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........- Julien/Nicholas, this could have been used to much better effect, instead of just being a way to kill Nicholas off without actually killing him. That just didn't make any sense; wouldn't Julien have wanted Nicholas to continue the mission and not let his death be in vain? How could Nicholas have done that to Julien's memory? Their relationship was definitely a good inclusion though, I just wish it would have been explored a little more too.
- The black dagger that Duncan steals. My first thought when Duncan found it was "Please, please Gaider don't let this dagger be a deus ex machina"...and guess what? It's an all-purpose taint ward; protects against darkspawn magic, keeps Duncan from prematurely having his Calling, like the other GW with the brooches, and conveniently only gets used at the end to pull the heroes out of an otherwise hopeless fight. That's pretty much the definition of a deus ex machina, which is only really needed when an otherwise talented author runs out of time or ideas to make a really spectacular ending.
Good book though, overall! I'd recommend it to anyone who wants to know more about the Dragon Age world.
i actually thought it was a very good way of killing off nicolas. it really showed the strong nature of their relationship and... you know nicolas was clearly to be killed off at some point and it would have really sucked to see him get killed in just another "buy time" or "sacrificed myself to save someone else" scene.
it was stated a couple of times later that you don't know whether they live on in the fade until the maker calls them. that was left pretty much open and i like to think that way. to me they are sortof the winners of both books because they are the only ones who have somewhat of a "happy" ending.
you're right with the dagger though. for one thing it made clear that the first enchanter is a traitor which led to the brooches being a trap and the dagger itself being the deus ex machina. i still think it was pretty well written in though. i like how david gaider did an excellent job at turning a simple dungeon crawl into a really heartcrunching and deep novel.




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