I want to start my post off with giving some background on
my experience and feelings of the Mass Effect series because it should show why
I feel the way I do. I may be different than others on here as I started play
the Mass Effect series when the second game as it receive good reviews and I
needed some games for the X-Box I just bought. I bought both games so I could
play from the beginning. What I got in the first game was a game with great
world building and some interesting characters. Some of the gameplay was a
little tedious however the story that was going on made up for this because it
was very intriguing and made me want to know more. But my over all favor part
about the game had to be the alien races’ backgrounds specifically the Quarians
and Krogan. Which also lead to me like the alien crew more than the human crew.
So the first Mass Effect game for me turned out to be a good game with some
characters that were a little flat or underdeveloped but I liked it enough to
move on to the next game. Mass Effect 2 actually improved on the problems with
the game play being tedious which is good but the crowning achievement of this
series is what happens with the crew. With the loyalty missions the crew became
more developed than they were in the first game and many became friends to me
as the player. Also I started a romance with Tali believing I would lead to me
seeing her true face and during the wooing process I actually fell for Tali and
really cared more about her than what was behind the mask. We all this it was
sad when my crew did make it out the suicide mission without a causality as I
lost Mordin in the process which was sad and I never thought that a video game
would ever make you care so much about the characters in it to make you feel
real emotion for them. This is what I felt made things in Mass Effect 3 great
because I really cared about my crew mates and events on their homeworlds got
me a little emotion especially on Rannoch. The only way I can describe the
scene between Tali and Shepard, after he brings together the Quarians and the
Geth, is “hauntingly beautiful” as it was so beautiful it was haunting me in my
everyday life. Also that scene got me a little depress as I realized the game
will probably end with Shepard sacrificing himself to save the galaxy leaving
Tali, who has been through so much but getting back her homeworld, without the
person who she loves and got her through all this. These are the best things
about the game series and I feel transcends the medium.
However, the end (the end being scenes on the Citadel/Crucible)
of Mass Effect 3 is marred by what was great about the series in my opinion. I
did like aspects of the ending but it was rather flawed. Some of the flaws come
from the AI boy/Catalyst as he is very unreliable. First, he calls himself the
catalyst but a catalyst increases the rate of a reaction and all he does is
explain the choices. So this is either a misnomer or just bad writing because
Shepard is in fact the catalyst not the AI boy. On top this, the AI boy is unreliable
narrator as one of the first things he says, at least in my ending, “Perhaps I
control the reapers.” Thus making him vague and untrustworthy so everything he
says after that I don’t really trust for the most part. But the most flawed
part of the ending is what happens after the Crucible is set off. That’s when
the Normandy gets stranded on
some unknown jungle planet and with this there is no closure to their future.
And as I previously stated I care a lot for my crew so knowing their fates
means more to me than knowing Shepard’s. Also seeing a breath from what looks
to be Shepard’s body makes little sense if this is a literal ending but if it
turns out the ending was just a dream/indoctrination then this isn’t even an
ending at all and the player has to imagine their own ending.
So to satisfy myself and others with similar feelings I
present what I feel would be a simple fixed endings.
Reapers Win Ending: I feel there is a similar ending in the
game so maybe this change is not needed. But this is how I would have done it. The
Crucible is set off but the only thing that happen is the Crucible and Citadel
explode. Soldiers on the ground see the explosion and realize nothing happened.
There are scenes of individuals seem to lose hope and allow Reapers to
incinerate them. Then other retreat to ships to get away one being the Normandy
but all ships are cut down by the Reapers those completely this cycle. The End.
Bittersweet Ending: Shepard sets off the Crucible with an
explosion engulfing him. A signal is sent out that stops the Reapers. As the
Reapers fall, the united soldiers raise their arms in celebration but Shepard’s
crew notice the explosion of the Citadel/Crucible and they hang their heads in
sadness knowing Shepard was there. The next scene, will have two coffins both
with Alliance flags over them. The
camera zooms out, revealing a podium and behind the two coffins a picture of
Shepard and Anderson. In background, there are thousand of coffins and in the
foreground there is an audience of all different lifeforms. Admiral Hackett
approaches the podium and gives a long eulogy which encapsulates the events of
the Mass Effect series. The eulogy becomes a voiceover with scenes of all
present and former living crewmates are shown on there respective planets or
doing something that brings closure to them. These scenes would include Tali on
Rannoch building her home, Garrus on Palaven directing his people in a rebuild,
Liara aiding refuge Asari, Jack teaching her students more about using their
biotic powers, Jacob holding his child, Miranda and her sister happy together,
Wrex and Grunt help build a statue of Shepard and possibly Mordin out of Reaper
parts on Tuchanka, Ashley and James excepting there roles as Spectre and N7.
The final scene should be of the love interest having a longing look in the sky
to show mourning of Shepard possibly have a picture of Shepard in his/her hand.
In the case of Tali, she will have the rock she was given and close her hands
around it. The End.
Happy Ending: Shepard is about to set off the crucible but
hears a voice yell “SHEPARD!” It is Shepard’s love interest on the Normandy.
Shepard sets off the crucible and jumps into the Normandy.
Garrus then say the line “Always have to be the hero, Shepard” or something
like that. Cut of the Reapers deactivating and soldiers celebrating. The next
scene would have the present Normandy
crew being honored by the leaders of all the races and the Alliance.
In the crowd all living former crew members can be seen. Cut to a scene where
Shepard is looking at a wall of names or pictures of everyone who was died in
the conflict specifically Anderson,
Kaiden/Ashley, Thane, Legion, and Mordin. The love interest wraps his/her arm
around Shepard and the walk away. The scene should be love interest specific
and since the love interest in my game is Tali I will use her as an example. Shepard
and Tali look out at horizon of Rannoch behind them is a home. The camera zooms
into the home and on the desk is the rock Shepard gave Tali and a picture of
them as a couple. The End.
I hope this tells others why I feel the ending needs to be
change and what would be satisfying. I do hope my voice will be heard.
Modifié par jdtungsten, 21 mars 2012 - 12:44 .