1. “How do you feel about heading into this? Do you think we have a chance?”
2. “The Lair of the Lady is too dangerous - I think you should stay in equis.”
3. Speak to someone else.
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You move closer to Flutter-Die. She stares nervously at the ground; Without a voice, it’s difficult to discern her current state of morale.
1. “How do you feel about heading into this? Do you think we have a chance?”
2. “The Lair of the Lady is too dangerous - I think you should stay in equis.”
3. Speak to someone else.
1. “How do you feel about heading into this? Do you think we have a chance?”
2. “The Lair of the Lady is too dangerous - I think you should stay in equis.”
3. Speak to someone else.
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:34
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1. “How do you feel about heading into this? Do you think we have a chance?”
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:38
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The Maneless One - “How do you feel about heading into this? Do you think we have a chance?”
Flutter-Die tips her head up ever so slowly, and you look deep into her eyes - and yet, you feel no signs of her plague. The edges of her mouth slowly rise, and the answer to your question is revealed.
2. “The lair is too dangerous - I think you should stay in Equis.”
3. Speak to someone else.
Flutter-Die tips her head up ever so slowly, and you look deep into her eyes - and yet, you feel no signs of her plague. The edges of her mouth slowly rise, and the answer to your question is revealed.
2. “The lair is too dangerous - I think you should stay in Equis.”
3. Speak to someone else.
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:25
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You step a bit back from Flutter-Die.
1. Speak to Daa'Hoof.
2. Speak to Pike.
3. "Let's go."
1. Speak to Daa'Hoof.
2. Speak to Pike.
3. "Let's go."
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:37
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You approach the veteran of the hooves.
Daa'Hoof - "What do you make of it, Hooves?"
1. "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
2. "It's too risky, Daa'Hoof. You should head back to the temple and keep guard against the shadowmares."
3. Speak to someone else.
Daa'Hoof - "What do you make of it, Hooves?"
1. "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
2. "It's too risky, Daa'Hoof. You should head back to the temple and keep guard against the shadowmares."
3. Speak to someone else.
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:48
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4. What do you make of me being Hooves, and the whole situation? I haven't been able to talk to you properly with this and that going on around us...
or
1. "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
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1. "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:57
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Since I've written the entirety of Chapter 3 & 4 on the spot, I'll allow it. 
The Maneless One - "I know it's been strange having someone like myself as your leader..."
Daa'Hoof - "It was quite a revelation in the tomb, but we manage well together just as well as before that took place. One thing your teachings brought to us is understanding the balance between discord and harmony - there is no order without chaos, and yet, we continue in spite of it. Don't worry about me hooves. I am with you until the end."
The Maneless One - "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
Daa'Hoof - "Hard to say. The Lady likely knows of our coming, but we have little choice in the matter. If we don't walk into that portal, the temple of hooves will be erased from existence. I'm not sure either of us want to live with that."
1. "It's too risky, Daa'Hoof. You should head back to the temple and keep guard against the shadowmares."
2. Speak to someone else.
The Maneless One - "I know it's been strange having someone like myself as your leader..."
Daa'Hoof - "It was quite a revelation in the tomb, but we manage well together just as well as before that took place. One thing your teachings brought to us is understanding the balance between discord and harmony - there is no order without chaos, and yet, we continue in spite of it. Don't worry about me hooves. I am with you until the end."
The Maneless One - "Can we really trust walking into this? What if things have changed since I last went in?"
Daa'Hoof - "Hard to say. The Lady likely knows of our coming, but we have little choice in the matter. If we don't walk into that portal, the temple of hooves will be erased from existence. I'm not sure either of us want to live with that."
1. "It's too risky, Daa'Hoof. You should head back to the temple and keep guard against the shadowmares."
2. Speak to someone else.
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 01:24
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3. Kill yourself. 
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 02:56
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There could be potential to this kind of game that repeats itself, and lets people improvise in the 3rd and 4th chapter. 
(YYY)
But I'm sticking with "2. Speak to someone else" as of right now.
(YYY)But I'm sticking with "2. Speak to someone else" as of right now.
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:10
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Pike - "Gettin' antsy for the big unknown, boss?"
1. "This is it, pike. You may not be joking once we head in...any last thoughts before we make the big jump?"
2. "This is practically a suicide mission, and you're a 3-foot dragon. I need you to stay here."
3. "Let's go."
1. "This is it, pike. You may not be joking once we head in...any last thoughts before we make the big jump?"
2. "This is practically a suicide mission, and you're a 3-foot dragon. I need you to stay here."
3. "Let's go."
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:36
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1. "This is it, pike. You may not be joking once we head in...any last thoughts before we make the big jump?"
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Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:41
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The Maneless One - "This is it, pike. You may not be joking once we head in...any last thoughts before we make the big jump?"
Pike - "Well I've stuck with you for this long, so I'd be a pretty lousy dragon to just up-and-leave you now. I think we’re heading into the worst spot in equis, but you did survive up to the throne room, so it can‘t be that awful.”
1. "This is practically a suicide mission, and you're a 3-foot dragon. I need you to stay here."
2. "Let's go."
Pike - "Well I've stuck with you for this long, so I'd be a pretty lousy dragon to just up-and-leave you now. I think we’re heading into the worst spot in equis, but you did survive up to the throne room, so it can‘t be that awful.”
1. "This is practically a suicide mission, and you're a 3-foot dragon. I need you to stay here."
2. "Let's go."
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Posté 31 mars 2012 - 12:16
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Taking a deep breath, you immerse yourself into the unknown…
Stepping out of the portal with what seemed an instant, you look in dismay at the sight before you. Despite the calming sunrise, the lair of the lady is an ethereal castle that seems to be built off of a large cliff of pastures and moss. The citadel is constructed of an interconnected series of towers, leading to the throne room itself. Though light seems to shine out of the ‘windows’, it is apparently an illusion created by the lady of pink, with the doors themselves being the only way in. Using the wings of the pegasi, you fly up to the first tower…
Vhail referred to a ‘factory’, though this closely resembles something more of to a laboratory. With barely any lighting in the room, it’s hard to make out much beyond rows of raised circular platforms. Although some remain empty, a few seem to have seemingly lifeless ponies laying on them, with sadistically-built arrays of needles hanging above them.
You continue walking past them until you see the motions of a near-dead pony. It seems to be in dire pain, and has been recently penetrated by the needles.
1. Walk closer to the pony.
2. Keep your distance and move on.
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Lair of the Lady
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Stepping out of the portal with what seemed an instant, you look in dismay at the sight before you. Despite the calming sunrise, the lair of the lady is an ethereal castle that seems to be built off of a large cliff of pastures and moss. The citadel is constructed of an interconnected series of towers, leading to the throne room itself. Though light seems to shine out of the ‘windows’, it is apparently an illusion created by the lady of pink, with the doors themselves being the only way in. Using the wings of the pegasi, you fly up to the first tower…
Vhail referred to a ‘factory’, though this closely resembles something more of to a laboratory. With barely any lighting in the room, it’s hard to make out much beyond rows of raised circular platforms. Although some remain empty, a few seem to have seemingly lifeless ponies laying on them, with sadistically-built arrays of needles hanging above them.
You continue walking past them until you see the motions of a near-dead pony. It seems to be in dire pain, and has been recently penetrated by the needles.
1. Walk closer to the pony.
2. Keep your distance and move on.
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Posté 31 mars 2012 - 02:43
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Inspect the pony for injuries. Attempt to heal its wounds. Swear to avenge the poor pony. 
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Posté 04 avril 2012 - 12:34
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You move closer to the pony, trying to discern what seems to be causing the pain. It begins to convulse wildly and transforms before your very eyes. Its body begins to dissipate, and is replaced by a vaporous version of itself. It’s almost impossible to see without enough light in the room, but the now-glowing red eyes make it abundantly clear what’s happened: It has become a shadow mare. Before an opportunity to react, it lunges out towards the closest one available - Flutter-Die. With everyone else receding in fear, they helplessly watch as she slowly begins to disintegrate as the shadow mare viciously gnaws into the helpless pony. Despite her eyes remaining a pure unfeeling black, you can literally feel the look of dread in her face. The remainder of the group hasten to the nearest exit before it becomes worse.
You scurry out of the ‘factory’ to find a large walkway, revealing the next tower… the shadow mares seem to be susceptible to light, and aren’t able to reach you. Entering the next tower, you find it’s a vast rectangular library filled with more books in their shelves than there are mares in Equis. As the three step into the center of the room, The Maneless One begins to feel like they’re being watched. Without notice, she hears a swooping sound and hastily moves out of the way. Being barely able to see what happened, whoever came for them has disappeared.
Pike - “What the--”
Before he can speak, the sound of large, flapping wings can be heard near the top of the library. A pony dressed in obsidian armor begins to descend from the room. Her vividly hued hair and blue skin create a strange contrast to her darkened attire. The weapon she wields is utterly huge. It is a massive warhammer with pointed spikes at each end.
Pain-Goes-Smash - “She’d been telling me you’d come. Said I should let you through, but I can’t resist an opportunity like this. I hope you like rides, because you’re in for a one-way trip to the void.”
She lunges straight towards you with unprecedented speed.
1. Move out of the way a split-second before she hits you.(Pegasus)
2. Throw the books to distract her.
3. Have Daa’Hoof or Pike distract her.
4. Close your eyes and pray.
You scurry out of the ‘factory’ to find a large walkway, revealing the next tower… the shadow mares seem to be susceptible to light, and aren’t able to reach you. Entering the next tower, you find it’s a vast rectangular library filled with more books in their shelves than there are mares in Equis. As the three step into the center of the room, The Maneless One begins to feel like they’re being watched. Without notice, she hears a swooping sound and hastily moves out of the way. Being barely able to see what happened, whoever came for them has disappeared.
Pike - “What the--”
Before he can speak, the sound of large, flapping wings can be heard near the top of the library. A pony dressed in obsidian armor begins to descend from the room. Her vividly hued hair and blue skin create a strange contrast to her darkened attire. The weapon she wields is utterly huge. It is a massive warhammer with pointed spikes at each end.
Pain-Goes-Smash - “She’d been telling me you’d come. Said I should let you through, but I can’t resist an opportunity like this. I hope you like rides, because you’re in for a one-way trip to the void.”
She lunges straight towards you with unprecedented speed.
1. Move out of the way a split-second before she hits you.(Pegasus)
2. Throw the books to distract her.
3. Have Daa’Hoof or Pike distract her.
4. Close your eyes and pray.
Modifié par DominusVita, 04 avril 2012 - 12:36 .
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Posté 04 avril 2012 - 01:26
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Using the tomes and volumes surrounding you, you fly at break-neck speed while casting them towards the unknown assailant. She begins to close in towards you with her hammer, but is hit at the last moment by an enormously-sized scripture. Dropping her hammer, you close in and slam her unabashedly towards the ground… with all the armor she had worn, she feel like a brick into the floorboards of the library.
After surviving Pain’s library, you continue to the last tower. At the end of the hallway is an immense circular portal made out of a thick marble. You immerse yourself into the portal… and find yourself standing on top of a grey, ice-cold platform in an unknown region of equis. A small apparition in the form of a child slowly approaches you.
Starmare - “Why are you here?”
The Maneless One - “Can you…can you help me stop the Lady?”
Starmare - “No. Her choices are a necessity for the next cycle. We remove the lesser factions causing discord in equis. It is for your own good.”
The Maneless One - “This…this can’t be real. It has to be some sort of hallucination!”
Starmare - “This plane is as real as the lady herself.”
1. Gain a grasp on reality.
2. Hold the line.
3. Break the Fourth Wall.
After surviving Pain’s library, you continue to the last tower. At the end of the hallway is an immense circular portal made out of a thick marble. You immerse yourself into the portal… and find yourself standing on top of a grey, ice-cold platform in an unknown region of equis. A small apparition in the form of a child slowly approaches you.
Starmare - “Why are you here?”
The Maneless One - “Can you…can you help me stop the Lady?”
Starmare - “No. Her choices are a necessity for the next cycle. We remove the lesser factions causing discord in equis. It is for your own good.”
The Maneless One - “This…this can’t be real. It has to be some sort of hallucination!”
Starmare - “This plane is as real as the lady herself.”
1. Gain a grasp on reality.
2. Hold the line.
3. Break the Fourth Wall.
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Posté 04 avril 2012 - 02:26
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3. "This is the most stupid thing the Lady could think of?! Of all the lousy strategies she could pick, she chooses to summon a Sparkly mare? Is She truly so weak as to think that this plot will succeed? well I say Blasphemy! A truely worthy ruler of Equis would move to confront us directly, instead of sending this irritating beam of light."
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Posté 04 avril 2012 - 09:36
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The Maneless One - "Hold it, hold it, hold the phone now. I've been thrown into a nasty old stable, been nearly gutted by thugs, threatened to death by the ruler of equis, recieved a plot twist about 3/4 the way through, but this is too much. Whoever's writing this needs to change this, ASAP."
For a brief moment, there's huge speculation from everyone.
Bobobo878 - "And where are the 'to the moon' references? No morinth?!"
Stanley Woo -
[Violation of Fluttershy's Adorability in this Text Adventure Removed]
Blood-Lord Thanatos - "My god! It's become too spoofy, my lord!"
DominusVita - "Settle down, people! Settle down....I just..."
DominusVita pondered for a moment. Perhaps leaving that as an option was not the best idea... but it was necessary to make things right again. He took a long, deep breath, and...
DominusVita - "Alright, here's the deal, Maneless One. If we want this plot to end the right way, here's how it's going down: Pretend this weird child ghost thing is a figment of your imagination, and go running out of the portal like no one's business. Unless you'd rather I have Daa'Hoof lost in a jung-"
The Maneless One scurries into the portal...
You’ve headed out of the portal, but your friends seem to be missing… as you continue, you can see the room you’ve been waiting to see for far too long. It will be the third, and final time you see the throne of the lady.
You arrive to the throne room. This time, however, it seems to be empty. You approach closer past the throne to find a vividly-colored foyer, covered with encrusted jewels. Entering inside the outlandish antechamber, you’re lead to a grand-sized room with a small staircase in the middle. At the end of this room is undoubtedly the Lady of Pink herself, looking outside an enormously-sized window.
Lady of Pink - “Tell me something, hooves…”
Lady of Pink - “…what can change the nature of a mare?”
1. Truth: "I...don't know."
2. Truth: "Love."
3. Truth: "Power."
4. Truth: "Greed."
5. Truth: "Betrayal."
6. Truth: "Death."
7. Truth: "Regret."
8. Truth: "Age."
9. Truth: "Suffering."
10. Truth: "Success."
11. Truth: "A Banhammer."
12. Truth: "You, Lady of Pink, when you manipulated my body."
13. Truth: "Nothing can change the nature of a mare, Lady."
14. Truth: "I cannot answer that question..."
For a brief moment, there's huge speculation from everyone.
Bobobo878 - "And where are the 'to the moon' references? No morinth?!"
Stanley Woo -
[Violation of Fluttershy's Adorability in this Text Adventure Removed]Blood-Lord Thanatos - "My god! It's become too spoofy, my lord!"
DominusVita - "Settle down, people! Settle down....I just..."
DominusVita pondered for a moment. Perhaps leaving that as an option was not the best idea... but it was necessary to make things right again. He took a long, deep breath, and...
DominusVita - "Alright, here's the deal, Maneless One. If we want this plot to end the right way, here's how it's going down: Pretend this weird child ghost thing is a figment of your imagination, and go running out of the portal like no one's business. Unless you'd rather I have Daa'Hoof lost in a jung-"
The Maneless One scurries into the portal...
You’ve headed out of the portal, but your friends seem to be missing… as you continue, you can see the room you’ve been waiting to see for far too long. It will be the third, and final time you see the throne of the lady.
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The Lady of Pink
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You arrive to the throne room. This time, however, it seems to be empty. You approach closer past the throne to find a vividly-colored foyer, covered with encrusted jewels. Entering inside the outlandish antechamber, you’re lead to a grand-sized room with a small staircase in the middle. At the end of this room is undoubtedly the Lady of Pink herself, looking outside an enormously-sized window.
Lady of Pink - “Tell me something, hooves…”
Lady of Pink - “…what can change the nature of a mare?”
1. Truth: "I...don't know."
2. Truth: "Love."
3. Truth: "Power."
4. Truth: "Greed."
5. Truth: "Betrayal."
6. Truth: "Death."
7. Truth: "Regret."
8. Truth: "Age."
9. Truth: "Suffering."
10. Truth: "Success."
11. Truth: "A Banhammer."
12. Truth: "You, Lady of Pink, when you manipulated my body."
13. Truth: "Nothing can change the nature of a mare, Lady."
14. Truth: "I cannot answer that question..."
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