savionen wrote...
It's really not that simple, though. There's 30+ examples in the game that point to indoctrination, and otherwise are basically pointless, random, and bad-writing. There's really not another theory you can dump the plot-holes on. It's either indoctrination or bad writing.
Things like the vent the vent-boy is in having an electrical danger sticker next to it. Why would Bioware put that there if it didn't mean something? If it's just a random graphic to add more detail, why isn't it really used anywhere else?
And what's so wrong with believing that it might just be bad writing? It can happen; it can happen to anyone! I'm a writer, and I've written a lot of bad **** in my time. It's okay. Now, I'm also not writing for a fan base in the several ten-thousands, but even look at Dan Brown, George Lucas, Stephanie Meyer, or any prolific writer (God...think about Tom Clancey). Good writers can write bad things. It's okay for us to just say, "Yo, you screwed up."
So that's my "theory." And as much evidence as there is to support the theory that there's some artistic bent that Bioware has yet to comment on about how some minor detail is actually a huge factor, say Shepard was Indoctrinated, or say the Star-child is a hallucination and Shepard actually died to Harbinger's beam, the "theory" that it's just bad writing I feel has more credence to it.