Paula Deen wrote...
Because movies and TV shows are generally of such high quality and showcase excellent writing.
Of course film and TV is full of examples of high quality writing. Saying otherwise is ridiculous. Do you really want me to write out a list?
Paula Deen wrote...
Exposition is NOT something to be cut wherever it's not absolutely necessary. Even in good fanfiction, providing exposition as to what the story is about and where it generally aims to go is critical.
I don't often say this, but: lol.
Paula Deen wrote...
With ME3's intro--let's say that I was new to the series. It wouldn't be all that jarring, sure, but only because I have no idea what the hell is going on. Sure, the Reapers are really powerful, apparently want to wipe us out (did it even mention that?), and we have some kind of history with them.
Yes. This is the story about the Reaper invasion; you would expect this to be the focus of the introduction.
Paula Deen wrote...
But that's about it. We don't know that the Reapers regularly harvest or kill all sentient life in the galaxy,(1) or that, contrary to Shepard's EXTREME out-of-character moment, the fight is NOT on Earth,(2) it's all over the freaking galaxy and you need help (or a trump card). You don't even know that other sentient races exist, period,(3) which is ABSURD (the word "batarians" is mentioned once, but that could easily mean someone's nationality).
(1) I believe it's explicitly mentioned in the intro. Even if it weren't, that kind of backstory is much lower priority than the fact they are here now and they are killing us.
(2) the fight is, at that moment, precisely on Earth. The fact you consider a soldier expressing doubts about fleeing the front line an "extreme out of character moment" makes me believe even more strongly that BW would need to record hundreds of lines of dialogue to ensure your Shep could mount an in-character defence of his or her actions on moral issues as enormously complex as Aratoht.
(3) "humanity joined a peaceful galactic civilisation" is again directly mentioned in the intro text, and Anderson urges you explicitly to go get help from the other races.
Paula Deen wrote...
For returning players, it's much clearer in terms of exposition, but it's extremely jarring because it conflicts with what makes sense. Within a few minutes of Shepard lounging about in his room, the Reapers have bulldozed the entire Earth fleet and started laying waste to EVERY major city on Earth.
Which goes completely contradictory to Arrival's (then shocking) claim that the Reapers could be at Earth in two days once arriving at the edge of the galaxy. Given how dozens of colonies rapidly going dark in unprecedented fashion indicates a mass invasion, you'd think people at Alliance HQ wouldn't be so stupidly nonchallant and not even bothering to tell veritable experts on the enemy that they're even in the damn galaxy.
The Reapers could have reached Earth in 2 days if Shep hadn't blown up the relay they were approaching. I think it's pretty clear that the defence committee didn't take much advantage of the warning and the prep time Shepard won for them.
Paula Deen wrote...
Anderson, whom was picked to be on the Council in 95% of playthroughs, is talking like he was never on it, let alone why he isn't still a member at all (which can only be learned OF, let alone why, by reading the most recent ME books).
Anderson was not picked to be on the Council in 100% of the demo playthroughs.
Paula Deen wrote...
Shepard is talking like the Reapers are only attacking Earth,
At the present time there's nothing to suggest that's incorrect.
Paula Deen wrote...
that there isn't much point to leaving Earth at all,
It really doesn't strike you as plausible that Shepard would express doubt about picking up a gun and heading
away from humanity's last stand?