Very cool!This inspires me to write my own ending.BIOWARE, YOU'VE ALMOST MADE THE PERFECT GAME, MAKE ONE FINAL PUSH!
The best re-wright of the Endings I've seen, it's the one I accept as canon
Débuté par
Shwiggliness
, mars 12 2012 05:01
#26
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:27
#27
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:29
nice, and all for about another 250megs of data (which could have been the DLC)...
#28
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:32
Hmmm... Very Nice
#29
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:34
I like these endings better, even though they get a little too sappy at times.
http://social.biowar...index/9792751/1
http://social.biowar...index/9792751/1
#30
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:34
Very well done.
It respects the heroic nature of the protagonist, instead of turning him into a submissive dupe like what the BW writers have done.
Could even have Shepard dying after his last breath of hope and encouragement, to add poignancy - tho allowing differing choices made during the game determine this would be best.
This ending stays true to the narrative form of the epic heroic figure. BW's writing talent should return to Writing 101 and re-learn what the writer/reader contract is all about.
With this ending in my mind, I feel better about ME lol. Perhaps I can replay the ME series after all, so long as I tab-out after poor Anderson dies.
It respects the heroic nature of the protagonist, instead of turning him into a submissive dupe like what the BW writers have done.
Could even have Shepard dying after his last breath of hope and encouragement, to add poignancy - tho allowing differing choices made during the game determine this would be best.
This ending stays true to the narrative form of the epic heroic figure. BW's writing talent should return to Writing 101 and re-learn what the writer/reader contract is all about.
With this ending in my mind, I feel better about ME lol. Perhaps I can replay the ME series after all, so long as I tab-out after poor Anderson dies.
Modifié par Drogonion, 12 mars 2012 - 07:36 .
#31
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:39
Yeh that ending would have made bags more sense.
#32
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:40
This ending is so much more satisfying and a lot better.
#33
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:41
Impressive, very well done
#34
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:46
Bravo!
#35
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 07:47
The ending I tried for, and the ending I will never see... and a nice epilogue of some blue kids running around as their mother remembers me and what I did.
#36
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:03
Very Very Well Done. This is the second fan fiction ending that I have read that is infinitely superior to the ones bioware developed.
#37
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:05
I like this, I made my own story but this runs in parallel with what we have already seen, and doesn't change much it just gives us another choice. If Shepard Survives I really want the ability to talk to everyone again on Earth being rebuilt.
#38
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:17
That ending was incredibly good written and ten times better than the ones that Bioware delivered (sadly)
#39
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:18
I love this ending. F*********G BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
#40
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:23
Yes, yes, yes.
#41
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:24
That was an amazing read!
#42
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:26
Ah ... that would have been awesome.
#43
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:29
That wasn't bad. I found the ending that I chose fitting and don't really have complaints (but a desire for more exposition about certain things). However, this seems like it would have solved many people's problems if it had been a fourth option.
#44
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:32
This is very excellent! great job. Bioware take note, please.
#45
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:33
I like it.
#46
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:33
Great job, I read this while listening to the soundtrack and it was just amazing!
Thanks for putting your ending out for everyone to enjoy!
Thanks for putting your ending out for everyone to enjoy!
#47
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:35
This ending is fantastic. If Bioware did ANYTHING remotely similar to this, I would have been more than satisfied. It gave me goosebumps and after I got done reading it, I sent it to all my friends who got done with ME3.
I think the best part of this ending is what Shepard says "We'll take our damn chances" or something like that. How very Shepard to say :3
I think the best part of this ending is what Shepard says "We'll take our damn chances" or something like that. How very Shepard to say :3
#48
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:42
and all LI should have epilogue's, Building Tali a house on Rannoch, little blue children with Liara and so on
#49
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:44
While i don't agree with all the dialogue choices I will say the ending dialogue, and end of the scene are fantastic. Awesome.
That must have been one hell of a breakfast, because the tail end of that speech gave me goosebumps....seriously.
That must have been one hell of a breakfast, because the tail end of that speech gave me goosebumps....seriously.
#50
Posté 12 mars 2012 - 08:47
Oooh.. bump for good writing!





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