What i consider poor writing:
- unquestionable deus ex machina in the last few minutes
- lack of coerence and loss of genre and characters depth
- lack of choises and sensible consequences of previous actions or senseless consequences of them
- lack of clarifications of the aftermaths
- the goofy escape and the landing of the normandy on an "Eden" planet
- Shooting a tube to activate a machine and walking toward the explosion
- Stargazer post credits scene in the "Eden" planet (Just because of the landing scene)
What i do NOT consider poor writing:
- The possible sacrifice of Shepard (if the outcome was well motivated, now he just takes the starbrat's word for granted)
- The loss of mass relays (if why it was neccessary in all the "three" endings and the consequences were well explained, without leaving us, due to our knowledge, with the feeling that galactic
civilizations are fuked up and the fleets stranded in the sol system and
their civilizations are doomed to a dramatic future)
Modifié par LKx, 18 avril 2012 - 10:32 .