you can quote me if the finished product is ****billy the squid wrote...
DinoSteve wrote...
still its only a demo
Famous last words.
I'm disappointed with the quaity of writing present in the demo.
#26
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:47
#27
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:49
Modifié par FluffyScarf, 15 février 2012 - 01:50 .
#28
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:49
give me 2 examples, and i will belive[/quote]
"i owe you one"
".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*
"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"
pretty much every line in this demo was cringe[/quote]
Seemed normal to me. Except for the kid--that kid is a creeper.
#29
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:49
theSteeeeels wrote...
super4star wrote...
Atakuma wrote...
I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?
give me 2 examples, and i will belive
"i owe you one"
".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*
"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"
pretty much every line in this demo was cringe
"*shep whinge* But what if they don't listen?"
A lot of the delivery feels very Days of our lives as well..
#30
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:50
DinoSteve wrote...
indeed there is another thread exactly like this
I'd imagine this thread is a troll
I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”
#31
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:52
#32
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:52
#33
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:53
#34
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:53
#35
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:54
#36
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:54
Forumite immaturity at its best. Happens all the time, KBomb. It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.KBomb wrote...
I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”
But I disagree with Atakuma. Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia. That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.
Modifié par AdmiralCheez, 15 février 2012 - 01:56 .
#37
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:55
#38
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:56
AdmiralCheez wrote...
Forumite immaturity at its best.KBomb wrote...
I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”
Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia. That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.
Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm:O.
#39
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:57
Arbiter156 wrote...
name and explain why certain lines are bad/ cheesy + back up your argument with rational reasoning rather than opinion otherwise im not gonna see your point.
honestly half of the people who complain about story/writing couldnt write to save their lives.
I am sorry but when the kid says you can't help me I was like what the hell then his death means nothing to me if I can not try to help him . Plus Anderson acting like a dumb ass claiming they don't know what it is really I mean 2 games and he still has no idea its the reapers . At least what I get from the demo is we will spend most of ME 3 collecting forces instead of actually fighting a war vs the reapers . they talk about a war but there is not much fighting a war and more about collecting allies really I did that in ME 2 I would like to go and kick the reaper's ass . Plus please god tell me its not shepard must prove sh*t to people again crap like in ME 1
#40
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:57
Do yourself a favor, close your eyes, and just listen to her lines.CptBomBom00 wrote...
Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm.
You will discover that ME3's cheesy writing isn't all that bad.
#41
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:58
Killitngrillit wrote...
DinoSteve wrote...
still its only a demo
oh please, that's what people always say. How much things get fixed after a demo? not much, take BF3 for example. In fact the release was worse then the demo/beta.
well to be fair, this is the same demo that leaked several months ago. So what we are getting today is something that was made months ago. Remember that bioware said they were slightly altering the story based on the horrible fan reaction to the leaked script. Who knows what else they changed.
#42
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:58
AdmiralCheez wrote...
Forumite immaturity at its best. Happens all the time, KBomb. It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.KBomb wrote...
I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”
But I disagree with Atakuma. Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia. That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.
indeed
bioware games have always had cheese and Benezia was just wow (plus her clevage puts ashley and miranda to shame)
Modifié par Cuddlezarro, 15 février 2012 - 01:58 .
#43
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:58
uhm no, I don't know when the last time was you watched that show but uhm no.Icinix wrote...
theSteeeeels wrote...
super4star wrote...
Atakuma wrote...
I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?
give me 2 examples, and i will belive
"i owe you one"
".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*
"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"
pretty much every line in this demo was cringe
"*shep whinge* But what if they don't listen?"
A lot of the delivery feels very Days of our lives as well..
And none of these lines you people are bringing up are actually cringe worthy the only that was kinda bad was "we fight or we die, that's the plan".
#44
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:58
#45
Posté 15 février 2012 - 01:58
Atakuma wrote...
I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?
Quality of writing is something that is legitimate to complain about. I disagree, but it is a subjective issue. I think you should include specific examples of bad quality that stood out to you in the demo and also explain what "good" quality writing actually is, maybe by giving a few examples there too. That would make for better discussion.
#46
Posté 15 février 2012 - 02:00
Let's not tempt fate now, y'hear?AdmiralCheez wrote...
Forumite immaturity at its best. Happens all the time, KBomb. It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.
But I disagree with Atakuma. Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia. That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.
#47
Posté 15 février 2012 - 02:00
#48
Posté 15 février 2012 - 02:00
Modifié par Atakuma, 15 février 2012 - 02:02 .
#49
Posté 15 février 2012 - 02:00
AdmiralCheez wrote...
Do yourself a favor, close your eyes, and just listen to her lines.CptBomBom00 wrote...
Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm.
You will discover that ME3's cheesy writing isn't all that bad.
you know, i might jst do that:lol:.
#50
Posté 15 février 2012 - 02:01
Biotic Sage wrote...
Atakuma wrote...
I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?
Quality of writing is something that is legitimate to complain about. I disagree, but it is a subjective issue. I think you should include specific examples of bad quality that stood out to you in the demo and also explain what "good" quality writing actually is, maybe by giving a few examples there too. That would make for better discussion.
THIS.
It's hard to tell what people consider cheesy.
For example, I've seen people consider the Anderson line afer he saves shepard as cheesy but weirdly, I jsut thought it was well "normal".





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