Modifié par dutch646, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:21 .
Extended Mass Effect Deception Exerpt
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:20
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#1227
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:21
Random Jerkface wrote...
"Mythra Zon" sounds more volus to me, actually.
This would increase the quality of the story. Really.
She's actually an asari...and Dietz keeps getting her name wrong at times, saying "Von" instead of "Zon." It's pretty hilarious.
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:24
izmirtheastarach wrote...
"My name is Mythra Zon." Gillian could sense the power of the other woman's personality and was eveloped by the heady perfume she wore as they exchanged asari-style air kisses.
I AM NOT MAKING THIS UP. ASARI-STYLE AIR KISSES.
This book is going to kill me.
What the **** is even happening now.
#1229
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:24
izmirtheastarach wrote...
"My name is Mythra Zon." Gillian could sense the power of the other woman's personality and was eveloped by the heady perfume she wore as they exchanged asari-style air kisses.
I AM NOT MAKING THIS UP. ASARI-STYLE AIR KISSES.
This book is going to kill me.
ROFL. Someone, please ruin this guy's fraudulent career.
Modifié par Relix28, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:24 .
#1230
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:24
Except that Nick seemed taller somehow, his right shoulder was swathed in bandages, and he was wearing two pistols. That was the sort of thing she would expect of him, as was the big grin, and the kiss on the cheeck. "Damn, girl, it's good to see you."
THEY HAVN'T SEEN EACH OTHER SINCE THEY WERE BOTH 12 YEARS OLD.
Damn girl, it's good to see you?
Modifié par izmirtheastarach, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:25 .
#1231
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:25
@Dutch: The cereal eating is in the GoogleBooks preview.
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:26
#1233
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:26
#1234
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:26
izmirtheastarach wrote...
Except that Nick seemed taller somehow, his right shoulder was swathed in bandages, and he was wearing two pistols. That was the sort of thing she would expect of him, as was the big grin, and the kiss on the cheeck. "Damn, girl, it's good to see you."
THEY HAVN'T SEEN EACH OTHER SINCE THEY WERE BOTH 12 YEARS OLD.
Damn girl, it's good to see you?
And I don't even think they interacted positively as a child - the last time Gillian saw Nick he was the ****ing school bully.
THE HELL, DIETZ?
#1235
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:27
dutch646 wrote...
Where does Kai Leng eat David's cereal? What page?
Page 64.
That's why he checked the cupboards, located some cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now, meaning a place where everything that happened would be known to him,
#1236
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:28
#1237
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:29
izmirtheastarach wrote...
"My name is Mythra Zon." Gillian could sense the power of the other woman's personality and was eveloped by the heady perfume she wore as they exchanged asari-style air kisses.
I AM NOT MAKING THIS UP. ASARI-STYLE AIR KISSES.
This book is going to kill me.
I want to go back and finish this. So, once again:
"My name is Mythra Zon." Gillian could sense the power of the other woman's personality and was eveloped by the heady perfume she wore as they exchanged asari-style air kisses. The air crackled with static electricity as the biotics came together and parted.
GILLIAN IS LESBIOTIC.
Modifié par izmirtheastarach, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:31 .
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:29
#1239
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:31
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Page 64? There are only 57 pages for this preview.izmirtheastarach wrote...
dutch646 wrote...
Where does Kai Leng eat David's cereal? What page?
Page 64.That's why he checked the cupboards, located some cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now, meaning a place where everything that happened would be known to him,
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:31
That might be a reference to the fact that (human, as far as we know) biotics sometimes receive electric shocks when touching metal, but I'm probably giving him too much credit, and that makes no sense in this context anyway.GILLIAN IS LESBIOTIC
Modifié par Random Jerkface, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:32 .
#1241
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:32
dutch646 wrote...
Page 64? There are only 57 pages for this preview.izmirtheastarach wrote...
dutch646 wrote...
Where does Kai Leng eat David's cereal? What page?
Page 64.That's why he checked the cupboards, located some cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now, meaning a place where everything that happened would be known to him,
There was a second preview up at Google Books linked somewhere in the thread that included a couple more chapters, but with a few pages missing.
#1242
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:33
But because Anderson was busy making love to Kahlee he missed the transition from one state to another
I'm tired.
Modifié par izmirtheastarach, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:33 .
#1243
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:34
Yuoaman wrote...
There was a second preview up at Google Books linked somewhere in the thread that included a couple more chapters, but with a few pages missing.
I'm using the built in Google book search to come up with this new crazy BS. You can read short paragraphs that are not included in the preview using this method.
#1244
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:35
"Making love" has come up twice now, lol. Creativity! I suppose it is better than clumsily trying to describe what they were doing but come on!
Modifié par Eski.Moe, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:37 .
#1245
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:36
Oh, god. No. Please tell me this is a joke.But because Anderson was busy making love to Kahlee he missed the transition from one state to another
#1246
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:37
izmirtheastarach wrote...
But because Anderson was busy making love to Kahlee he missed the transition from one state to another
I'm tired.
This. No.
WHO WOULD APPROVE THIS LINE?
#1247
Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:37
Random Jerkface wrote...
Oh, god. No. Please tell me this is a joke.But because Anderson was busy making love to Kahlee he missed the transition from one state to another
Direct quote, my man. Straight from the book. I used the keyword making love after seeing that phrase used from Nick's dream earlier.
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:38
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:39
izmirtheastarach wrote...
That's why he checked the cupboards, located some cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now, meaning a place where everything that happened would be known to him,
That's exactly how I eat breakfast.
Locating my cereal is the most important part, really.
Modifié par Mr. MannlyMan, 25 janvier 2012 - 08:42 .
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Posté 25 janvier 2012 - 08:39
izmirtheastarach wrote...
Yuoaman wrote...
There was a second preview up at Google Books linked somewhere in the thread that included a couple more chapters, but with a few pages missing.
I'm using the built in Google book search to come up with this new crazy BS. You can read short paragraphs that are not included in the preview using this method.
I think you can download a full pdf version of the novel online, so you don't have to do that. I've found a full version. If anyone wants a link, PM me. You guys can see the wreck all for yourself, rather than spoil random bits.




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