Alternate "script"
I'll give this a crack let me know what you guys think?
Kai Leng silently entered the apartment, careful not to draw any attention to his activities. He quickly locked the door behind him and before he stepped further into the apartment he made a note to take a mental picture of everything he saw as to ensure that if he had to touch or move something he would remember where it originally stood.
The apartment was the typical open style environment separated by a few walls and floor to ceiling glass windows. The glass was an older style semi-opaque panel that could be set to allow less or more light depending on various external factors or the owner's taste. From where he was standing he could see an elegantly styled kitchen on the right side of the room only separated from the rest by a wall with a classic vid fire place. In the centre of the room was a receding living space with two couches and a holo-tv on the wall. The bathroom and bedroom were off to his left separated again by the older style semi-opague glass.
Kai Leng began searching the room, purposely looking right to left. It was an old military trick he had learn during his time as an Alliance N7 Special Forces Marine.
"Our eyes are inherently taught to reading books, magazines, holo displays, everything left to right from a young age..." He remember his instructor saying.
"Studies have shown that we tend to miss things when we do this. As an N7 Marine you cannot afford to miss things."
He started in the kitchen carefully opening drawers and cabinets searching for anything out of the ordinary which given the nature of the individual who owned the apartment, Captain David Anderson one of the Alliances most decorated Special Forces Officer and a representative here on the Citadel, he might find anything. Sure enough Leng opened the door's under the kitchen sink and found an Alliance issued M-5 Phalanx heavy pistol attached to the bottom of the marble sink. A formidable weapon in the right hands. After inspecting it Leng was careful to place it exactly in the same position he had retrieved it from.
Leng moved to a desk near the living area. There was a holo-cluster on the desk, they were very common appliance in today's apartment's. Displaying the current time and date, room tempurature, air quality, calendar, notes and a few other custom settings. More importantly there was a vid message in the inbox. Leng looked through all four messages but it was the most recent one that caught his attention. He pressed the play button and stood back. A half-meter image of a young boy snapped into focus. Leng tilted his head, he knew this boy...
It was the same kid he'd used to help him capture Paul Grayson at the Acension Project on the Grissom Academy space station. He was forced to use him as a human shield and later as a bargaining chip to secure his escape from the facility. He rubbed the tender spot on his leg that he still had from where David Anderson had shot him. He would get his revenge, when the time came there was no measure to how fast and how hard he would bring the fight to Anderson and anyone else foolish enough to get in this way.
The boy said he had left to join some kind of group. "The Biotic Underground", in-order to try to change the way the Galaxy see's and treats the Biotic community. Kai Leng quickly put two and two together, David and Kahlee must have gone to C-Sec for assistance in locating him. If the kid was still on the Citadel he might be worth capturing again for the same purpose as before if an opportunity presented itself.
10 Minutes had passed and Kai Leng had completed his search of Anderson's apartment. Aside from the pistol, some clothing that he believed belonged to Kahlee Sanders a woman he had encountered back at the Grissom Academy and the message from the boy nothing else peaked his interest. He quickly triple checked everything he had touched, referencing it's original position and then he discreetly placed a small monitoring device just above the holo-tv in the living room. It would provide a wide angled video image of almost the entire apartment.
He left the apartment as quickly as he'd entered, none was the wiser to his presence. Just the way he liked it, out of sight, out of mind...
So what do you guys think?
-Hawk
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For the first time in ages we've come together in hatred for something. Imo this is the best thing about this "book", it united us all 
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