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I'm disappointed with the quaity of writing present in the demo.


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billy the squid wrote...

DinoSteve wrote...

still its only a demo


Famous last words.

you can quote me if the finished product is ****

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Lagrim had no memorable lines whatsoever. Didn't stop OP from buying it and loving it. Didn't stop it from getting GOTY. Didn't stop it from winning an award for 'best story' or whatever.

Modifié par FluffyScarf, 15 février 2012 - 01:50 .


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[quote]theSteeeeels wrote...

give me 2  examples, and i will belive[/quote]

"i owe you one"

".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*


"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"


pretty much every line in this demo was cringe[/quote]
Seemed normal to me.  Except for the kid--that kid is a creeper.

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theSteeeeels wrote...

super4star wrote...

Atakuma wrote...

I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?


give me 2  examples, and i will belive


"i owe you one"

".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*


"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"


pretty much every line in this demo was cringe


"*shep whinge* But what if they don't listen?"

A lot of the delivery feels very Days of our lives as well..

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DinoSteve wrote...

indeed there is another thread exactly like this


I'd imagine this thread is a troll




 
I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”

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The second half of the demo was a little more reassuring, and from the leaked beta I know that there is still some quality conversations that were cut from the demo, some involving Mordin. But yes, I would not go into ME3 expecting the game to be anything more than an attempt at a Hollywood blockbuster. Mac Walters has made his vision for the franchise pretty clear with ME2 and all the comics. He loves this kind of lazy drivel.

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and it also odd how the same thread keeps springing up out of know where

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in B4 the lock

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 Was is hammy?  I don't know, can someone tell me?  After "WIngs of Liberty" I'm too desensitized to tell anymore.

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Just like how Todd Howard turned what was once a deep, imaginative RPG into a bland, repetitive, uninspiring mess known as S*!%rim.

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KBomb wrote...

I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”

Forumite immaturity at its best.  Happens all the time, KBomb.  It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.

But I disagree with Atakuma.  Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia.  That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.

Modifié par AdmiralCheez, 15 février 2012 - 01:56 .


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Im just hoping no praying that the pc version has some type of joystick support. 59 dollars should warrant that compatibilty!

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AdmiralCheez wrote...

KBomb wrote...

I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”

Forumite immaturity at its best.

Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia.  That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.


Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm:O.

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Arbiter156 wrote...

name and explain why certain lines are bad/ cheesy + back up your argument with rational reasoning rather than opinion otherwise im not gonna see your point.

honestly half of the people who complain about story/writing couldnt write to save their lives.

  


I am sorry but when the kid says you can't help me I was like what the hell then his death means nothing to me if I can not try to help him . Plus Anderson acting like a dumb ass claiming they don't know what it is really I mean 2 games and he still has no idea its the reapers . At least what I get from the demo is we will spend most of ME 3 collecting forces instead of actually fighting a war vs the reapers . they talk about a war but there is not much fighting a war and more about collecting allies really I did that in ME 2 I would like to go and kick the reaper's ass . Plus please god tell me its not shepard must prove sh*t to people again crap like in ME 1

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CptBomBom00 wrote...

Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm.

Do yourself a favor, close your eyes, and just listen to her lines.

You will discover that ME3's cheesy writing isn't all that bad.

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Killitngrillit wrote...

DinoSteve wrote...

still its only a demo


oh please, that's what people always say. How much things get fixed after a demo? not much, take BF3 for example. In fact the release was worse then the demo/beta.


well to be fair, this is the same demo that leaked several months ago. So what we are getting today is something that was made months ago. Remember that bioware said they were slightly altering the story based on the horrible fan reaction to the leaked script. Who knows what else they changed. 

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AdmiralCheez wrote...

KBomb wrote...

I don’t think I have ever seen a post where Atakuma has trolled. Just because someone isn’t satisfied with the dialog or writing doesn’t make them a troll. Odd how the word “troll” has been transformed into meaning “Disagreeing with the masses.”

Forumite immaturity at its best.  Happens all the time, KBomb.  It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.

But I disagree with Atakuma.  Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia.  That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.


indeed

bioware games have always had cheese and Benezia was just wow (plus her clevage puts ashley and miranda to shame)

Modifié par Cuddlezarro, 15 février 2012 - 01:58 .


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Icinix wrote...

theSteeeeels wrote...

super4star wrote...

Atakuma wrote...

I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?


give me 2  examples, and i will belive


"i owe you one"

".... you owe me 2" *smug smirk*


"everybodys.... DYING!!! *waaa*"


pretty much every line in this demo was cringe


"*shep whinge* But what if they don't listen?"

A lot of the delivery feels very Days of our lives as well..

uhm no, I don't know when the last time was you watched that show but uhm no.  
And none of these lines you people are bringing up are actually cringe worthy the only that was kinda bad was "we fight or we die, that's the plan".  

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Lol. I liked the opening and don't understand how you could get the writers real intent in 1 to 2 hours of a 50 or so hour game.

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Atakuma wrote...

I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?


Quality of writing is something that is legitimate to complain about.  I disagree, but it is a subjective issue.  I think you should include specific examples of bad quality that stood out to you in the demo and also explain what "good" quality writing actually is, maybe by giving a few examples there too.  That would make for better discussion.

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AdmiralCheez wrote...
Forumite immaturity at its best.  Happens all the time, KBomb.  It's up to us to seperate legit criticism from wangst.
But I disagree with Atakuma.  Personally, I don't think anything can outcheese Benezia.  That busty old broad set the bar pretty high.

Let's not tempt fate now, y'hear?

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Whats the fuss, make what you will of it.

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Pretty much everything Shepard says to the committee is completely weightless and melodramatic which makes Shepard sound like an idiot.

Modifié par Atakuma, 15 février 2012 - 02:02 .


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AdmiralCheez wrote...

CptBomBom00 wrote...

Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Benezia, those breasts, hmmmmmmmm.

Do yourself a favor, close your eyes, and just listen to her lines.

You will discover that ME3's cheesy writing isn't all that bad.


you know, i might jst do that:lol:.

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Biotic Sage wrote...

Atakuma wrote...

I knew the game was going to have it's fair share of cheese, but that demo contained some of the most ham-fisted dialougue I've ever seen in a bioware game. I mean it was just filled with dumb one liners and stilted conversations.
Is this what I can expect the rest of the game to be like?


Quality of writing is something that is legitimate to complain about.  I disagree, but it is a subjective issue.  I think you should include specific examples of bad quality that stood out to you in the demo and also explain what "good" quality writing actually is, maybe by giving a few examples there too.  That would make for better discussion.


THIS.

It's hard to tell what people consider cheesy.

For example, I've seen people consider the Anderson line afer he saves shepard as cheesy but weirdly, I jsut thought it was well "normal".