I still have to read Drew's books before I read this one if I want to have all the context before I, too, pick it apart. After seeing all these errors with the universe on Google Docs, I am completely astounded at how this...thing...even got the okay to be published.
Several years ago I read Dietz's Halo book. The story wasn't that bad, but I found it incredibly lacking in detail. Not only that, but the numerous grammatical errors and typos. I can't believe he was even able to write this book. His is more like terrible fan fiction. D:
Granted, I haven't read the book myself, but the fact that he would dismiss a disease is just way beyond terrible...and as to why he was approached to write about a universe so expansive and huge when he can barely describe anything is beyond me.
Thank you to the people who have found the errors, I was initially excited over the book's release and had planned on purchasing it. BSN, you have saved me around $10. Thanks.