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ForteSJGR wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
Grim Skulls and Biotic Underground in Deception were such jokes it was nuts.
Biotic Pride Parade? REALLY?
*shakes head*
I'm all for pride. PRIDE IN THIS THREAD!
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And why do biotics need to go underground? If anything they could just band together and rock anybody who tried to mess with them. As far as I know, there isn't an anti-biotic compund is there?
loungeshep wrote...
And...12 to 18? Seriously?
Relix28 wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
Grim Skulls and Biotic Underground in Deception were such jokes it was nuts.
Biotic Pride Parade? REALLY?
*shakes head*
O......M......G
What the hell is wrong with this Dietz guy? REALLY, Dietz?
Chewin3 wrote...
JeffZero wrote...
I just completely revamped the OP. It looks nice except for the credits list at the end; didn't translate well from the notepad I'd crafted for that section. I'm fixing it now.
Looks more organized. Well done, Jeff!
JeffZero wrote...
I just completely revamped the OP. It looks nice except for the credits list at the end; didn't translate well from the notepad I'd crafted for that section. I'm fixing it now.
schwarzaj wrote...
LadySuspense wrote...
schwarzaj wrote...
didymos1120 wrote...
Yuoaman wrote...
Istanbul's a city, dude.
We talking about Byzantium?
Or Constantinople?
I was refering to the city, not the nation.
Great. Now that song is stuck in my head and I kind of am picturing a montage of bad scenes from Deception to the song now...facepalms hard
I'm sorry. I was just trying to be funny to off set the rage I feel at deception
Someone With Mass wrote...
Biotic Pride Parade? Ooooh, that's low, even by Dietz standards.
Modifié par schwarzaj, 01 février 2012 - 09:02 .
JeffZero wrote...
I just completely revamped the OP. It looks nice except for the credits list at the end; didn't translate well from the notepad I'd crafted for that section. I'm fixing it now.
The Gepmeister wrote...
I never thought about reading the novel before, and this certainly tells me that I shouldn't. Also, the author wrote an idiotic interpretation of the first Halo game. Spare yourself the pain.
LPPrince wrote...
AVPen wrote...
Oh, for f***s sake....So apparently Omega has f***ing hills all over the place.... how much you wanna bet that it's on Omega's "surface", to boot? [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/pinched.png[/smilie]“And they led me to what could be the Biotic Underground’s headquarters.”
“That’s huge,” Kahlee said. “What are we waiting for? Let’s go there.”
“Not
so fast,” Hendel said. “The place is bound to be full of Level Three
biotics all armed to the teeth. We wouldn’t stand a chance. Plus, if it’s there it’s behind a steel door inside a hill made out of solid rock.”
Omega's got nice hills.
Modifié par Vovea, 01 février 2012 - 09:03 .
JeffZero wrote...
I just completely revamped the OP. It looks nice except for the credits list at the end; didn't translate well from the notepad I'd crafted for that section. I'm fixing it now.
JeffZero wrote...
Chewin3 wrote...
JeffZero wrote...
I just completely revamped the OP. It looks nice except for the credits list at the end; didn't translate well from the notepad I'd crafted for that section. I'm fixing it now.
Looks more organized. Well done, Jeff!
Yeah, I think previously I've just had entirely too much fun using hyperlink text since I'd only just recently learned how to do that. Got carried away; it read like a passage and not a fan collaboration except for the credits at the end. I'm much happier with the current design. Thanks!
ZLurps wrote...
Pride parade thing is actually problematic. Doesn't fit with my idea of copying plot from gangster book (well, could be mafia guys using people in Unions) maybe Dietz actually invented something himself.
loungeshep wrote...
nitefyre410 wrote...
loungeshep wrote...
So actually read/skimmed the book, mostly read the end where she's killed with a toothbrush, and in what has to be the least emotional, passionless, badly written, badly edited conclusion ever, I'm sure you're supposed to feel sorry she died, but that was bad comedy. I'm not even going to read the rest of the book.
That was so bad. SO very bad and the people who approved it should feel bad.
I still trying to understand how the book got approved to even have a that nonsensical conclusion. If this guy can be author then anyone FF.net has a great chance and should never give up.
Mistakes were made
and I - along with a lot people want answers.
Hell this author can't even get basic math right.. .one doesn't simple go from 12 yrs old to 18 in 3 years.
I admit to reading bad fan fiction, hell I admit to having written bad fan fiction-that I was smart enough to never put on the internet btw- but this book is actually worse than bad fan fiction. I mean my god.
I can live with writing a novel that has a boring story and dry characters, but this one looks like its a first draft transcript.
And...12 to 18? Seriously?
Vovea wrote...
I got my copy of the book today. Its been sat next to me in silence like a cheating partner since I was linked to this thread.
ZLurps wrote...
LPPrince wrote...
Grim Skulls and Biotic Underground in Deception were such jokes it was nuts.
Biotic Pride Parade? REALLY?
*shakes head*
Pride parade thing is actually problematic. Doesn't fit with my idea of copying plot from gangster book (well, could be mafia guys using people in Unions) maybe Dietz actually invented something himself.
Sheepie Crusher wrote...
Wait a second, Saren destroyed the Grim Skulls in Revelation, guess that didn't happen too
JoePilot wrote...
Dietz, know what century you're writing in, next time.
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