I hope you guys (Bioware) are still collecting feedback here. I realize a lot has happened in the relatively short amount of time that the game has been out, including the announcement by your cofounder that some additional work will be done toward the endings issue. That all said, it hardly seemed appropriate or responsible to complain about what I hated (the endings) without offering some equally constructive feedback on what I would have liked to see instead, and ultimately, what would do the game justice. So here I go.....
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The "Retake Earth" Battle in the Sol System
The combined fleets of nearly a dozen races in one giant armada show up to fight the Reapers around Earth in order to wrest control of the Citadel (Crucible) from them. There are a few dozen Reaper "Sovereign" class ships (not including all their fighters and smaller ships) against THOUSANDS of Alliance warships. The battle begins....
(Add longer and more frequent cut scenes of the space battle. Show us more of how the fleet is doing. For example, soon after the battle starts, the Turian dreadnoughts jump into the middle of the Reaper formation to bring their guns to bear quicker like they did in the battle near their homeworld. But the Reapers have some ships in reserve and though the Turians take down a few Reapers, those ships are lost to the Reaper back line.)
Shepard continues securing the foothold of the ground forces down on Earth, and destroys the Reaper AA artillery.
(We go back to the fleet battle, the fighter squadrons continue their frenzied swarming with Reaper fighters in and around the fleets. Show them doing some screening for the cruisers/dreadnoughts fighting the main Reaper ships getting into position. Focus on one of the fighter squadron commanders giving frantic orders.)
Shepard hooks up with the Resistance to plan the assault on the Reaper tether to the Citadel. As he's planning with Anderson, pan up to show us the lights of explosions from the fleet battle above them....and remind us that people are dying up there and we need to get to the Citadel.
(Then zoom in to Hacket ordering the Earth dreadnoughts in each fleet to "focus fire" on Reaper ships. The concentrated fire is overwhelming their massive kinetic barriers and allowing other ships, like the Normandy with assistance from cruisers, to take them down. Show a few Reapers destroyed in this manner.)
Shepard brings down the Reaper destroyer, and the ground forces charge the Reaper tether. Show us a massive ground battle - much more than what you had shown before.
(Harbinger breaks formation and begins descending toward Earth to stop the ground forces.)
Hacket warns Shepard and Anderson that Harbinger is coming for them, but they tell him they need more time as the ground battle intensifies.
(Hacket tells the fleet that Harbinger has to be brought down at all costs, but they can't get to it through the remaining Reaper ships. Hacket orders the fleets to punch a hole through the Reapers to give them the opportunity. The Quarian fleets, with the Salarians, and Asari push through the Reaper lines. They all concentrate fire on Harbinger as it enters Earth's atmosphere, resulting in a spectacular light show. The fleets take heavy losses from the other Reapers, but despite damaging it, they are unable to stop Harbinger. Then the Asari flagship, Destiny Ascension, emerges from the carnage. Damaged herself, they set a collision course with Harbinger and destroy it, thus returning the favor for being saved during the battle with Sovereign.)
Shepard, Anderson, and the remaining ground forces secure the Reaper tether. Shepard, Anderson, a dozen commando teams including a mercenary team led by Zaeed head up to the Citadel.
(Meanwhile, Hacket orders the Rachni and Geth fleets to secure the Citadel, and a viscious fight with the Reaper ships there ensues.)
The commando teams along with Shepard and Anderson meet unexpected resistance on the Citadel. The commando teams fight hard, but are getting overwhelmed. Zaeed holds off the opposition so that Anderson and Shepard make it to the central control platform, where they meet TIM. The dialogue with TIM culminates in a final fight against the indoctrinated Illusive Man, controlled by the Reapers.
(The fleets regroup and make a final push against the last remaining Reaper ships. The Volus, Hanar, and Elcor lead the final push, and Hacket offers some moving words about the difference they are now making.)
TIM is defeated and the armada destroys the last Reaper ship in orbit around Earth. Victory is at hand, but at a heavy cost.
(Show us who died and who lived. Anderson dies next to Shepard, who is badly wounded. Zaeed died holding off the Citadel-Reaper defenses. Jack died protecting her students. Samara died taking down a dozen Banshees. Our love interest survives. The remnants of the mighty Alliance armada, including some damage to Hacket's flagship. And so on.....)
(The Crucible docks with the Citadel, but nothing happens. The Reaper armada from the rest of the galaxy shows up at the Charon relay. The fleet regroups, but is in bad shape and cannot possibly defeat a few hundred Reaper ships, but they prepare to HOLD THE LINE anyway. Hacket gives a moving speech.)
As all seems lost, Shepard meets the Catalyst, who appears as the boy from his dreams in order to torture and taunt him. The Reapers are cruel indeed, and the ultimate expression of synthetic evolution. It's explained that they purge the galaxy every 50k years to maintain their dominance, but they can't just kill everything because they need to harvest organics to replenish their strength/forces. We're like a garden to them that they harvest every season. Shepard says "FU" and gets to choose to either:
1. Destroy the Reapers along with himself and the Citadel and the Mass Relays by using himself as a catalyst, which throws the galaxy back into the proverbial dark ages of space travel but ends the Reaper threat then and there.
2. Kill the Catalyst (not conventionally, but through the Crucible) which leaves the Reapers alive but disoriented, vulnerable, and easily destroyed, and the galaxy will continue fighting them, but will eventually beat them. Earth is destroyed as the Alliance fleet is forced to escape the Reaper reinforcements. Shepard makes the call, so that they fight another day.
3. Replace the Catalyst and take control of the Reapers himself, but Shepard has to choose one race to extinct before he can send them back to dark space where they will remain secluded and asleep while the rest of the galaxy evolves unmolested for another 50k years, and as a result, will be more than a match for the Reapers when they return - assuming the races can stay united and not destroy each other along the way.
(The epilogue varies greatly based on Shepard's choices. If he chose to sacrifice himself, there is a very emotionally moving funeral for him on Earth with his surviving crew members and prominent members of the remaining fleet, including all races represented there. If he chose to live, show the results of that, and the costs. Show the galaxy honoring him and his crew in a giant ceremony on the Citadel, regardless of which "shepard survives" ending is chosen.)
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Well there it is. That's my feedback for what I would have liked to see in the ending(s), for what it's worth. Thanks for listening, Bioware.
Modifié par DSGrant, 30 mars 2012 - 04:04 .