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First off, since this is my first post, introductions are in order: 

Hello Mass Effect Enthusiasts, I am CmdrSlander. My gaming background before becoming a huge fan of the ME series consisted primarily of Halo, Half Life, Battlefield, Fallout, The Elder Scrolls and Gears of War. The one thing about gaming that I have come to love above all else is the vast variety and possibility that a well crafted open world game or RPG offers. That being said, my primary interest in the gaming industry is narrative and canon/universe development. 

I realize creating a story for ME4 as an outsider is absurd, but it is an interesting exercise and also a form of catharsis for those (such as myself) who were irked by the "conclusion" of Mass Effect 3, which is in itself a conclusion to one of the most intricate works of science fiction seen in modern popular media - the Mass Effect Universe. 

With that out of the way, here is my concept for ME4: 

Opening Scroll:

The year is 2217. 

Three decades have passed since Commander Shepard ended the Reaper threat. 

The races of the galaxy are scattered, with millions of ships having fled their home systems as the relay network imploded. The technologies that made the Galactic Community possible - The Mass Relays, Prothean and Reaper advancements - have been lost to time or buried in the rubble of an untold number of devastated worlds.

Limited to underdevoloped FTL and Sublight drives, the alien members of the Sword Fleet, who were stranded in the Sol System after the destruction of the relay network have embarked on perilous pilgramages back to their homeworlds, which will take centuries. 

For some all hope seems lost, for others it is a new beginning. 

The survivors of The Normandy found themselves a new and fertile home - the garden world Morgana - as did the crews of 200 other ships that also found themselves stranded in the same system as a result of the Catalyst's final directive to the relays  - route organic vessels to systems which can support life, ensuring that organics may live on, and perhaps, in their hubris, restart of the cycle of extinction. 

Optimists theorize that the data and technology stored aboard the SSV Normandy may hold the key to reuiniting the galaxy, but the ship is conspicously absent from her crash site. Her pilot, Jeff  "Joker" Moreau, is, under galactic law and custom, the owner of Morgana, having been the first person to set foot there. With his expertise and newfound prestige, Moreau built a rag tag but succesfull intra-system shipping empire around Morgana. In the dark space around Morgana's system, strange Mass Effect field distortions have been detected. Moreau is no where to be found.

You are his adopted [son/daughter]. Your destiny is written in the stars. 


MASS EFFECT 4

Story Summary:

Joker (Mr. Moreau, since he is now older and distinguished) has spent the last 30 years rebuilding the SSV Normandy piece-by-piece. Testing of the vessel is responsible for the odd readings at the edge of Morgana's system. He has determined (with the help of EDI if she survived or a large science team if she did not) that the Normandy's Tantalus drive core, which was never fully understood in the first place, has, after being exposed the Catalyst's signal and enormous amount of dark energy (remember the "space magic" wave washing over the Normandy) became a slipspace catalyst (with a lower case "c" look - up the definition of catalyst) capable of transporting whole fleets of ships to anywhere in known space, with only destination coordinates, in a matter of hours. The theoretical accuracy and speed of this system rivals the Mass Relays and is no doubt the legacy of the technology of the cycle that created the Relays/Reapers. Moreau, who wished to take the Normandy on her greatest mission (Galactic unification) himself is too old, and dying of exposure to Dark Energy. He never wanted to burden you (his adopted child) with this mission, but you are now his only hope, the galaxy's only hope. 

Meanwhile, an unknown, shadowy group with similar technology has a far sinister mission: achieve what they percieve as the goal of the Reapers, who they have deified. They plan to harness dark energy to enlarge the black hole at center of the galaxy, resulting in the destruction of the entire Milky Way. They must be stopped. 

The player is charged with:
-Gathering the scattered alien and human fleets and taking them home, finally. (very emotional, imagine the rebuilt Normandy returning to the Sol system, flying in amongst the debris of the Sword Fleet battle and the Crucible/Citadel. Liara and Samara landing on Thessia after believing they would never see it again. Tali and Rannoch. Etc.)
-"Relighting" the Normandy (finding an Eezo source large enough to power the Normandy for the rest of her days. Hint: Thessia
-Defeating the Reaper Cult. 
-Taking back the homeworld of every major species (except humanity, we already did that) from the lawless brigands and madmen who took power in the vacuum left by the end of The Citadel Council and the destruction of the Reapers. 
-Construct a new Citadel to serve as a hub of a galaxy that you rebuild in your own unique way. 
-Reviving the Galactic economy. Establishing new trades and generally making loads of credits (repeatable/side missions) 
-Colonize worlds and provide for their defense. Rule with an even hand or an iron fist!
-Generally helping the galaxy put itself back together.
-100+ Side Quests, some of which are repeatable

Why You'll love my version of ME4:
-Brigther Story in a Darker Galaxy: You're on a mission of hope in a seemingly hopeless setting, not hurtling towards oblivion like in ME3. 
-Closure: If Shepard survived (current 4000+ EMS Destroy Ending) you can see him/her on Earth. Reunite them with Love Interest etc. Most squadmates who live and that have a sufficient life span will return (though not, most likely as Squadmates). 
-Command not only the Normandy but an ever growing fleet in real time. Participate in epic space battles in real time (no adopted son/daughter or Joker grows up without becoming a crack pilot). 
-Varied and Dynamic Settlements: As opposed to ME2  which had two major trade centers (Citadel, Omega) and ME3 which had one trade center (Citadel) the post-relay galaxy has scores of space stations and colonies with their own unique inhabitants and environments.
-New Squadmates and Fireteam mechanic. Bring a seperate squad of three commanded by and AI squadmate or Co-Op partner along with you on missions. 
-Return of the loyalty gameplay mechanic. More side missions and explorations of the new squadmates backstories. 
-New, Deadlier Normandy. The Normandy is equipped with heavier armor and bristles with armaments, from lasers to rail guns, all of which can be upgraded. You can even customize the paintjob and lettering. 


I will be writing "Codex" articles for ME4 and posting them here to add more info about the story and universe. 

What do you think of my concept for ME4? Please be gentle as you slaughter my ideas. 

Modifié par CmdrSlander, 24 mars 2012 - 05:21 .


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Skyblade012

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I'm sorry. You did some good, solid work here.

But the simple fact is, I can't care about the universe anymore. Everything that made it what it was is over. Mass Effect is dead.

I'm sorry. But expanding from that ending is like grooming a dead horse. You can pretty it up, but you can't bring it back to life.

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Skyblade012 wrote...
I can't care about the universe anymore. Everything that made it what it was is over. Mass Effect is dead.


Yet you are on a message board of a game talking about the universe you claim is dead to you. Reminds me of the zombies in Dawn of the Dead who kept going to the mall and they wondered why

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So you're telling me they found one of the Three Great Hyperspace Cores?

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Tequila Man

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I.....

Love it. Like combining elements of FO3 with ME, it seems, too.

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CmdrSlander

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@Skyblade012 I thank you for the acknowledgment of my efforts. I for one believe the Mass Effect universe isn't dead. In my opinion, as long as The Normandy lives, Mass Effect lives. Think of what the ship contained when she crashed: Tantalus drive core. The entire galactic Codex. Liara's Shadow Broker information cache. Liara's time capsule. The list goes on. The Normandy is the series. Her appearance and crew may change (think of the various USS Enterprise's in Star Trek lore) but as long the The Normandy lives their is hope.

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Dridengx wrote...

Skyblade012 wrote...
I can't care about the universe anymore. Everything that made it what it was is over. Mass Effect is dead.


Yet you are on a message board of a game talking about the universe you claim is dead to you. Reminds me of the zombies in Dawn of the Dead who kept going to the mall and they wondered why


Yep.  I am.  I'm on the message board, complaining, rather than playing.

In fact, I'm not playing much of anything.  Gaming itself has been kind of ruined for me.  Since I saw the ending, I haven't been able to stick with a game for any reasonable length of time.

So I have a lot of spare time, and a lot of negativity, and I'm choosing to unload it as close as possible to those who gave it to me.

Live with it.

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Looks nice. Who is developing it? I hope it's not Bioware, they seem to ignore quality where it matters.

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Skyblade012 wrote...

Yep.  I am.  I'm on the message board, complaining, rather than playing.

In fact, I'm not playing much of anything.  Gaming itself has been kind of ruined for me.  Since I saw the ending, I haven't been able to stick with a game for any reasonable length of time.

So I have a lot of spare time, and a lot of negativity, and I'm choosing to unload it as close as possible to those who gave it to me.

Live with it.


I don't have to live with anything, you are the one who seems down and depressed. Is it safe to even call yourself a gamer though? one bad franchise ending and you give up on gaming itself? I've been gaming my whole life some franchises die, some should die, some never get a chance to even blossom. Yet, I move on like gamers do. a moviegoer doesn't watch one bad movie then quit watching all movies.

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There wont be a ME4.

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Skyblade012 wrote...

I'm sorry. You did some good, solid work here.

But the simple fact is, I can't care about the universe anymore. Everything that made it what it was is over. Mass Effect is dead.

I'm sorry. But expanding from that ending is like grooming a dead horse. You can pretty it up, but you can't bring it back to life.



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I like the idea, it's a good way moving past the endings but...

and I don't mean to burst your bubble... but the notes for the game say the Stargazer scene is 10k years in the future. That's a lot more then ten decades. It's ten centuries.... and they don't even have space flight, according to the Stargazer.

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@Hunter_Wolf Honestly, there probably shouldn't be an ME4, but just like Halo 4, the series is too popular (and thus a cash cow) for them to kill it. If Bioware moves on like Bungie did, EA will find or create a new studio, just as Microsoft did.

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I like this idea a lot :)

....although bioware would never be able to think of something this good...

Modifié par Max2011, 24 mars 2012 - 04:57 .


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Yah, I know about the stargazer, however...

What planet is that?
What race is that?
The stargazer could also be saying that child will go to space "someday" as in when he is ready not when spaceflight is developed.

Also after 10,000 the races of the current cycle may move to other galaxies, die off etc. Leaving "The Shepard" behind in their writings, ruins, etc.

Also, that whole scene sucks. The ending itself opened more doors than it closed, but the Stargazer was really just BioWare trying to make the point that life goes on no matter what.

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Dridengx wrote...

Skyblade012 wrote...

Yep.  I am.  I'm on the message board, complaining, rather than playing.

In fact, I'm not playing much of anything.  Gaming itself has been kind of ruined for me.  Since I saw the ending, I haven't been able to stick with a game for any reasonable length of time.

So I have a lot of spare time, and a lot of negativity, and I'm choosing to unload it as close as possible to those who gave it to me.

Live with it.


I don't have to live with anything, you are the one who seems down and depressed. Is it safe to even call yourself a gamer though? one bad franchise ending and you give up on gaming itself? I've been gaming my whole life some franchises die, some should die, some never get a chance to even blossom. Yet, I move on like gamers do. a moviegoer doesn't watch one bad movie then quit watching all movies.


Actually, you do have to live with the fact that other people have opinions and are free to express them.  Hell, I paid 80 bucks for the right to post in this forum.  I'm going to.

And did I ever label myself a gamer?

Yeah, I'm down, and depressed.  I'd looked forward to this for a long time.  I had a lot of emotional investment in it.  I get off stressful work days because the economy sucks and we're having to do more work with less people.  Mass Effect was one of the greatest game series I had played.  It was one of the great ones that let me truly immerse myself in another world.  I did everything in these games.  I created my own codex entries, I imagined whole new adventures, new character interactions, and how everything would play out.

And the ending did everything it could to drain that from me.  To rip every good feeling this series had given me away.  It left me empty and depressed.  Is it my fault for having so much wrapped up in a game?  Sure.  But that doesn't change what this ending did, or how hard it hit me.

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Skyblade012 wrote...

I'm sorry. You did some good, solid work here.

But the simple fact is, I can't care about the universe anymore. Everything that made it what it was is over. Mass Effect is dead.

I'm sorry. But expanding from that ending is like grooming a dead horse. You can pretty it up, but you can't bring it back to life.


^^^^

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Seems nice.

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@Reign, you second his opinion whilst demanding better endings in your sig. The fact that you want better endings means you still have hope.

We, the community, will, in Fan Fic, in threads like this one, and in our minds, keep the Normandy flying to new and exciting worlds.

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CmdrSlander wrote...

Yah, I know about the stargazer, however...

What planet is that?
What race is that?
The stargazer could also be saying that child will go to space "someday" as in when he is ready not when spaceflight is developed.

Also after 10,000 the races of the current cycle may move to other galaxies, die off etc. Leaving "The Shepard" behind in their writings, ruins, etc.

Also, that whole scene sucks. The ending itself opened more doors than it closed, but the Stargazer was really just BioWare trying to make the point that life goes on no matter what.

I believe it's supose to be the planet Normany crashes on...
But can be explained in 4 with something like by the end of 4 that system that was home to refugees was no longer needed and some of them choose to stay behind as a colony without tech to evolve on their own and all the races agreed to leave them be.
They would have left them behind Liara capsule as a legend & warning..

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CmdrSlander wrote...

Yah, I know about the stargazer, however...

What planet is that?
What race is that?
The stargazer could also be saying that child will go to space "someday" as in when he is ready not when spaceflight is developed.

Also after 10,000 the races of the current cycle may move to other galaxies, die off etc. Leaving "The Shepard" behind in their writings, ruins, etc.

Also, that whole scene sucks. The ending itself opened more doors than it closed, but the Stargazer was really just BioWare trying to make the point that life goes on no matter what.


I took it as the planet the Normandy lands on, it's got the same moons, and the notes say it is a human or asari. The Stargazer says "someday" in a tone, and it seems obvious to me, that says it's a nice story but it won't happend. You're a legend to bunch of primitives who despite the fact you "saved" them will become extinct if the Galaxy so much as sneezes in their general direction. 

I'm not even going to bother speculating about the races outside of that normandy crash... in my minds eye they are dead/doomed just by the nihilistic nature of the ending. 

Like I said I don't wanna burst your bubble, it's an interesting concept, I would just much prefer Mass Effect to keep being... Mass Effect. Even in ME1 we've only explored 1% of the galaxy... 1%, there are ENDLESS possibilities and it doesn't always have to be a Cthulu like threat. They just decided to throw all that away however... so sad. 

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I like this human and his idea

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"some of them choose to stay behind as a colony without tech to evolve on their own and all the races agreed to leave them be.
They would have left them behind Liara capsule as a legend & warning.."

Good thinking! Reminds me of the themes explored at the end of the reimagined Battlestar Galactica.

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@ramdog7 I like this Krogan and his words of approval.

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CmdrSlander wrote...

"some of them choose to stay behind as a colony without tech to evolve on their own and all the races agreed to leave them be.
They would have left them behind Liara capsule as a legend & warning.."

Good thinking! Reminds me of the themes explored at the end of the reimagined Battlestar Galactica.

Thanks...I try..
Fell free to add it on if it goes & helps with what your doing..