Also, lets prove starchild's thesis on organic and synthetic life WRONG.
Modifié par Ombot, 07 mai 2012 - 01:08 .
Modifié par Ombot, 07 mai 2012 - 01:08 .
Kenisis88 wrote...
I loved all of Mass Effect except the ending. The ending feels disconnected from the entire Mass Effect universe and story. The narrative really spins out of control the moment when Starchild appears. The ending also lacks everything that made every moment, story-line, and side plot amazing before this. Someone at Bioware please take the time to watch these two videos:
www.youtube.com/watch
www.youtube.com/watch
They explain at greater length the issues I mentioned above. The guy is very articulate and witty; please just suck up your pride and scrap the majority of the ending as it stands now (replace it entirely). The central problem of the ending is not that it is depressing (we loved every sad moment before this), and it is not simply a problem of confusion. The ending breaks from the established narrative cohesion of the trilogy. This cannot be fixed by adding more content to explain the poor narrative at the end. Why add more content to explain how a bad thing, is in fact less bad? Considering how amazing other story lines were delivered and ended in ME3 (genophage, Quarian/Geth etc.), the ending is surprisingly bad. Look at what you did right Bioware, and particularly WHY it was done so well--then ask yourself if the ending and any additional content to it, is of the same narrative consistency.
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Modifié par WiII PWN 4 KFC, 08 mai 2012 - 06:59 .
Eryri wrote...
Just posted this in the "We are listening" thread but thought it might be more appropriate here. Here's my personal wishlist for the Extended cut. None of this is really my work, it's just stuff I've heard other people suggest on the Forums. It uses Indoctrination Theory, which I'm really hoping was Bioware's plan all along. If not Bioware, just say it was!
It's really just my fantasy happy ending for ME3. Please don't rip me to shreds too quickly, I've not done creative writing since High School. Apologies for defaulting to a male Shepard in this, and for a massive wall of text. Also my dialogue is thoroughly cheesy, but this isn't really my area of expertise.
1. Have a Paragon / Renegade interrupt after the Catalyst's infamous 14 lines wherein Shepard basically says "Hang on - something's wrong here" and questions the Catalyst's decidedly fuzzy logic. Failing to take this interrupt would lead to the game ending as it does now for those who like it.
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Sorry for the wall of text. Got a bit carried away. I realise that I've just cobbled together ideas from lots of other people on the Forums, but I wanted to get this off my chest. As I said this is just my personal fantasy happy ending. I don't have the skill or inclination to write a good "dark" ending. Maybe someone else could have a go?
Modifié par InfiniteLogic, 08 mai 2012 - 11:24 .
Eryri wrote...
Just posted this in the "We are listening" thread but thought it might be more appropriate here. Here's my personal wishlist for the Extended cut. None of this is really my work, it's just stuff I've heard other people suggest on the Forums. It uses Indoctrination Theory, which I'm really hoping was Bioware's plan all along. If not Bioware, just say it was!
It's really just my fantasy happy ending for ME3. Please don't rip me to shreds too quickly, I've not done creative writing since High School. Apologies for defaulting to a male Shepard in this, and for a massive wall of text. Also my dialogue is thoroughly cheesy, but this isn't really my area of expertise.
darthnick427 wrote...
THE ENDINGS:
The only changes I suggest is show all of my war assets in the final battle, including cutscenes with all squadmates that are still alive past and present. Clarify very clearly that intergalactic travel, trade, government, and cooperation is still viable. Harbinger has a bigger role, there is closure with Harbinger and a conversation with him. Have the Geth and EDI survive with a high enough EMS score in Destroy ending. Show Shepard reuniting with his crew if he's still alive, and have an epilogue showing the consequences of all our choices. Also fix the flashback to show whoever your romance is, not just Liara and the VS
The rest of the game:
Liara romance fixes: if you re-kindled your romance in LotSB fix the dialog error that makes Liara think it's been years since you were together in her first conversation. Also reword the "Just friends" line on the citadel if you've been loyal to Liara for 3 games.
Tali romance fixes: give her a date on the citadel like the rest. and make an in game model of her face for her romance scene and extend it a tiny bit.
Jack romance fix: give a it little more content 1 or 2 more conversations and a satisfying romance scene
Miranda romance fix: same as Jack (Give satisfying romance scene)
Samara romance fix: Give them anything. A kiss a hug something. you threw them under the bus.
Thane Romance: Give them a date on the citadel or a couple more interactions.
Jacob romance fix: Give renegade option to kick him in the balls for cheating on you.
All romances: Make it so you can call them up to your room during down time like in ME2
Grunt: Make him the 2nd DLC squadmate. If he survives the Rachni mission he is reassigned to the Normandy. Put him in the Life Support or Hanger with James. There are not enough ME2 squadmates and this would make the squad an even number with 8 and we'd have the Krogan squadmate we've always had throughout Mass Effect.
Fix the bug with Tali's banter and Ken and Gabby's banter that only activates if you are good friends with Ash. Kaidan fans miss out on awesome banter with this bug. THIS NEEDS TO BE FIXED!!!
Sync up the auto and lip animations in some scenes
add more side missions in DLC or expand upon current fetch quests by letting us go down to the surface of Dekuuna, Irune, The Asari Library, Khar Shan, and more with the side missions
Make a SP DLC that allows us to go on Palaven's surface and save Kal'Reeger
Make Retake Omega DLC that includes the NPC'S: Aria T'Loak, Patriarch, Capt. Gavorn, Feron, Tazzik.
Make Retake Illium DLC.
Rachni Questline DLC occurs after Grunt's mission. involvees returning the Queen to her Hive and retaking it from the reapers and restoring order which takes 2-3 missions. After which The Rachni Queen Pledges loyalty to your cause or the Rachni Abomination tries to betray you unless you convince her to join your cause.
Make at least 4 or 5 single player DLC's Examples: LotSB, Arrival, Kasumi stolen Memory, Zaeed: Price of Revenge, Overlord.
Doubt this will happen but make it possible to save Legion. Make a side quest or something that can help him survive.......I know this probably won't happen but Legion dying is the most heartbreaking thing of the trilogy and I need my brobot back......If there is a way to save him make Legion the thrid DLC squadmate
(Bolded comments are the most important and what I think needs to happen)
Modifié par darthnick427, 09 mai 2012 - 09:35 .
Sugarjaye wrote...
YES YES YES,For the love of all, yes please. Something like this please....... reading this made me happy and sad all at the same time. Happy/Exited because this is the ending i wish we could have, and sad because i know what we ended up with.
I understand changing an ending altogether would be difficult, but this is mostly just adding on to the pre-existing ending after a different conversation choice.
Modifié par Eryri, 09 mai 2012 - 10:11 .
darthnick427 wrote...
In addition to this....the Track: The End Run or Suicide Mission NEEDS to play during the extended cut
Modifié par Xellith, 09 mai 2012 - 11:52 .
PPF65 wrote...
Also, the way Miranda's story ended was just unnecessary. For multiple reasons. It seems like Bioware didn't kill her for a good reason like you did Thane. I feel like the only reason you killed hr was to make us hate Kai Leng and Cerberus more, and I know I certainly didn't need any more reason to hate them. Besides that, come on, Miranda could totally take Kai Leng. She's a way ore powerful biotic, and unlike him, she's smart enough to use a GUN in a gun fight.
Bioware, you had such a HUGE chance to create one of the best games of this console generation. Missed the boat.
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