Hey folks checking in -
I just posted this in the ME3 suggested changes forum
Right; there has been some awesome posts -
I'll just cliff note because most have covered everything already.
One - Starchild goes against cannon set in the other games - you find out ME 1 - Reapers control the Cid; not the other way around; Its a giant relay that they use to spring upon goverment to take out the leaders - makes it easier then to wipe out the civis. Reason why this fails is because Proth set up the sabatosh*sp*
Two - blowing up a mass Relay - again cannon shows us - you take one out - bye bye solar system. Its a super nova like blast. Talk about wth moment. You've just become the worst genocide in history. You have wiped out the galaxy in one of 3 color coded choices.
3 - what the hell happened to Dark matter? It was pretty big in ME 1; and it was everywhere in ME 2?? So suddenly Dark matter is gone; we don't know why it was threat; if it was or what the hell was it? Did it just decide to pack up and go into a black hole? You can't leave that massive amount of cannon of the end - or if you're setting up for later - make sure you write it in.
4 - Macduff - Deus Ex Machina endning - sorry as a writer - there's no excuse for this. Its weak writing. I know I'm sounding harsh; but as writers we have to be willing to deal with it. This is why we work with publishers and they smack us around when we want to do something like this. You gave us so many amazing stories within here; just in ME3 alone; Mordin dieing curing Geophage - amazing - Legion - Thane - emergency induction port........Come on; I dont' need to say more.
5 - you said there are amazing 16 different endings. No there is one ending that pallette change. Ok, Ok; I'll give the fact you blow up the earth or big ben also. So 3 slightly pallette colored changing endings; or as one poor soul tweeted. One as he's color blind. That is all that needs to be said there.
6 - Quest system; what happened to it?? its there but then hides from you going; you got to guess if you've complete; oh you failed timed mission. There was a timed mission?!?! This is supposed to be an rpg; working quest log is a must.
7 - What happened to being able to go up and randomly talk to anyone? I so missed that in ME3 - I loved the fact in ME 1 and ME 2 I could talk to anyone; didn't matter they would talk to me. If they have something to say to me; they would; or they'd blow me off; but at least they'd talk to me...and not just snub me
Right that's out of the way.
What was done right? Most of the game; I mean even the bits with the quest log and not being able to talk to anyone. That didn't bug me all that much as the stories were that well put together. You really crafted those well - this wasn't just Shepard's story - this was our Shepard's story. We were living it; feeling it breathing it. That's success.
Indoctrintion - if you actually meant it; its a great way to write yourself out of this mess of an ending. Set up final fight with Harbringer or TIM if you still want; or both? War assets allow to see how we actually do. I mean the amount of fire power we're hold is bigger than anything the Reapers ever seen even with Protheans. I can easily see why they tried to take down Shepard right then and there. You take out the leader; the system........you take the fight out rest of them. You don't.......you're screwed.
This wasn't a bittersweet ending because to end - is to give closure. There was none; this was like a 1930's radio cliffhanger with Rockteer - Lone Ranger. I'd prefer to have the chance to actually pull off the impossible again - that's the legend - that is what we've built over the last 3 games. Doing the impossible; never giving up hope.......
I'd love to have blue babies with Liara with this build I have with Shepard; or my other one - build that house for Tali.....
Sure if we screw up - don't bring enough war assets; we die; you can even set it up for reapers to wipe us out; bittersweet.......we win but our Shepard dies in getting that win. Those we can live with. Choices - we were told they'd matter. We weren't going to get A, B or C ending.......and you weren't doing a Lost....
Right now the way the ending is - you've done all three - If rumors are true; this was done because of the leak - and DLC "The Truth" is actually coming - but its not finalized as you're getting our input. I will bow to you and say bravo - because then - closure - being actually able to win or not - you will have insanely pulled off - indoctrinating not just our Shepards.........but us also - thus creating one of the best games I've played ever. Even with those small niggles......
I sign this;
Meldarth Shepard - I WILL HOLD THE LINE