My idea how a hallucination ending would play out assuming Shepherd wakes up. It's very rough, the dialog is probably shoddy, but the idea of what you are doing is what is important:
This is just my first draft in my idea how the indoctrination could work.
Foggy voice: ..pherd
Foggy voice: ….Shepherd…
Hacket: SHEPHERD!?!
<Shepherd wakes up woozy>
Hackett: SHEPHERD!?!
Shepherd: Shepherd here….I’m alright
<Shepherd coughs>
Hackett: What
happened down there? Our readings show that mostly everyone was wiped out.
Shepherd: How long have you been trying to hail me, sir?
Hackett: Maybe only 20 seconds since that beam hit near your
vicinity.
Shepherd: Harbinger is down here pounding us. Hard to see,but I don’t really see any of our forces. I don’t think anyone made it to the conduit.
<squad members start to regain consciousness and dust off
rubble >
Shepherd: Hackett, there’ssomething I think I figured out.
Hackett: What’s that,Shepherd?
Shepherd: It’s hard to explain, but I could fell, err well I felt something.
Hackett: It doesn’t look like you have a lot of time to explain that. Harbinger looks to have been distracted at some of our other forces to the east, but he looks like he is turning back his attention to you.
Sheperd: Well, sir, I need you to believe me when I say I have to enter the conduit. The citadel….the citadel is the answer afterall.
<squad mates gather around Shepherd>
Hackett: Alright son, We will try and buy you some time. Get to that conduit.
<Harbinger turns back to Shepherd and crew starts charging his laser>
Shepherd: RUN!
<Harbinger takes an artillery volley to the side, the laser hits well behind Shepherd and company>
<Shepherd and company reach the conduit and are immediately ported to the Citadel>
<Shepherd and company arrive in a room all too similar to where he just was before waking up. But there are no bodies>
Garrus: Shepherd, tell us what the hell is going on.
<Husks start to appear>
Shepherd: No time.
<Husk battle ensues in the long corridor>
<The squad reaches the big room, but it looks different. The middle beam is still present, but to
either side are panels>
<Shepherd closes the doors with more husks reappearing behind them, sealing off the room>
Garrus: Alright Shepherd, we have a minute, tell us what is going on.
Shepherd: How did thecitadel reach Earth?
Ashley: Giant tug boat ships?
Shepherd: No, the citadel has a hidden propulsion system and we just found its control room.
EDI: Shepherd appears to be correct.
Shepherd: But that is not all I suspect. When I was out cold I had a vision, that the citadel is the source of the Reapers power.
Tali: How is that possible?
Garrus: Well the Reapers did say they built the Citadel.
<Husks battering the door>
Ashley: So what are we going to do, blow up the citadel? Remember the citadel is one giant relay, and you remember what happened the last time we blew up one of those right? And sitting in Earth’s orbit….it would kill everybody….
Shepherd: Edi, I need you to interface with the citadel, I think from the left panel there. We need to move the citadel, we don’t have much time.
<Husks battering the door gets louder>
Garrus: Sheperd, I’m with you but whats going to be the plan?
Shepherd: You’ll see…but in the mean time those husks are going to break down the door any second, and it sounds like an army of them…
<Door starts to bend under the relentless force>
Shepherd: Alright, we need 3 groups, one to cover our right flank, one to cover our left and one here in the middle.
<Select right flank squad, 2 members>
<Select left flank squad, 2 members>
<Shepherd remaining members cover middle>
<Edi interfacing with the Citadel>
<Door bursts open>
<Most epic husk battle ensues including Krogan, Drell and even Hanar husks, entirely scripted event that forces you to switch between squads><Kill off the husk army that pushes you to your limits>
Edi: Shepherd, I have interfaced with the Citadel. I even found an underlying weapons system not previously found in citadel archives, which is now accessible on the council…..I see the Reaper code, it’s….perfect….it runs through the entire citadel….
Shepherd: Edi no time, can you access the crucible’s and citadel’s power cores?
Edi: I see where you are going with this Shepherd.
Tali: But Sheperd…won’t you kill everyone?
Shepherd: No, we send the citadel where no one gets harmed
Ashley: Where in the galaxy is that….? The citadel is 100 times the size of the relay that killed all those Batarians…
Sheperd: I’m not thinking in this galaxy…we send it back to where those Reaper bastards came from
Garrus: Dark space…?
Vega: I knew calling you Loco was the right name.
Sheperd: Edi, set the timer for 30 minutes, that should give us plenty of time to evacuate and enough travel time for the citadel to reach dark space.
Edi: Alright, Citadel and Crucible eezo cores set to erupt in 30 minutes, Shepherd. The explosion should be enough to wipe out the entire citadel.
Liara: We need to get out of here.
Sheperd: Alright folks, let’s get out of here
<Team falls back to the conduit point and one by one are
transported back to Earth>
<All the team except Sheperd and his love interest have
been ported back to the surface>
Mysterious but recognizable voice: SSSSHEEPERDDD!
<The dome retracts and Harbinger is floating above>
<Shepherd turns to his love interest>
Shepherd: Get out of here, this is something I have to take care of.
Love Interest: We have come so far, I can’t lose you now
Sheperd: You won’t, now go!
<Love interest reluctantly enters the conduit>
<Shepherd turns around to face Harbinger>
Harbinger: Shepherd, you resisted me. I gave you the chance at salvation! To immortality! To deity!
Shepherd: Alright you bastard…..this is it for once and all. I am going to send you are your mechanical asses to hell.
Harbinger: You cannot win Shepherd. I know your plan. I will crush you like the insect you are are retake the citadel.
<Shepherd puts on his helmet just as Harbinger uses his laser to blow open the giant room. Shepherd holds on to railing as the room depresuurizes>
<The entire citadel shakes causing parts of the citadel to fall>
<a 25 minute timer starts and a one on one fight between Harbinger and Shepherd begins. Shepherd has to evade Harbinger lasers that destroy cover. New cover is provided by rubble that falls. Sheperd has to do enough damage to Harbingers “eye” so Harbinger covers up, which leaves enough time for Shepherd to activate Citadel weapons. Citadel weapons have to recharge because all power is being diverted to the eezo cores. It takes multiple shots from Citadel weapons to finally defeat Harbinger><Harbinger, now riddled with holes, takes one more shot from the citadel and slumps down and lands 10 feet from Shepherd>
Harbinger: Why could you have not taken our salvation Shepherd? You have doomed everyone!
Shepherd (Paragon option): Because it was not your salvation to give. Organics decide for themselves.
Shepherd(Renegade option): Because you wandered into the wrong organic you squid bastard. <Sheperd spits on Harbinger>
<The timer is ticking the entire time and you have to find a shuttle before the timer reaches zero. If timer reaches zero, Sheperd gets blown up with the citadel in dark space. So you have to be fast in your fight with Harbinger. If you make it in time, you jettison out into hyperspace and get to watch the citadel explode in glorious fashion>
Ships Navi-computer: Nearest mass relay sir is 98797987 kmaway. Do you wish to plot a course?
Shepherd: Take me home. Take me to Earth.
<Queue epilogue and credits>
Modifié par Leafs43, 13 mars 2012 - 03:40 .