boy's blood. The lights turned and so did he.

 

"Good job" said a silhouette by the door.

 

"Anything for my bro!" Rah skipped happily to the exit.

 

The Ikaros cup had shattered on the floor.

 

Okay everyone f*cking happy now?

 

Rah/Impulse fanfic (my first and last) up there.

 

Too lewd for some people.

Eh. could have been better. You should have described the finer details of the ahegao face Rah was making the whole time.

[Jehuty]

Sim.

 

[Simfam]

Eh. could have been better. You should have described the finer details of the ahegao face Rah was making the whole time.

 

Hahaha

[Liamv2]

I'm going to say it was Liam?

 

Why? 

[CrazyRah]

Why? 

 

One of the many reasons to do this was to keep Sir Moe safe from Impulse vile hands. 

[Colaman172]

Why?

It's always the person you least suspect. Besides, what led up to that situation?

One of the many reasons to do this was to keep Sir Moe safe from Impulse vile hands.

Also, this.

[Jehuty]

It was an amusing read. 

[Liamv2]

One of the many reasons to do this was to keep Sir Moe safe from Impulse vile hands. 

 

Thank you Rah.

 

It's always the person you least suspect. Besides, what led up to that situation?

 

I dunno.

[Jehuty]

Then you come to the conclusion that it was a fake and I stood outside with a chainsaw, ready to go. 

[Simfam]

No you're dead.

 

That's it.

 

In the alternative universe where I am a good writer and a best seller I like to kill all my characters. More than Martin and Miura put together.