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[draken-heart]

DoubleMMia wrote...

Hey do you guys remember the extract of a fanfic I was writing for Femshep/Sam? Well I'm now finished it and so I thought I'd just share it with you all if that's alright.

Here you go!  

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8140326/1/

i like it:wizard: very in-line with what i though Samantha thought of Shepard at their first meeting.

[MugenJustice]

themikefest wrote...

^to bad sam couldn't wear a matching hoodie

Never really cared for the hoodie, myself. On the other hand, I absolutely love the standard Normandy uniform. As James Vega would say, Shep (and Sam!) "fills out a uniform like nobody's business."


DoubleMMia - that was a decent fanfic. If I may offer a piece of constructive criticism, I'd recommend using more periods and commas. If you read your sentences aloud, you might find that they're a bit run-on.

I'd say the same can go for the short dialogues other members have written too.

Other than that, good read.

[themikefest]

draken-heart wrote...

DoubleMMia wrote...

Hey do you guys remember the extract of a fanfic I was writing for Femshep/Sam? Well I'm now finished it and so I thought I'd just share it with you all if that's alright.

Here you go!  

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8140326/1/

i like it:wizard: very in-line with what i though Samantha thought of Shepard at their first meeting.

 
top notch DoubleMMia

[themikefest]

MugenJustice wrote...

themikefest wrote...

^to bad sam couldn't wear a matching hoodie

Never really cared for the hoodie, myself. On the other hand, I absolutely love the standard Normandy uniform. As James Vega would say, Shep (and Sam!) "fills out a uniform like nobody's business."


DoubleMMia - that was a decent fanfic. If I may offer a piece of constructive criticism, I'd recommend using more periods and commas. If you read your sentences aloud, you might find that they're a bit run-on.

I'd say the same can go for the short dialogues other members have written too.

Other than that, good read.

I know I need to work on my writing skills .I will put more effort the next time. Thanks for the advice. 

[themikefest]

shep:well sam, here we are having drinks in Vancouver like I said we would.
sam:True but, I still like to go to Paris and Venice.
shep:you do realize that we have our own private shuttle. I can take you anywhere at a moments notice. So no more gloom and doom looks from you ,ok.
sam am sorry, I just wasn't thinking.
shep: now before we settle down with our life, I like to ask a few questions. Nothing bad(putting up her hands in defense)
sam:what questions Lisa.
shep: first off. Are you into video games?
sam;( with a wtf look) no, but before the invasion I played a few times in the barracks. Why?
shep:Have you heard of the game Mass Effect?
sam:yes I have. Its one of the best,if not the best, rpg games there is. Why are you asking?
shep:can you give me a short review of the game?
sam:ok. It is a trilogy, with me3  released about 7 months before the invasion. Anyways, you play as General Michael Perkins, trying to stop a race from taking over the galaxy. You also have the option to play as a female, Mary Perkins.
shep:I take it that you play it and enjoyed it.
sam:yes I did. The best thing is you get to create your charcter the way you want to play the game. You choose who to take on missions and if you want to, pursue a romance.
shep; Is there gonna be an me4?
sam:I would like to see one but, the ending to me3 was not what any one expected. Bioware released a dlc 3 months later that made it alot better. So, yes I do see a me4
shep; alright sam, sorry to keep you in suspence, When we were on the citadel the last time, I met this guy that wanted to talk with me. Don't worry sam, he had his wife with him. His name was Casey Hudson. He told me that he would be interested in using my voice for an upcoming game he was working on.
sam;stop right there Lisa. Come to think of it your voice sounds exactly the same as the lead female.
shep;I told him I would do it if,my soon to wife could have a role in it.(sam smiling ear to ear) Get this, I even said that I like to have her as a romance .
sam:you re a sly one. So, what did he say?
shep:that when we meet with him, he will discuss it more in depth. All we have to do is drop in at the studio in Edmonton and talk.
sam:Thanks Lisa. Well, I suggest we get a copy of the game so you can be familiar with it. Now give your future wife a kiss and lets head home.  

[Frozen83]

MugenJustice wrote...

themikefest wrote...

^to bad sam couldn't wear a matching hoodie

Never really cared for the hoodie, myself. On the other hand, I absolutely love the standard Normandy uniform. As James Vega would say, Shep (and Sam!) "fills out a uniform like nobody's business."

Cortez says to Shep also that "he fills the uniform nicely".
I've actually tried to flirt with San as MShep, just for fun... One of the most awkward scenes in ME. I've left it in my playthorugh and hoped my Shep would always feel like a jerk when talking with Sam. In other, my Sheps were acting just as good friends. It was nice and fuzzy. M.

[themikefest]

it really sucked at the end when you make your choice they show liara instead of Sam. It was frustrating to say the least

[themikefest]

shep calls traynor up to her cabin

sam:Is there something you need commander?
shep:No,I just thought you might like to have a glass of wine with me.
sam:Yes and thank you. Whats the occasion?
shep:2 things. I'm glad that the Turians and Krogans will be throwing their support in the fight against the reapers and I didn't want to drink alone.

sam;Again, thank you.
shep:I've noticed your fitting in well with your duties and showing more confidence. A far cry from when I first met you.
sam:Thank you. 
shep:You know Traynor,you can say more than thank you. I won't be mad if you want to speak your mind.
sam:Alright. I find it refreshing to see a beautiful woman, such as yourself, to have the respect of so many to lead us in the war against the reapers.
shep:(smiling)Thanks for the compliment Traynor. Let me ask you this. Once this war is over,what are your plans for the future?

sam:(her eyes wide open) Well, I am currently writing a book about comms, so I will continue with that. I was thinking of going back to school and than eventually becoming the director of r/d for the alliance. How about you ma'am. What are your plans?
shep:As smart as you are Traynor,I can see you becoming director, even something more.(sam smiles with confidence) My furure depends on what happens with the reapers. Right now, I would retire on Vancouver Island overlooking the Pacific ocean enjoying the breeze and a glass of wine.(smiling at sam)
sam:That sounds wonderful.(at that moment their eyes locked on to each other knowing their future together)

shep;When we arrive at the citadel, and I've taken care of a few things, I wouldn't mind if you come up to play some chess. 
sam:I would like that commander,and again thank you.
shep:Anytime specialist.(as sam leaves shep realizes where her future lies) 

[themikefest]

shep calls traynor up to her cabin

sam:Is there something you need commander?
shep:No,I just thought you might like to have a glass of wine with me.
sam:Yes and thank you. Whats the occasion?
shep:2 things. I'm glad that the Turians and Krogans will be throwing their support in the fight against the reapers and I didn't want to drink alone.

sam;Again, thank you.
shep:I've noticed your fitting in well with your duties and showing more confidence. A far cry from when I first met you.
sam:Thank you. 
shep:You know Traynor,you can say more than thank you. I won't be mad if you want to speak your mind.
sam:Alright. I find it refreshing to see a beautiful woman, such as yourself, to have the respect of so many to lead us in the war against the reapers.
shep:(smiling)Thanks for the compliment Traynor. Let me ask you this. Once this war is over,what are your plans for the future?

sam:(her eyes wide open) Well, I am currently writing a book about comms, so I will continue with that. I was thinking of going back to school and than eventually becoming the director of r/d for the alliance. How about you ma'am. What are your plans?
shep:As smart as you are Traynor,I can see you becoming director, even something more.(sam smiles with confidence) My furure depends on what happens with the reapers. Right now, I would retire on Vancouver Island overlooking the Pacific ocean enjoying the breeze and a glass of wine.(smiling at sam)
sam:That sounds wonderful.(at that moment their eyes locked on to each other knowing their future together)

shep;When we arrive at the citadel, and I've taken care of a few things, I wouldn't mind if you come up to play some chess. 
sam:I would like that commander,and again thank you.
shep:Anytime specialist.(as sam leaves shep realizes where her future lies) 

[themikefest]

oh crap sorry for the double post my bad

[draken-heart]

 hey all, i thought about making a Samantha/fem!Shepard fic, but i want your opinions on some non-sam ones here.

they are x-men evolution ones but i thought they would suffice for a test of my fiction writing, before i get to ME ones.

i brought these up because out of all the comic characters i can think of, Samantha could be either Jean from x-men, or Oracle from DC Universe.

what do you think, if Sam had suerpowers, which ones would she want?

Modifié par draken-heart, 25 mai 2012 - 05:09 .

[themikefest]

^^ am not to familiar with x-men but as smart as sam is she could be Oracle(formerly batgirl) who could help femshep who would be Wonder Woman

[draken-heart]

^ expected that, X-men is a marvel comics comic series. Evolution is the cartoon that goes with it, somewhat (the characters are going to high school, when quite a few of them are adults in the comics). i agree with Sam, not sure about Shepard's Comic alter-ego

[xAmilli0n]

You know, Samantha was my favorite new character in ME3, and I was originally super excited for her romance arc, but after seeing the pretty terrible shower scene (IMO, it could have been executed in a far more effective manner, or used an alternate scene entirely) I was reluctant to even try the romance.

But having completed it finally (and ignoring the shower scene), I gotta say, it is one of the most touching romances in the game, especially considering it was entirely contained in one game.

[themikefest]

^obviously I like sam its just when femshep joins sam in the shower it should of had femshep remove clothing as she was walking to the shower

[themikefest]

James;hey Lola,can we talk in the lounge?
shep;sure,whats going on?(walks in and sees the whole crew standing or sitting)Why is everyone in here?
Garrus:shepard we have a problem with specialist traynor(at that moment shep clenches her fists)
shep:What the h**** are you talking about Garrus?
Ashley; shepard, everyone of us has played chess with her and not won at all
shep:(laughing)I know what you mean,she has beaten me several times.
Tali: we need to find a way to beat her.
shep:Are you guys ganging up on her?
james:no, nothing like that. We just want to have the satisfaction of winning at least once.
shep:I've tried a few times(smiling to herself) with no luck.
liara: there is only 2 solutions 1) we get her drunk or 2) shep you order her to lose
shep:(stunned at what she just heard)Why not play  another game where you  guys may have a better chance of winning? Or is this the fact that the newest crewmember is kicking your a**es?
connelly:its a matter of pride
shep:you guys work this out. And no picking on specialist traynor(shaking her head and smiling as she leaves)

Modifié par themikefest, 27 mai 2012 - 01:37 .

[draken-heart]

Mike: LOL, very funny

[themikefest]

^thanks

[themikefest]

http://t0.gstatic.co...6YKqlA2PJZNni9Vhttp://t3.gstatic.co...CsoWZ_s9YOTlY2w

Modifié par themikefest, 28 mai 2012 - 04:06 .

[draken-heart]

Mike: i love those pics, especially the last one, nervous Sam is nervous.

[Blacklash93]

Sorry guys. I completely forgot I made this for some reason. Updating the OP as soon as I can sort through all the awesome fanart and sigs!

Edit: OP is updated.

Modifié par Blacklash93, 29 mai 2012 - 04:37 .

[themikefest]

Blacklash93 wrote...

Sorry guys. I completely forgot I made this for some reason. Updating the OP as soon as I can sort through all the awesome fanart and sigs!

Edit: OP is updated.

No worries mate, myself as well as others are making sure sam isn't forgotten

[themikefest]

draken-heart wrote...

Mike: i love those pics, especially the last one, nervous Sam is nervous.

thanks.hope to find more

[draken-heart]

that is EDI, Right? in the pic Sam looks like "i don't know whether to grab it or what"

[Ronin09]

Even though I didn't technically didn't dump Liara for Sam in-game cause I flat out ignored Liara in the playthrough that finally made it to ME3. My Femshep's much happier with her, instead of that whiny blue brat.

Modifié par Ronin09, 29 mai 2012 - 03:11 .