Mass Effect: Deception Discussion Thread (Updated 2/2/2012) *Now with 30% more links!*
#476
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:05
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#477
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:07
#478
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:07
I wonder whether that twist was ever approved by anyone from ME team.
#479
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:09
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#480
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:11
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Big stupid jellyfish wrote...
Ok, so Didy was kind enough to share the ending of the plotline with me and... Well, I facepalmed.
I wonder whether that twist was ever approved by anyone from ME team.
Ok I know obviously from reading the post this isn't the best one out their. But are you guys honestly ok with ruining the rest of the book for you?
#481
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:12
#482
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:12
#483
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:13
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LPPrince wrote...
After reading what the first post linked to and hearing the ending, I don't want the book because EVERYTHING I know about it is bad.
Hmm. Its probably best I shouldn't had asked. Its quite obvious that if you hate the beggining you might as well read the end.
#484
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:14
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Big stupid jellyfish wrote...
You see, the fact is, you can hardly ruin something that was already ruined by the author.
Most of those things I dont really care about. I understand bad writing as in not really entertaining but, Dietz doesn't seem to have gotten much help either. I see failure on both parties.
Modifié par Hello Man, 26 janvier 2012 - 03:17 .
#485
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:15
Hello Man wrote...
But it mentions she had it.
No it damn well does not mention it. If you're feeling especially charitable, you might allow that it alludes to it. I'm not feeling anything like that charitable however.
#486
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:16
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didymos1120 wrote...
Hello Man wrote...
But it mentions she had it.
No it damn well does not mention it. If you're feeling especially charitable, you might allow that it alludes to it. I'm not feeling anything like that charitable however.
Yes it does are you kidding me. It mentioned it briefly before the attack on the Ideena
Modifié par Hello Man, 26 janvier 2012 - 03:16 .
#487
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:17
#488
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:19
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Someone With Mass wrote...
Whatever stops that atrocity from being referenced in ME3 works for me.
Is that likely?. I mean you could buy a really short summery of the 2 first books in ME2.
#489
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:20
Hello Man wrote...
didymos1120 wrote...
Hello Man wrote...
But it mentions she had it.
No it damn well does not mention it. If you're feeling especially charitable, you might allow that it alludes to it. I'm not feeling anything like that charitable however.
Yes it does are you kidding me. It mentioned it briefly before the attack on the Ideena
Mentioning it requires actually using the damn word "autistic".
#490
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Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:21
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didymos1120 wrote...
Hello Man wrote...
didymos1120 wrote...
Hello Man wrote...
But it mentions she had it.
No it damn well does not mention it. If you're feeling especially charitable, you might allow that it alludes to it. I'm not feeling anything like that charitable however.
Yes it does are you kidding me. It mentioned it briefly before the attack on the Ideena
Mentioning it requires actually using the damn word "autistic".
Well I'm sorry if everything has to be taken word for word.
Modifié par Hello Man, 26 janvier 2012 - 03:21 .
#491
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:30
There are no words. None.
If you have any respect for any of the characters from the book-verse, just... pretend it doesn't exist.
Modifié par Iohanna, 26 janvier 2012 - 03:32 .
#492
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:32
Had preordered this but amazon cancelled the preorder, guess I'm lucky.
#493
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:32
#494
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:34
Hello Man wrote...
Yes it does are you kidding me. It mentioned it briefly before the attack on the Ideena
She had been a very unstable twelveyear-old when they first met.
#495
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:37
Working with the speed and certainty of the experienced
operative that he was, Leng placed the pickups
in locations that, when taken together, would
provide complete coverage of everything that took
place in the apartment. Then, having placed a wireless
tap under the comm console, he was done. Or
should have been done. But Leng was something of
an adrenaline junkie and enjoyed being where he was.
That’s why he checked the cupboards, located some
cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything
back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now,
meaning a place where everything that happened
would be known to him, and to Cerberus. The thought
pleased him and Leng was still smiling as he left.
Page 64.
Modifié par Zhuinden, 26 janvier 2012 - 03:38 .
#496
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:39
#497
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:43
Zhuinden wrote...
Here's the cereal scene, in case you haven't searched it up yet.Working with the speed and certainty of the experienced operative that he was, Leng placed the pickups
in locations that, when taken together, would provide complete coverage of everything that took place in the apartment. Then, having placed a wireless tap under the comm console, he was done. Or should have been done. But Leng was something of an adrenaline junkie and enjoyed being where he was. That’s why he checked the cupboards, located some cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything
back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now, meaning a place where everything that happened
would be known to him, and to Cerberus. The thought pleased him and Leng was still smiling as he left.
Page 64.
The context only makes it worse...! I am not giving money for this thing.
Anyhow could someone PM me the ending, please? I need to know how bad it actually is.
#498
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:48
#499
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:51
Wow that's the first time I read it in its entirety. I... wow where do I begin? I mean, it's so funny how the language is terribad until the cereal comes out. The writing actually gets a lot better as soon as it mentions he's an adrenaline junkie. Does this mean Dietz thought it was such a masterful and awesome scene he had to rewrite that part of it three-four times to get it to sound better?Zhuinden wrote...
Here's the cereal scene, in case you haven't searched it up yet.Working with the speed and certainty of the experienced
operative that he was, Leng placed the pickups
in locations that, when taken together, would
provide complete coverage of everything that took
place in the apartment. Then, having placed a wireless
tap under the comm console, he was done. Or
should have been done. But Leng was something of
an adrenaline junkie and enjoyed being where he was.
That’s why he checked the cupboards, located some
cereal, and had breakfast before putting everything
back exactly as it had been. It was his apartment now,
meaning a place where everything that happened
would be known to him, and to Cerberus. The thought
pleased him and Leng was still smiling as he left.
Page 64.
I mean the language in the first part is absolutely atrocious. You don't write that way. This isn't words in a book, it's someone paraphrasing a book. Then when the wording gets better... cereal.
I feel dirty now.
#500
Posté 26 janvier 2012 - 03:52
Iohanna wrote...
I just read the ending... And now I wished I didn't.
There are no words. None.
If you have any respect for any of the characters from the book-verse, just... pretend it doesn't exist.
That bad, huh?
Well, Gillian, Anderson and Leng are pretty much the only characters I care about, anyway.




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