Greetings!
I slept a night over it, and I still feel like I destroyed the ME3 Universe, and me dissolving and force-fuse all life was the only thing letting Tali live on a planet not her own and have at least some idea of me being responsible for her living - basically the green ending seems paragon for me. Isn't it weird, though, that you can discuss the color of the ending and everybody knows what you're talking about?
So let me join the discussion on how to fix it. It won't make my bad feelings of a short-sell disappear. But it might stop those who are going to play the game in a couple of months, you know, those who didn't buy immediately, feeling the same.
First of all, I cannot describe the situation better than
http://www.gamefront...fans-are-right/ - the writers have clearly disected the ending compared to the story and the promised. Please especially note the feeling that we doomed all our allies to death by destroying the relays.
I fully understand your decision of letting Shepard die in this. That consequence was always possible. No, probable. At the end of an epic, people go into the light. However, the way you did this, the final sacrifice - why wasn't it tailored? Why do I not see my LOVE in the flashback, but basic Liara? Why can't I create a future for all kinds, but only for Joker, EDI and whoever else you artificially beamed up to the Normandy again despite being at my side in the end? I just wonder why you haven't tailored anything. It's a waste of the potential, and an ending that is, in my opinion, undeserving of that huge, in many ways close to perfect buildup.
Also I do not understand why Shepard can't live. And save. If this was the key to all this, an existance within the citadel, why reveal it 5 minutes before the end? Why not even explain what it is,where it come from, not even why it takes form of the dead kid! You only hinted at it - ONCE. During the talk with the Reaper on Rannock, I realized that the Reaper's controller must be the target in the end. I thought we'd sit down and talk with him after we destroyed the Reapers, for one possibility. Or end him. Instead you give my wounded and delirious Shepard five minutes to die, die and let his new friends (EDI,the Geth) die, and just go over to "well, that's the legend, anyway" and "now play the downloadable content". My Shepard DIED! Why would I play a downloadable content with him now? Were you fed up, did you want to end this?
All three endings have gigantic logical holes. And that is sad. If your aim was a psychedelic ending, you decided for the players, giving him a 3:0 option. Every major book in the history of mankind that definded a part of Fantasy - The Lord of the Rings, The Neverending Story, to mention some - had a slow, and detailed ending, with love and loss, and a future to hope for. You were writing a major story there. You blew the ending, you made it average. And that's not good enough. Not for your own work. For Mass Effect 3 was - up to that point - a potentially defining moment of Science Fiction, and of Gaming history. I was planning on using it as the example of why AAA-Games exist. Now, I must see it as a story that falls short in the end. You owe yourself to correct this.
You created a brilliant Shepard in this game. Mass Effect 3 gave Shepard doubt, and tiredness, and desperation. And an urge to have this being the last fight. You also gave him love, and the possibility to find a rest he himself wasn't believing in. You made him more human than most real ones. And showed the strain of stress and war
on him.
Even if you now reconsider the ending - you fell short. And after such an epic, detailed, brilliant work before, I believe you failed. This is failure to bring your own work to an acceptable end. It's like you painted the Mona Lisa, in full detail, with all mistakes where you corrected, went back, made errors just to in the end get to a brilliant masterpiece with only the finishing smile missing. Then took paint thinner, wiped the whole canvas clean, and painted a smily face instead. While we all watched.
And I believe your ending was just so little. So small. You had to wrap up three games, I can't blame you for not seeing how hard that would be. And I truly believe that you overlooked how massively good you had made the third game, the entire build-up, and that alone had deserved an epic final.
Also, I believe more explaining would've been the key. Which is weird, since you've explained so much through three games and gigantic codexes, just to stop doing that at the worst possible moment. Let's rewrite the ending mentally, hypothetically:
Shepard: Where am I?
You are in the heart of the citadel.
Shepard: Who are you?
I am the catalyst.
Shepard: I thought the Citadel was the catalyst.
I am also the citadel.
Shepard: Why do you look like that?
Because you have this image in your head. It's so you can relate to me.
Shepard: Where did you came from?
I was created.
Shepard: By the reapers?
No. I created the reapers.
Shepard: Why?
Because I was created. Long before your time, a million cycles ago, I was made to stop chaos. Ever since, I did.
Shepard: Who created you?
Their names will not mean anything to you. I built worker drones in their image to help me keep me safe. You know them as "keepers".
Shepard: What was the chaos you were built to end?
Synthetics and organics had developed into a full fledged war. The galaxy was on the brink of destroying all forms of intelligent life. I was created to end the chaos. I was made to ensure life continues.
Shepard: But you destroy life.
Only the higher developed organic life. The one that develops synthetic life.
Shepard: Why not destroy synthetic life instead?
Because organic life would rebuild it.
A Shepard: What about the geth? Will they be destroyed, too?
If I destroy synthetic life, I would destroy myself. I tried to take them over, so they become part of me. You prevented it. I will try again, once you're gone.
Shepard: So you're synthetic?
Correct.
Shepard: Are you an AI?
I know what you mean by that. I am more than any AI you imagine. But I started at something you might refer to as AI. I have evolved every cycle.
Shepard: What is the crucible?
An Upgrade.
Shepard: An upgrade of what?
Me.
Shepard: What does it do?
It gives me the possibility to interact with you. And the possibility to change the cycle.
Shepard: Into what?
That is my decision.
Shepard: I want this war to end.
In what way?
Shepard: <paragon, renegade, neutral options>
Processing.
Shepard:<looks out, seeing a ship explode> How long will this take? Can you hold the reapers for now? We lose men and women every second we talkout there!
They came to prevent me from completing the cycle.
Shepard: Because they want to live!
Synthetics and organics cannot co-exist.
Shepard: Not true. <geth coexist with quarians as an example> <we can learn> <we never got a chance to resolve the problem> <EDI and Joker>
Your arguments are compelling. But the programming of the crucible must be adapted to mine.
Shepard:Then...bond with me. I'm partly synthetic. I was part of the Geth consensus. We can talk faster then. You can see what I saw and re-evaluate.
Processing. Possible.
Shepard: Can you hold the Reapers in position? An armistice. Then we talk.
I believe this to be possible.
Shepard: Give me a channel to talk with the others.
Whom?
Shepard: <admiral>, <love interest>, <Normandy>
You can talk now.
Shepard: Can you hear me? This is Commander Shepard. Retreat! Find shelter, just defend your positions. Do not engage until you hear from me again. <that is an order> <trust me>
...something along the lines of that. Explanation. After so much work, why not. It keeps the psychedelic option open. The bonding between synthetics and organics. But it also keeps the option of delaying. Observing the Geth-Quarian and EDI-Joker comeouts and reevaluate. Bring the Citadel back. And give Shepard the choice - unite all Synthetics and Organics (and remeeting Legion in synthetic concensus heaven), maybe with his LI joining him, alternatively delaying the decision for another cycle, or make him backstab the Citadel by destroying the programming and fighting down the reapers in 1-on-1 destruction. When he survives, he can choose to making him Councellor of the Humans and head of the new Galactic council at the replaced Citadel, staying on earth, rebuilding the human alliance, or retreat to whatever retirement he can have with the LI of his choice.
Another alternative...the symbiotic ending could show him being dissolved, and his love interest wearing a pendant of the chosen ending's light (Green, Red or Blue), whilst they honor him at a statue built on earth in the middle of the beam platform or something. And her smiling and touching it, knowing something of his survived. Or her feeling it. Alternatively, him finding her, in the end, or her finding him, and them joining a happy, secluded life, finished from saving the galaxy, whilst the other honor both of them in the statue, and his whole crew getting statues next to him. For no matter how many we players had to kill in the endings - and no questions asked, as they are portrayed, we killed billions with ANY choice - some must've survived and remembered our deeds, no matter how pernicious they must've seemed at first, since we destroyed the relays, doomed entire systems to starvation and basically lost every and all forces that joined our fight. In retrospective, I wish I had never asked anybody to help me, I believed - from the war map, mostly - we had a chance of bringing some of them home.
Awaiting a big mandatory update changing the ending completely within short notice. Until then, I believe I'll refraim from the game for a while. For despite being not completely disappointed by the ending...it was just a too sour one. Remember how once you saw a great movie, you couldn't wait seeing it again? This...I don't want to see again anytime soon.
Or, to say it with my romance: "I want more time..."
That being said, I must remind myself from something else she said. And which I posted on Facebook with her picture. I forgive you the
bad photoshop work on it, it seemed fitting at the time, but you didn't show me her real face, not even when I sacrificed myself for her, which was bad. Deep breath. Anyway. 99,9 percent of the game, as well as the previous games, were
"Totally worth it."
But you gave me hope, so much hope that there was a future... Maybe in time I will forgive, and remember the good things. For I doubt you'll truly correct this.
I just wish you would.
Keelah Se'Lai
Mad
Modifié par TrueMadayar, 18 mars 2012 - 02:19 .