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cgrimm54 wrote...
YES. YES.LumpOfCole wrote...
Mass Effect Deception - Rage Comic Edition :: Chapter 01: (New)
i.imgur.com/Ng7oJ.jpg
Prologue (in case you missed it the first time I posted it):
i.imgur.com/AELwf.jpg@ the 403 crap, if you link to imgur from a forum it does that. highlight your url bar and hit enter again.
LumpOfCole wrote...
Mass Effect Deception - Rage Comic Edition :: Chapter 01: (New)
i.imgur.com/Ng7oJ.jpg
Prologue (in case you missed it the first time I posted it):
i.imgur.com/AELwf.jpg
cgrimm54 wrote...
YES. YES.LumpOfCole wrote...
Mass Effect Deception - Rage Comic Edition :: Chapter 01: (New)
i.imgur.com/Ng7oJ.jpg
Prologue (in case you missed it the first time I posted it):
i.imgur.com/AELwf.jpg@ the 403 crap, if you link to imgur from a forum it does that. highlight your url bar and hit enter again.
LumpOfCole wrote...
Mass Effect Deception - Rage Comic Edition :: Chapter 01: (New)
i.imgur.com/Ng7oJ.jpg
Prologue (in case you missed it the first time I posted it):
i.imgur.com/AELwf.jpg
AVPen wrote...
More random snippets of bullsh*t from this "novel":Leng watched with interest as Gillian described the first part of the voyage on the Idenna, followed by the battle with the batarians, and the freeing of the slaves. Anderson and Kahlee were clearly fascinated. But McCann seemed to be nervous. Why? He knew how the story would end after all— which was happily for him. Or was there something more? Something McCann hadn’t told Gillian? Yes, Leng thought to himself, Hal is in a jam.
Modifié par Gemini1179, 02 février 2012 - 09:00 .
Gemini1179 wrote...
AVPen wrote...
More random snippets of bullsh*t from this "novel":Leng watched with interest as Gillian described the first part of the voyage on the Idenna, followed by the battle with the batarians, and the freeing of the slaves. Anderson and Kahlee were clearly fascinated. But McCann seemed to be nervous. Why? He knew how the story would end after all— which was happily for him. Or was there something more? Something McCann hadn’t told Gillian? Yes, Leng thought to himself, Hal is in a jam.
Is this for real? Was this thing really just a first draft? Dear BioWare, there are hundreds of amazing (and admittedly not so amazing) writers who submit non-beta'd work that is far superior just in structure than this is. Stop going out through agents for 'professional' writers who only care about the paycheck and seek out the diamonds in the rough like Kudara who as taken the mess that is the plot of ME2 and made it simply amazing.
*Edit: on fanfiction.net
Gemini1179 wrote...
AVPen wrote...
More random snippets of bullsh*t from this "novel":Leng watched with interest as Gillian described the first part of the voyage on the Idenna, followed by the battle with the batarians, and the freeing of the slaves. Anderson and Kahlee were clearly fascinated. But McCann seemed to be nervous. Why? He knew how the story would end after all— which was happily for him. Or was there something more? Something McCann hadn’t told Gillian? Yes, Leng thought to himself, Hal is in a jam.
Is this for real? Was this thing really just a first draft? Dear BioWare, there are hundreds of amazing (and admittedly not so amazing) writers who submit non-beta'd work that is far superior just in structure than this is. Stop going out through agents for 'professional' writers who only care about the paycheck and seek out the diamonds in the rough like Kudara who as taken the mess that is the plot of ME2 and made it simply amazing.
*Edit: on fanfiction.net
nitefyre410 wrote...
hmmm can you link that story and Yes I agree 100%
Gemini1179 wrote...
nitefyre410 wrote...
hmmm can you link that story and Yes I agree 100%
Here it is www.fanfiction.net/s/5768891/1/Who_Saves_the_Hero
Phenominal work. Female Shepard and is very woman empowering which I hope won't scare you off. Deals with Shepard's death, Cerberus, the events on Horizon, the Prothean Cypher and all kinds of things that just work brilliantly in my opinion. Unfinished but it is currently a VERY long read.
![=]](https://lvlt.forum.bioware.com/public/style_emoticons/default/sideways.png)
Modifié par nitefyre410, 02 février 2012 - 09:17 .
TheFoxBlade wrote...
Another gem from Deception "Leng was still in the process of absorbing that news when he heard a clang as something landed on the metal roof of the structure to his right. That was followed by a rattling sound. He grabbed hold of Kim and jerked her back. 'Grenade!'
It was a grenade."
TheFoxBlade wrote...
Another gem from Deception "Leng was still in the process of absorbing that news when he heard a clang as something landed on the metal roof of the structure to his right. That was followed by a rattling sound. He grabbed hold of Kim and jerked her back. 'Grenade!'
It was a grenade."
Wonderful!LumpOfCole wrote...
Mass Effect Deception - Rage Comic Edition :: Chapter 01: (New)
i.imgur.com/Ng7oJ.jpg
Prologue (in case you missed it the first time I posted it):
i.imgur.com/AELwf.jpg
TheFoxBlade wrote...
Another gem from Deception "Leng was still in the process of absorbing that news when he heard a clang as something landed on the metal roof of the structure to his right. That was followed by a rattling sound. He grabbed hold of Kim and jerked her back. 'Grenade!'
It was a grenade."
Anderson tried to fight back as the gun slipped from his suddenly nerveless fingers by bringing his knee up toward Kai Leng’s groin. But he blocked the move by turning his hips so the blow only struck him in the meat of his thigh.
McCann raised his left hand, and Leng blocked the downward blow, but took a knee in the crotch. Or would have except he turned his hips at the last moment and took the blow on his right thigh.
RiflemanUK wrote...
Interesting, the first is a quote from Retribution and the second is from Deception.Anderson tried to fight back as the gun slipped from his suddenly nerveless fingers by bringing his knee up toward Kai Leng’s groin. But he blocked the move by turning his hips so the blow only struck him in the meat of his thigh.
McCann raised his left hand, and Leng blocked the downward blow, but took a knee in the crotch. Or would have except he turned his hips at the last moment and took the blow on his right thigh.
nitefyre410 wrote...
TheFoxBlade wrote...
Another gem from Deception "Leng was still in the process of absorbing that news when he heard a clang as something landed on the metal roof of the structure to his right. That was followed by a rattling sound. He grabbed hold of Kim and jerked her back. 'Grenade!'
It was a grenade."
Okay after hours research we have discovered... that it was a Gerenade.
Did he really spell Gerenade wrong? then right, then not correct previous mispelling.
Modifié par Carmin_Steele, 02 février 2012 - 09:27 .
RiflemanUK wrote...
Interesting, the first is a quote from Retribution and the second is from Deception.Anderson tried to fight back as the gun slipped from his suddenly nerveless fingers by bringing his knee up toward Kai Leng’s groin. But he blocked the move by turning his hips so the blow only struck him in the meat of his thigh.
McCann raised his left hand, and Leng blocked the downward blow, but took a knee in the crotch. Or would have except he turned his hips at the last moment and took the blow on his right thigh.
TheFoxBlade wrote...
nitefyre410 wrote...
TheFoxBlade wrote...
Another gem from Deception "Leng was still in the process of absorbing that news when he heard a clang as something landed on the metal roof of the structure to his right. That was followed by a rattling sound. He grabbed hold of Kim and jerked her back. 'Grenade!'
It was a grenade."
Okay after hours research we have discovered... that it was a Gerenade.
Did he really spell Gerenade wrong? then right, then not correct previous mispelling.
Grenade is the right spelling for that word. Dietz may not be a prime author, but he does know how to spell that.
Modifié par nitefyre410, 02 février 2012 - 09:30 .
makenzieshepard wrote...
RiflemanUK wrote...
Interesting, the first is a quote from Retribution and the second is from Deception.Anderson tried to fight back as the gun slipped from his suddenly nerveless fingers by bringing his knee up toward Kai Leng’s groin. But he blocked the move by turning his hips so the blow only struck him in the meat of his thigh.
McCann raised his left hand, and Leng blocked the downward blow, but took a knee in the crotch. Or would have except he turned his hips at the last moment and took the blow on his right thigh.
Interesting is a good word, looks almost like and c+p with just a little word replacement.
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