Omnike wrote...
jeweledleah wrote...
Archonsg wrote...
No, its okay if Shepard dies on ONE of the endings. Your actions, your choices, your assets, everything you have done in the past 5 years, over the course of 3 games SHOULD MATTER.
We were promised MULTIPLE endings. Why can't a "happy, Shepard lives" be one of them?
you are one of the very few people saying that. most are going - we're fine with no happy endings, we're fine with Shepard always dying.
I have no problem with Shepard dying some of the time. in fact - make the death mean something - make it save more lives. for most people though? they expect Shepard not to live through the war. ever. regardless of the choices. and this makes me lose hope. I want at least some of my Shepards to have an option to survive and go on with their lives. I'm apparently in a minority.
That's kind of the point of the whole series right? Like, your Shepard will die if he didn't make the right choices leading up to him surviving. Because if someone asked me to attach a single word to Mass Effect, it would be choice. Our choices should actually impact the last 10 minutes. If they had actually kept their promise of 16 DIFFERENT endings, I almost feel like one of them would have to be happy. Can't really do anything but ignore the hipsters saying "death is art".
Yeah. So how about this, its incomplete. Just got around to writing it maybe what, an hour or so ago thinking up stuff. The first part is more or less the same as my other post, just scroll down to the " final moments / epilogues " if you have read my other endings before. But this time
Shepard lives.Choices, Closure and the EpilogueBy far the biggest let down would be the lack of the above. I honestly think that had Bioware gave players all three, even the illogical ending would not have stung so much. Hell, I'll probably ignore everything I know about physics and happily put it all to "space magic" AND NOT BE this angry had I been given a choice, had MY choices over the past 3 games be made relevant and counted for something
and lastly an epilogue (preferably epic in scale) of sorts made available to the player and say to the player, "This is what you did over the course of 5 years, playing our game and supporting it, thank you."Instead we go the "A,B,C choice ending that was said that Mass Effect would NEVER have.
All my game saves, which includes:
1) Paragon Shepard Male, Romanced Ashley / Liara/ Miranda / Tali / Jack, stayed true
2) Paragon Shepard Male, Romanced Ashley / Liara/ Miranda / Tali / Jack , played the field
3) Renegade Shepard Male ..... ect.
4) Paragade / and Renegon (mix of high Paragon / Renegade slanting towards one end or the other)
24 of them (including Femsheps) to be exact.
Needless to say NONE I now feel compelled to play, or replay with or without any future DLCs you might want to sell. Why would I since NONE of my choices mattered?
What is even sadder is that I have to come up with something, anything to "replay" at least in my own mind so that I could find some closure instead of the ending we got.
I have already posted this before on the another thread but will post here and hope it gives those who haven't seen it, see
an ending complete with all their favourite characters voices imagined in their heads :
(Version 1.02a Paragon Shepard Lives) My version of events scraps everything right after the combined Galactic fleet enters Earth space, assumes the player has completed all side quests and has at least 3300 EMS.
Why only 3300?
I feel that “forcing” players to play Multi-player just to get the “best” possible ending is rubbish.
Higher EMS just skews a slightly different cut scene of your ground troops. Higher EMS = more varied troops based on which races you have recruited to the cause.
The trigger on what causes Shepard to live or die, his personal romances.
Ideally he should have stayed true over at least 2 games to his Love Interest AND have that love interest with him at the end fight. It would be awesome if Bioware allowed for this since I have always thought that Shepard's "romances" while wonderful, still are just "one night things"
More importantly, I want these romances to mean something in the greater scheme of things and not just fan service (though, very much appreciated fan service they are!!)
Making his romance the key to his / or her living or dying. That would be awesome.
A word on Gay romances. I do understand that this has just only been added in ME3. Thus for all intents and purposes, as long as you do not sample the ladies, stayed true in both ME1 and 2 or even if you just started playing ME with ME3, as long as you stay true, Kaiden will be flagged as your “protector”. This is regardless of whether you are romancing Kaiden or Cortez since Cortez cannot be part of your Squad.
This ending also assumes you have saved every companion in ME2 (just mentally edit them out if you got yours killed) and Assumes that certain paths are followed in ME3. Again you can mentally edit those characters out of the cut scenes if yours are absent or dead.
For this run I am going to use Tali as the assumed LI and Shepard to be male. (Just switch him for her if your Shepard is female) Also this is an entire “re-write” of events in London. So no, I don’t follow the Shepard was indoctrinated” school of thought. Sorry shep-zombie fans.
And no Star Child crap either. Sorry Bioware.(No, not really)
Scenario:Shepard deploys his remaining surviving followers.
The final push has key points (say 4) that needs to be bolstered for Hammer to hit and kill the Guardian. This is where your assets come into play, for good or ill depending on what resources you have managed to gather.
Cut Scene Combined Galactic ground forces consisting of all the forces and assets Shepard has gathered. Krogan on Keiosaur mounts charging and overrunning Reaper positions, Geth and Quarian engineers setting up hack proof auto turrets to lay cover fire, mercenaries and Batarians fighting dirty in hand to hand, pistol shot to the face combat, Turian and Human infantry and armour supported by Asari commandoes led by Samara, Grissom Academy (Jack!) Biotics and Miradanda and ex-cerberus biotics led by Aresh, form a linked shield system and together they all carve a path and take down the Guardian at the Conduit.
Shepard and team go in, and it’s a race find the master control and open the Citadel Arms so that that Crucible can dock.
Shepard and team fights way to Citadel central command room which EDI helps to pin point. Within the Citadel itself Shepard faces a combined force of indoctrinated Cerberus forces and reaper forces.
Midpoint Cut Scene.Harbinger’s holo appears and in the course of talking to it. Shepard learns that the Reapers were once AI meant to protect a race, created at a time when there was another war of organics and Synthetics. The AI’s primary directive was to Protect and dictate the race’s war efforts. In the course of time the AI decided that to win the war against Synthetics, organics had to become Synthetics themselves and thus the Reapers and Cycles came about.
Harbinger shows nothing but disdain for Shepard, for all organics. It demands that Shepard submit as it is the only way to salvation that it is the only logical outcome.
Shepard tells it to go to hell.
Harbinger then tells Shepard that Organic life in this Cycle had become too much of a problem, that order was disrupted when Sovereign was destroyed and later the planned entry point in Batarian space blocked.
That it has decided that the best solution for the current situation now, is for the galaxy to reboot itself and life and the Cycle can start anew.
Shepard is confused by what it meant till Admiral Hackett communicates that reports are coming in that Charon's Mass Relay is powering up, gathering Charge at a rate that make it go critical and cause Ultra Super Nova.
Harbinger tells Shepard that it will cleanse reboot the Galaxy one relay at a time once its done here on earth.
Everyone is shocked and horrified by the implications.
Harbinger gloats that order will be restored and the Cycle can start anew again.
Shepard Speech.
Chooses final Squad members and forges on.
Last checkpoint.Shepard Meets Illusive man who holds the final key to unlocking the Citadel.
The Illusive man lays it all out, from what he has pieced together.
The Citadel is not only a huge mass relay, it is also the Reaper’s command and control centre from which the reapers direct their systematic “cycles” and that means it’s also one big galactic broadcasting device and that some ancient race finally figured this out and came up with the Crucible which is not a weapon but a signal modifier and booster carrying code that is essentially the Reaper's "kill switch”.
This signal however can also be used to take control of the Reapers. This old race figured out that you can send the signal from the Citadel but such a signal would only effects its local space for the signal to span the galaxy, the signal needs to be sent simultaneously across the galaxy using the Mass Relays as piggy back signal towers.
Illusive man tries takes control of Shepard’s implants.
Illusive Man Makes Shepard shoots both squad members and they are out of combat (not dead)
If Love interest is in squad however, Shepard finds strength to resist after he shoots the first squad member and when the illusive man tries to make Shepard shoot his LI. (Love has to count for something, yes?)
Boss Fight.
One on One Shepard vs Illusive man or two vs one if Shepard is with LI
Shepard wins, Illusive Man slumps to the ground.
Cut Scene.Harbinger arrives at the Conduit and starts blasting at ground troops. (poor EMS = more die, not just nameless troops but Jack, Grunt, Wrex and any other non-squad companions from previous games at the scene, we will however assume high EMS for this cut scene) More Reaper Destroyers land and starts blasting as well. Jack plays mother hen and orders Asari commandoes around to help bolster the linked shields so that ground forces can hold ground. She refuses to leave but realise her shields cannot withstand too many direct hits from Reaper cannons. Reluctantly leaves when Miranda tells her, “Shepard will find away, he always does.”
Meanwhile on the Citadel, Shepard with EDI’s help shuts down the Relay Nova sequence and call's Hackett to keep the Reapers off while they try to dock the Crucible.
Harbinger realises what is happening and take offs along with most of the Destroyers headed towards the Citadel.
HUGE fleet space battle ensues!
(I thought about making the boss fight against Harbinger for Shepard but, the Illusive Man should be Shepard's Boss fight while Harbinger and his guardian's should be Fleets, they came all the way here to Earth after all, it’s only fair they show off what a combined Galactic force can do)
With enough (that 3300 mark) Assets, they keep the Reapers off. With low casualties.
No or low assets, reapers break through andCrucible gets destroyed, "Failure cut scene plays, showing more reapers
arriving and decimating the Galactic fleet.
Mid point assets, fleet still hold off the reapers but major leadership dies giving Shepard a chance.
Crucible docks.
Harbinger’s Avatar appears one last time, but this time it shows fear. It knows death is imminent and it doesn’t want to die. Harbinger admits that perhaps its assessment is wrong and gives Shepard a choice, instead of killing every Reaper, it asks Shepard to shackle them.
Each Reaper would then be Humanity’s tool and weapon against anything or anyone, organic or synthetic. Through them, Humanity would achieve power unimaginable and through humanity’s control of the reapers, order be imposed on all organic life. (Renegade Choice ofcourse)
Shepard refuses.
Takes the Paragon path and triggers the kill switch.
THE CITADEL DOES NOT BLOW UP, BREAK APART OR GETS DESTROYED.
(Final moments / epilogues)Garrus : “So Shepard, do the honours?”
Shepard: “I thought you’d do it, I mean, isn’t that why you calibrate stuff so much?”
Garrus : “The guns. Are. On. The. Normandy. Shepard.” ”But now that you mentioned it, why not? I could never resist pushing big red buttons... Uhhh There is a big red button right?”
EDI. : “No Garrus. Just your standard VI overlay”
Garrus : “Pity. Well Palaven isn’t free of Reapers yet while we stand here talking.” *reaches up and touches controls*
Signal beam goes out to the Charon Relay, Relay pulses then shoots out beam to other Relays.
”RELAYS ARE NOT DESTROYED.*
Pretty colour signal rings Galactic map display depicting each relay receiving and sending the kill switch out. Reapers across the Galaxy flat lines. Cheers from ground troops in Palaven, Asari on Thessia, everywhere, troops emerge bloodied but not beaten.
*Everyone in room cheers*
Ashley : “We did it! We finally did it! It’s all because of you Shepard, I am sorry I doubted ….”
*scene shows the Illusive man stirring, getting up and picking up a gun*
(1) IF Shepard has been true to his LI and did not go dipping into the pond so to speak, depending on LI they'd see TIM, and will do a number of things, taking the hit (NOT FATALLY but unknown to the player at the time) example. Liara sees TIM, cast Singularity but the bullets fired richochets and hits her / Tali sabotages his gun but TIM manages to get ONE shot off at her, Ashley simply stands in the line of fire and pushes Shepard away ...different things from different LIs - - - back to the show!
*Tali turns to face Shepard to hug him and sees TIM*
Tali: “Shepard! Watch out! *sabotages TIM’s weapons, pulls out her shotgun and charges*
The Illusive Man : “Damn you! Everything I have sacrificed, all that I have done, All for NOTHING!” *sets pistol to overload
and toss it at Tali*
*Pistol explodes*
Tali : “Unnnngggghhh!” *falls over* (not dead but scene should not be clear on this)
Shepard : “Tali!!”
*everyone unloads weapons on TIM*
Shepard : “Tali!” *Runs over to Tali and applies medi-gel* “Stay with me Tali, you are not going to die, damn it! You are not!”
Tali : *soft voiced* “At least I got to stand on Rannoch……” *blacks out*
Shepard : “Someone get Dr Chakwas, tell her we …..”
Note: Medical Assets play a part here. Did we get supplies for the Normandy, did we at least do 75% of the Hosptial assets quests, did we convince people to help out as medical assistants. IF so Love Interest lives. If not, He / She dies. I will assume Tali lives (as a Talimancer how could I do otherwise ^.^)
For our gay romance options, I am not sure if this will make sense but Cortez is assumed downed if you dated him and made him your LI. Again his survival depends on the above medical assets.
*scene cuts to black*
*5 years later* (location will depend on LI, Earth or maybe Eden Prime if it’s Ashley / Kaiden / Cortez, Thessia for Liara, Palevan if its Garrus …and so on I am sure we can think of places that’ll fit)
Anderson : “You are sure? We really could use you Shepard, The Alliance needs, officers, generals….”
Shepard : “ I am sure.”
Anderson : “It’s just that, you are still a symbol to many, and that …”
Shepard : “Anderson, old friend, I have seen death, horrors, destruction, done things that I am not proud of, more than any man should, I am tired….there are times I wake up at night screaming….”
Anderson : “ I understand.”
Shepard : “So, what has been happening since, sorry I skipped that last ceremony, I just didn’t feel like …”
Anderson : “Like celebrating when so many are dead. Like I said, I understand son, *shakes head* but you know politicians …”
Shepard : *smiles* “Yeah, I do.”
Anderson : “Well, let’s see, Garrus …”
*scene cuts to Garrus on Palaven, every Turian passing Salutes him*
Turian aide 01: “Primarch Vakarian, the Juanta would like to see you sir.”
Garrus : “ What is it this time?”
Turian aide 01: “Ships sir, or lack of, we did lost a lot of ships during the Reaper war.”
Garrus : *looks around, Palaven is still rebuilding* It could have been much worse. Tell them I'll meet with them when I get back”
Turian aide 01 : “Yes Sir.”
Turian aide 02 : “Primarch Vakarian, your meeting with ....”
Garrus : “The Council …I know…been trying to avoid it.
Turian aide 02 : “Yes sir. Now if you would follow me sir.”
Garrus : *softly to himself* “ I swear, Victus did this on purpose, he had to die leading that charge.”
Turian aide 02 : “Sir?”
Garrus : “Never mind soldier, lead the way…”
*scene cuts back and we see Liara watching Garrus being led away*
Terminal : “Your orders Shadow Broker.”
Liara : “Forward that data packet to the Turian Hierarchy, in particular to Garrus’s people. Have our squads provide a clear corridor for him to the Citadel.”
Terminal : “Immediately Shadow broker..”
*turns off comms*
Liara : *to herself* “I am not losing one of my dearer friends to “Loyalists” who can’t see, won’t see that his policies aren’t just kotowing to the humans.
Glyph : “Dr T’soni, would you want me order hits on the Loyalist leadership?”
Liara : “Not yet. *smiles deadly smile* Let’s see if we can settle this peacefully …
Glypth : “Understood Dr T’soni… Also I have come to remind you..."
Liara : *gets up and we see her in a beautiful evening dress* “That I have a party to attend, wouldn’t miss it for the world.”
*Scene cuts to Citadel Ballroom*
Everyone else alive except ONE other person is there. Joker, EDI, Wrex, Grunt, Jack… everyone who has been your squad member. Jacob and Brynn with their baby, all talking about what they have been up to. I haven’t figured out their dialogue yet. Hey, I just started writing this, what about an hour ago?
But you get to see everyone and catch up on what they are doing.
*closing epilogue*
Joker : “So, you think he’ll show up this time?”
EDI : “That is highly unlikely Jeff.”
Joker : “Yeah, wonder what they are doing back on Rannoch…”
*scene cuts back to Anderson on Rannoch*
Anderson : “You sure I can’t convince you to come this time?”
Shepard : “Tell everyone, I miss them but ...”
Anderson : “Yeah, you still got things to do here.” *Anderson stands to attention and Salutes Shepard*
*Shepard return salute, Anderson turns and walk away, enters a waiting Shuttle and leaves*
Shepard looks up and tracks the shuttle, as it leaves orbit. Sky begins to darken as night falls and we see the landscape comes alive (think Avatar’s Pandora) with hues and colours.
*Tali walks up, HELMET OFF damn it!* : “Was that Anderson?”
Shepard : “Yeah.”
Tali : “And you didn’t want to go?”
Shepard : “I couldn’t…I wanted to stay .. I..”
Tali : “You know running away, isn’t you.”
Shepard : “I know. I just need a little more time.”
*They stay silent for a bit, arms around each other*
Tali: *in a wistful voice* “It's finally over isn't it Shepard?”
Shepard: *looks around* 'I hope so Tali, even with the reapers gone and the Geth assimilated, there's still so much to do... *Shepard turns to look at Tali* ... and there's so much I'd like to do, other than killing or getting shot at.
Tali: “You know you can still count on me to be with you...”
Shepard : “ I know. Do you remember what I said when I took you out of that hospital?
Tali: *puts arms around Shepard and holds him tight for a long moment, then whispers* “Tali Shepard vas Normandy...”
Shepard : *repeats in just as soft a voce* "Tali Shepard vas Normandy"
*the two of them watch the night scene for a bit then walks down that valley towards a house where Tali first pictured where her house would be, as their forms dwindle into the distance we’ll hear the last bit of their conversation*
Shepard : “ So, whats’ for dinner.”
Tali : “succulent orzark steak for me, nutri-paste for you.”
Shepard : “ I HATE nutri- paste.”
Tali : “Guess what’s for desert..”
Shepard : “ You are a cruel wife..”
Tali : *laughs* Well actually, Anderson left something ….”
Shepard : "Dare I ask ..."
Tali : " Cake."
(This time the cake ISN'T A LIE)
Anyways, if you have been reading this far.
Thank you.
Modifié par Archonsg, 20 mars 2012 - 09:07 .