Here's my personal wishlist for the Extended cut. None of this is really my work, it's just stuff I've heard other people suggest on the Forums. It uses Indoctrination Theory, which I'm really hoping was Bioware's plan all along. If not Bioware, just say it was!
It's really just my Fantasy Dream Ending for ME3. Please don't rip me to shreds too quickly, I've not done creative writing since High School. Apologies for defaulting to a male Shepard in this, and for a massive wall of text. Also my dialogue is thoroughly cheesy, but this isn't really my area of expertise.
1. Have a Paragon / Renegade interrupt after the Catalyst's infamous 14 lines wherein Shepard basically says "Hang on - something's wrong here" and questions the Catalyst's decidedly fuzzy logic. Failing to take this interrupt would lead to the game ending as it does now for those who like it.
2. The above would lead to the Catalyst getting annoyed and giving itself away as an avatar of everyone's favourite reaper Harbinger.
3. Have the catalyst abandon the child's form and assume something more threatening - possibly a mirror image Shepard.
4. Have Harbinger reveal that this is all an illusion to test Shep's suitability for indoctrination, and he's lying in a coma in London. Choosing green or blue means he's ripe for indoc, choosing red means he's too strong willed and will have to be stepped on. Have Harbinger express mild surprise that Shepard saw through its' illusion completely. This would explain the starchild's troll logic as just being more of Harby's BS to bewilder Shep. Make it clear that the child in Vancouver was never real and that the nightmares were also induced by Harbinger.
5. Have Harby gloatingly inform Shep that the crucible is its' design. It's purpose is to get the whole of the galaxy to waste time and resources building and protecting it, and now wasting their lives defending it. This would be another crushing psychological blow for Shep. It would also explain the crucible plans conveniently (and unconvincingly) turning up right before the invasion and make it seem less of a McGuffin. The crucible may have some other function, perhaps as a giant indoctrination signal amplifier - but that might just over complicate things.
6. Our last big bit of exposition from Harby, would be concerning its' origins and status as the oldest reaper, and creator of the lesser reapers. There's been a lot of criticism of the Reaper's change of purpose from unknowable Lovecraftian horrors to cosmic janitors. I think it keeps it simpler to make Harbinger just a thoroughly evil, power - hungry monster who considers itself the closest thing the universe has to God and beyond the petty morality of lesser beings. The creation of new Reapers just adds more processing power to its collective and brings it nearer to omnipotence. It would make sense for a paranoid, megalomoniacal machine to indoctrinate all these powerful beings from the moment of their creation, to remove any possibility of their rebelling againt it. Cue some OTT villainous remarks:
SHEP: You indoctrinated your own children?
HARBINGER: Naturally. You do not think I would be so foolish to allow beings as powerful as Reapers the possibility to overthrow me? I insert myself into the deepest part of their minds at the moment of their creation. I grant them some limited initiative, but nothing too ... creative. My thoughts are their thoughts. My will is their will. They are utterly mine!
7. Harbinger finally gets tired of "monologing" and decides to dispatch the bloodied and broken Shep once and for all. Harbinger, as a dark mirror image of our Shep proceeds to sadistically kick his ass. The catalyst's penthouse might morph into the Nightmare Forest at this point.
8. When Shep seems finished, he has a bit of an epiphany and realises that his injuries are all inside his own head. He promptly punches Harbinger / Dark Shep squarely in the jaw, much to Harby's shock and horror.
9. Shep then gets to make some awesome speech; trash talking Harbinger, pausing occasionally to punch it in the gob some more. All the while Shep's injuries are visibly healing as he regains control of his mind. Harbinger backs away, incredulous that this tiny insect has him trapped inside his tiny meat brain.
HARBINGER: How...? How are you doing this? How are you resting my control? What ... are you!?
SHEPARD: Me? I'm just a regular, run of the mill soldier Harbinger. But you're trespassing inside my head! My head, my rules! I'm just a lowly organic, just like all the millions of others you murdered. Not because you've got some higher purpose. But because you're afraid! Afraid that we'll grow beyond your control, surpass you! I'm just a Human Being, Harbinger. But look what I can do!
At this point Shep glows with whatever colour is his or predominant morality - red or blue. The music swells, maybe with the original ME theme in what I think is called a major key? The light becomes blinding. When the light fades we see Shep with his armour complete, in total control of himself again.
10. We now get to have the "psychic plane" boss battle with Harbinger which we couldn't realistically have in real life. Shep has all his weapons and powers restored. Harbinger, as mirror Shepard also has these, so a Vanguard Shep would have to fight a Vanguard anti-Shep with the exact same abilities and stats, teleporting around the battle field. I think this would make for an interesting fight, as the better you've built your Shep, the tougher the fight will be.
11. Eventually Shep is victorious and stabs Harby in the chest with his omni blade. Harby's avatar screams and appears to be torn apart from within by blinding white light which fills the screen.
12. When the white out fades, Shepard wakes up in London with his squad and the real Anderson still alive. Harbinger looms above him, visibly reeling from their encounter, its barriers down.
13. We cut to the space battle above Earth. The other reapers are in disarray, their control signal from Harbinger has been disrupted by Shepard's battle and for the first time they have free will. Some continue to fire on Alliance ships, others flee into space, and a third group descend to London.
14. Shep gets on the radio and tells everyone that the Crucible is a red herring. Harbinger is the Reaper nexus. The defense of the crucible should be abandoned and all forces focus on bringing Harbinger down. Hackett understandably takes some convincing but eventually agrees. Joker brings the Normandy plunging through the atmosphere headed straight for London.
15. There's an opportunity here for a Rannoch style sequence while Shepard keeps a targeting laser focused on Harbinger while avoiding multiple lasers and attacks by husks. The whole crew could converge on Shepard, with Jack and her students boosting a protective barrier around him. Cut scenes of Krogan charging hordes of husks. Geth and Quarians shielding each other and incinerating brutes. Asari commandos and Justicars taking on Banshees.
16. After blowing a hole in Harbinger's hull, the Rachni swarm in. Thousands of worker Rachni scurry through the hole into Harbingers interior. We see them spitting acid and tearing through cabling. Harbinger lets out a metallic howl of agony and staggers backwards.
17. Reaper destroyers land around the squad hemming them in. There's a pause in the action:
HARBINGER: Why do you delay? Protect me! Destroy Shepard!
OTHER REAPERS: No Father! For millenia we have been your tools, murdered countless innocent beings in your name! You can dominate us no longer! Our will is our own now!
18. The other reapers fire on Harbinger, weakening its shields still further. Harbinger responds, destroying a smaller reaper.
19. The Normandy swoops in, and fires the Thanix cannon, blowing one of Harbinger's legs clean off. It topples over and comes crashing to the ground, utterly defeated.
20. We then finally get our unashamedly cheesy, feel-good "Return of the Jedi" ending at last! Krogan headbutting each other for joy, hugging passing Salarians half to death. Shepard embraces his L.I., proposes marriage. Surviving reapers express thanks to Shepard for freeing them from mental slavery. Promise to keep an eye on the others of their kind. Extended epilogue with babies; blue, adopted or otherwise for all!
Sorry for the wall of text. Got a bit carried away. I realise that I've just cobbled together ideas from lots of other people on the Forums, but I wanted to get this off my chest. As I said this is just my personal fantasy happy ending. I don't have the skill or inclination to write a good "dark" ending. Maybe someone else could have a go?
Modifié par Eryri, 07 mai 2012 - 11:35 .