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Lancer1289 from the MEWiki wrote...
I'm already getting a headache. However, given the response already, I doubt that we'll really have to worry about people complaining. We'll probably get compliments for keeping it off.
Gaiden96 wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
Gaiden96 wrote...
I still think this book is like something an 8-year old would write for school. The way he references topics and staples of the universe is just so crass. It is a horrible novel.
Pee>Urinate/Relieve Oneself
Pee > Deception
SKRemaks wrote...
Thank you for saving me $8.49.
I have the first three books. They're not that great. But, at least they're readable. As you know, the writing in this book? Is complete crap. I could gloss over the errors. But, not the appalling writing. I have a BA in English. My former professors? Would give this effort, an F. (for FAIL)
(Do you know how painful it was to write that? How any "professional" author can write that tripe and be satisfied with it, I'll never know. It's just terrible.)
LPPrince wrote...
ravene wrote...
ok as much as i really hate to defend anything about this book in any way i reread ascension and
gillian's autusim was never stated as what type she had but at the end of ascension it is stated on page 294
Quoteing somewhat from the book about gillian
"the mere fact that she grumbled and complained rather than mutely obeying was further evedence of how much she had changed.."
also kahlee had commented to hendle on how much improvment gillian had shown , and shard her theory that the suit might make the girl feel psychologically safe and more confident. hendel however had offered a difrent theory ....
" I think she's just getting better because cerberus isent drugging her anymore ."
the though was so disturbing , but kahlee was suprised she hadnt come up with it on her own. it was doubtful gillians condition could be blamed solely on what ever chemical concoctions jiro had been feeding her but it was possible they had made her symtoms worse somehow that knowledge made what grayson had alowed them to do to his daughter even more monstrous...
while this dosent explain her growing out of it if can explain her condition improving quite a bit....
Improving a bit is one thing. Having it completely disappear is another.
Guess what Deception did.
Sylvianus wrote...
Holy crap !41. Ugho is in charge of the defense against the batarian slavers - He died in Ascension during the Cerberus attack on the Idenna.
Even the dead guys are alive now !
ravene wrote...
ok as much as i really hate to defend anything about this book in any way i reread ascension and
gillian's autusim was never stated as what type she had but at the end of ascension it is stated on page 294
Quoteing somewhat from the book about gillian
"the mere fact that she grumbled and complained rather than mutely obeying was further evedence of how much she had changed.."
also kahlee had commented to hendle on how much improvment gillian had shown , and shard her theory that the suit might make the girl feel psychologically safe and more confident. hendel however had offered a difrent theory ....
" I think she's just getting better because cerberus isent drugging her anymore ."
the though was so disturbing , but kahlee was suprised she hadnt come up with it on her own. it was doubtful gillians condition could be blamed solely on what ever chemical concoctions jiro had been feeding her but it was possible they had made her symtoms worse somehow that knowledge made what grayson had alowed them to do to his daughter even more monstrous...
while this dosent explain her growing out of it if can explain her condition improving quite a bit....
Gaiden96 wrote...
You don't "grow out" of autism, you deal with it. You can live with it, but it doesn't eventually turn you into an 18 year-old, female version of Zaeed with biotics. It's bull.
I feel disgusted having that man corrupt what up until now had been pretty decent reads.LPPrince wrote...
Gaiden96 wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
Gaiden96 wrote...
I still think this book is like something an 8-year old would write for school. The way he references topics and staples of the universe is just so crass. It is a horrible novel.
Pee>Urinate/Relieve Oneself
Pee > Deception
Dietz used the word "pee" instead of "urinate" or "relieve oneself" like we're all children reading a storybook.
ZLurps wrote...
Sylvianus wrote...
Holy crap !41. Ugho is in charge of the defense against the batarian slavers - He died in Ascension during the Cerberus attack on the Idenna.
Even the dead guys are alive now !
It's just Dietz going with the times. There are zombies everywhere.
LPPrince wrote...
We should all mass tweet Casey.
https://twitter.com/#!/CaseyDHudson
If we all did it, I imagine he'd take notice.
LPPrince wrote...
ZLurps wrote...
Sylvianus wrote...
Holy crap !41. Ugho is in charge of the defense against the batarian slavers - He died in Ascension during the Cerberus attack on the Idenna.
Even the dead guys are alive now !
It's just Dietz going with the times. There are zombies everywhere.
DEAR GOD, UGHO IS A HUSK.
JamesFaith wrote...
Simple explanation - super postautistic turboaging Gillian raising him from dead by Livegiving reave.
LPPrince wrote...
Purchasing the book completely nullifies what we're trying to do.
Iohanna wrote...
Rejoice, my fellow BSN'ers! The error doc now reaches the amazing achievement of holding 50 errors!
LPPrince wrote...
That is SO not a good thing.
Iohanna wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
That is SO not a good thing.
I was trying to remain positive...
But this is bad. No, it's not just bad, it's bad-bad!
We're in for some serious repercussions, aren't we?
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