Cheesy dialogue
#1
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:08
Am I the only who found that the scene in the courtroom in the beginning was really badly written?
Honestly, Shepard saying ' We fight or we die! Thats the plan ' What the heck! A 12 year old could write better dialogue. Honestly I would have like some great sci fi story! Whe Me 1 came out It was great. I would have hoped improvement in the writing. But honestly, beginning me3 like broke my fun!
#2
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:08
#3
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:10
#4
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:11
like "OH now that the Reapers are HERE you want to plan...Sorry you had years... times up."
#5
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:11
#6
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:14
#7
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:17
#8
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:20
Eain wrote...
I think everyone's on agreement that it was pretty atrocious, save a certain few biodrones who will shovel hate onto all forms of criticism.
Again, folks are throwing that "everyone" around again. Did the meaning change while I was in the bathroom? 'Cause last I checked I was part of "everyone." I mean I'll check, but I'm pretty sure...
#9
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:21
#10
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:22
#11
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:24
#12
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:31
honestly, its not like he had time to think of anything elaborate. he's only a commander, leave the intricate plans to the Admirals and Generals and what have you.
I personally would have liked him to have said "TONIGHT WE DINE IN HELL!!!" then jump out the window brandishing a sword and shield and charge at the Reapers head on. that would have been awsome
#13
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:35
#14
Posté 18 février 2012 - 12:56
Rrezz wrote...
would you rather Cmdr Shepard have said "out there! out there is a bright wonderful world full of sunshine and hope, we must go out there and capture it!"
honestly, its not like he had time to think of anything elaborate. he's only a commander, leave the intricate plans to the Admirals and Generals and what have you.
He/Shes only a commander that has more time in fighting the reapers than anyone else. Its like
Commitee Chairperson: "Ok we were wrong Shepard, now surely you havent just been sitting there with your thumb up your butt. You've got to have some kind of plan, someone you know/worked with who might have info or some kind of contingency? (cough Miranda/TIM) but they are from me2 so thats a no-no
Shepard: "First off, don't call me Sherly. Secondly, Heres the plan... We fight? Or we die?"
Commitee:
#15
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:10
#16
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:17
#17
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:19
Dave Exclamation Mark Yognaut wrote...
Dude, cheesy dialogue is part of the mass effect experience. Just look at Jacob: without the priiiize, nobody would even remember he existed.
Look at this... heavy risk....
#18
Guest_aLucidMind_*
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:21
Guest_aLucidMind_*
iSpitfireee wrote...
Cheesy dialogue sells... Just look at Uncharted 3
Just look at damn near every video game
Modifié par aLucidMind, 18 février 2012 - 01:22 .
#19
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:26
Modifié par tetrisblock4x1, 18 février 2012 - 01:28 .
#20
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:26
#21
Posté 18 février 2012 - 01:27
Eain wrote...
I think everyone's on agreement that it was pretty atrocious, save a certain few biodrones who will shovel hate onto all forms of criticism.
who's everyone? i certainly don't agree, i think it's only certain few people like you who would think it's atrocious. Biodrone? i think that's just being used to try and combat the use of being called a hater. not that i'm calling you one though
#22
Posté 18 février 2012 - 02:47
You are not always going to have great dialog. Some is bad and some is good and it varies by opinion. I personally thought the line was trying to be dynamic but failing somewhat. Better would have been we try to hold them off until we can get help from the council, because the whole galaxy is next. it doesn't have as much bravado though. It sounds more tactical though.
#23
Posté 18 février 2012 - 02:51
You must be psychic!
Some lines were "cheesy" but honestly. What do you expect Shepard to say? There really is no plan, at least not yet, beyond "Try not to get obliterated too quickly".
#24
Posté 18 février 2012 - 02:55
Soundsystem wrote...
There really is no plan.
WE FIGHT OR WE DIE, THATS THE PLAN.
#25
Posté 18 février 2012 - 02:55
also "we don;'t need to think about strategy or tactics, this is about survival"





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