Is this really just bad writing?
#151
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 11:56
The theme of self-sacrifice is all over the game: Thane, Mordin, Legion ... it repeatedly beats you over the head with this as if to push on toward the lousy ending. I *do* think Shep should have the option to die in a blaze of glory, but the problem is that the current ending doesn't offer this.
Thane and Mordin both had spectacular final stands. Shepard's should've AT LEAST been on par with those. Instead, the action comes to a halt and the game manages to be anticlimactic as well as disappointing.
I don't think Shep dying should be the only option, either, but the way it stands now, it's a horrible end for our hero.
#152
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 11:59
#153
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:01
nomoredruggs wrote...
I really can't decide if it's
1. Done on purpose to destroy the franchise
2.Done due to time restrictions
3.Someone thought it was a great idea to go all "intelectual" at the end of the series
My guess would be a mixture of 2 and 3.
#154
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:05
MattFini wrote...
I don't think Shep dying should be the only option, either, but the way it stands now, it's a horrible end for our hero.
I always thought it would be an awesome final choice for Shepard to either; Paragon - stay and try and stear the disintegrating Citadel away from Earth orbit, save millions and die in the process, or Renegade - jump into a shuttle and survive, but Citadel crashes and blows up half of England.
#155
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:08
Xandurpein wrote...
MattFini wrote...
I don't think Shep dying should be the only option, either, but the way it stands now, it's a horrible end for our hero.
I always thought it would be an awesome final choice for Shepard to either; Paragon - stay and try and stear the disintegrating Citadel away from Earth orbit, save millions and die in the process, or Renegade - jump into a shuttle and survive, but Citadel crashes and blows up half of England.
You mean have more choice? What are you, crazy?
#156
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:08
Arcian wrote...
No they did not, Shiala-CloneNr1 spoke on its behalf.
I disagree. The clone was the conduit, in the renegade option. Shiala shares the experience with you through asari mind-melding in the paragon option. either way, it leaves a deep imprint on your psyche, allowing you to interpret the beacon. you really think thinking differently isn't a big deal? look at the prothean VI on thessia - it recognizes you as different. look how you interact with javik - your magical psychotouch powers indicate something different. it's all there - you're just ignoring the parts that disagree with you.
#157
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:16
Mcfly616 wrote...
No...it says that nowhere in Shialas email ....I'm looking at it right now....
So am I and guess what? It directly states that she believes she is still indoctrinated, only that her connection to the people of Zhu's hope (a connection made because she was taken by the Thorian) is stronger than the Reaper voices, thereby drowning it out.
#158
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:22
Lizardviking wrote...
Mcfly616 wrote...
No...it says that nowhere in Shialas email ....I'm looking at it right now....
So am I and guess what? It directly states that she believes she is still indoctrinated, only that her connection to the people of Zhu's hope (a connection made because she was taken by the Thorian) is stronger than the Reaper voices, thereby drowning it out.
I have to bring it up - TIM was partially indoctrinated for years, and he defeated it until he decided to modify himself like his soldiers - only then did the Reapers control him. It can be successfully combated.
#159
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:28
Reptilian Rob wrote...
"Torch the franchise and run."
its possible they did a torch and run...
I also think its possible that it is or was some part of some kind of IDT....
either they ran out of time...or have more in the works....
because to me...you dont write such good stuff for the entire time...then implode at the last minute. I mean..it would be hard for an amatuer to do that...I cant see professional writers...in a team...who can obviously write well...to just crash and burn so quickly...
maybe I am indoctrinated...lol..but I dont think I would ever beleive that such a talented group of people would just miss the mark so drastically...after having proven thet could deliver the goods...
#160
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:30
N-Seven wrote...
Actually I thought up until he met the Starchild, it was decent. The near hit from the red beam. The slow-mo, cinematic sequence of Shepard staggering into the beam, nothing but a pistol, and into the Citadel. The tense standoff with the Illusive Man, and his tender moment with Anderson at the end. Good, climactic stuff.. Just the Catachild bit and onward was an extreme letdown.
I love how I can usually scroll through the first page and someone will have eloquently expressed what I wished to say. While I don't believe the BSN has ever been in a unified state, we're certainly more so than ever before.
So, yeah. Someone wanted to pull a "twist" ending with the child, and it (literally) blew up in BioWare's face.
#161
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:32
MB957 wrote...
Reptilian Rob wrote...
"Torch the franchise and run."
its possible they did a torch and run...
I also think its possible that it is or was some part of some kind of IDT....
either they ran out of time...or have more in the works....
because to me...you dont write such good stuff for the entire time...then implode at the last minute. I mean..it would be hard for an amatuer to do that...I cant see professional writers...in a team...who can obviously write well...to just crash and burn so quickly...
maybe I am indoctrinated...lol..but I dont think I would ever beleive that such a talented group of people would just miss the mark so drastically...after having proven thet could deliver the goods...
you must not have heard the rumor (leaked from a confirmed BIoware employees' account, so it's either true, or it was hacked - I'm not naming names, though it seems a little late for that) that only Mac and Casey worked on the ending - no one from the rest of the creative team had any input or exposure to it.
#162
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:38
#163
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:43
MattFini wrote...
^ That is only a rumor, but I have to admit, it DOES explain A LOT.
I've read the post in question, and I think it could be either-or, but this is something that has the ring of truth to it, in my opinion. In addition to EA not giving the franchise enough time and/or money to actually do a good job of it (see: DA2).
#164
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:48
recentio wrote...
Two men alone, filled with pride, created an "intelligent" ending. Woe to a piteous soul as me, for I cannot fathom it's sweeping complexities! In shame, I withdraw to the Abyss of Imbeciles from whence I came, consoled there by the idiocy of theoretical computer science. O, we unwashed rabble, we children of the swamps who squint before the red/green/blue face of Apollo. O, flawless art that was rushed and hewn in isolation from the creative team that told the rest of the story. Give unto me thick-rimmed, black glasses, that I might become worthy.
/drama
Yeah, it's just bad. It hasn't survived a single scholarly deconstruction without being unmasked as tripe.
I can understand liking the ending. It's cool that some people do, and respectful disagreements can be very good for fostering discussions. I think I'm losing my temper, though, with those pretentious few who archly declare stupidity as the root of all discontent. I've found the "2deep4u" crowd a bit intractable to converse with...sorry if I indulged that frustration in this post.
ROFL!! This made me snort- like when I watched that review of ME3 on MSNBC that gave the game a perfect 10 and said that the ending was -and I'm paraphrasing because I can't remember the exact words- but essentially, it was too complex and intelligent and the common rabble just couldn't comprehend the perfection. (I will never watch a msnbc game review btw- the arrogance was astounding!)
Oh, we poor, unsophisticated souls....... <_<.......
#165
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:48
bleachorange wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
Mcfly616 wrote...
No...it says that nowhere in Shialas email ....I'm looking at it right now....
So am I and guess what? It directly states that she believes she is still indoctrinated, only that her connection to the people of Zhu's hope (a connection made because she was taken by the Thorian) is stronger than the Reaper voices, thereby drowning it out.
I have to bring it up - TIM was partially indoctrinated for years, and he defeated it until he decided to modify himself like his soldiers - only then did the Reapers control him. It can be successfully combated.
For whatever reasons. TIM was not effected by the monolith on Shanxi the same way everyone else was. I do not think he was indoctrinated to begin with.
#166
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 12:51
Lizardviking wrote...
bleachorange wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
Mcfly616 wrote...
No...it says that nowhere in Shialas email ....I'm looking at it right now....
So am I and guess what? It directly states that she believes she is still indoctrinated, only that her connection to the people of Zhu's hope (a connection made because she was taken by the Thorian) is stronger than the Reaper voices, thereby drowning it out.
I have to bring it up - TIM was partially indoctrinated for years, and he defeated it until he decided to modify himself like his soldiers - only then did the Reapers control him. It can be successfully combated.
For whatever reasons. TIM was not effected by the monolith on Shanxi the same way everyone else was. I do not think he was indoctrinated to begin with.
Uh-huh. Just admit I have a point, and it's possible Shepard can overcome indoctrination.
#167
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 01:21
Modifié par anorling, 26 mars 2012 - 01:22 .
#168
Guest_Arcian_*
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:12
Guest_Arcian_*
How long you've been a BioWare fan is irrelevant to this discussion. I could have mentioned that I was around to play Baldur's Gate 1 when it first came out, but it has literally nothing to do with the mechanics of indoctrination.Mcfly616 wrote...
idc when you got into Mass Effect....I've been a Bioware fan for over a decade....I got KotOR on Day 1....doesn't mean **** to me lol
What I do know is that I know significantly more about Mass Effect than you do. This is painfully clear.
Ah yes, the "You're a troll"-defense. You could have come with counter-arguments, but as we've quite clearly established here, you have none.Mcfly616 wrote...
Troll....stop trying to say what you believe is "fact" and trying to push it off on all of us
And what I say IS fact - play ME1, ME2 and read ME: Revelation and ME: Retribution. It is very clearly shown that indoctrination is VERY harmful and PERMANENT. It literally destroys the mind to make the victim more vulnerable to suggestion, with the side effect of destroying intelligence and higher brain functions, essentially turning the person into a mindless zombie.
You cannot "shrug off" brain-damage, genius.
Oh, and you mentioned Shiala. Here's her Mass Effect 3 letter:
From: Shiala
Dear Commander Shepard:
I don't know if you've seen the articles, but the people of Zhu's Hope are fighting again. This time it's the Reapers instead of the geth.
I'm not sure if you remember me, but you helped me back on lllium. The Thorian is dead now. I can confirm that. But the spores in our bodies remain, and on some level, we are still connected.
This is not necessarily a bad thing. As we fight back the Reapers, we feel each other, and act with one mind, ignoring pain when the need arises. I'm sure I'm still indoctrinated. I remember Sovereign's voice in my mind when I went willingly to the Thorian as its thrall. But my connection to the people of Zhu's Hope is stronger. It drowns out the Reaper voices.
This situation is imperfect, and dangerous. Perhaps the colonists should separate, for their own safety. But with one mind, the untrained fight with the skill of veteran commandos. Our force is strong.
I have not forgotten how you helped us, how you spared me. We are leaving Feros soon, and when the time comes, we will fight with you.
Shiala
Source:
http://masseffect.wi..._Still_fighting
It is a fact because from day 1, BioWare has written indoctrination to be a permanent and utterly mind-obliterating weapon that cannot be cured or reversed. Changing the mechanics of indoctrination in the last 15 minutes of the game is a retcon, an asspull and reeks of fan incompetence.Mcfly616 wrote...
If indoc.theory was intended, Bioware is genius....if it wasn't, it was just a good theory by fans....you have no proof to say either one at this point....
Listen, I can buy that Shepard becomes indoctrinated in ME3. The game practically begs you to believe that.
What I refuse to believe is that Shepard is capable of rejecting it, because according to EVERY SINGLE REFERENCE TO INDOCTRINATION, that's not possible. Once you're indoctrinated, you can't become unindoctrinateed. Simply. Not. Possible.
I can buy an ending where Shepard wakes up and is controlled by the Reapers, and where he/she tries to fight his/her allies and ends up shot. I can buy that Shepard, in this wounded state, manages to temporarily "snap out of it" for a few minutes, long enough to fire the Crucible, after which he/she asks a friend/LI to shoot him/her in the head to free him/her from the Reapers.
The problem with this is that there is literally NO ROOM for a Golden "Happy" Ending for Shepard, and I believe this game should have that if you maxed out the Total Military Strength.
THAT is why I hate this sh!tty theory.
#169
Guest_Arcian_*
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:17
Guest_Arcian_*
TIM was indoctrinated, just not to the point where the Reapers could control him. Over time, TIM began to expose himself to their technology, making the indoctrination stronger and allowing the Reapers to influence him more and more. Towards the end of ME3, he has been fully indoctrinated.bleachorange wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
bleachorange wrote...
Lizardviking wrote...
Mcfly616 wrote...
No...it says that nowhere in Shialas email ....I'm looking at it right now....
So am I and guess what? It directly states that she believes she is still indoctrinated, only that her connection to the people of Zhu's hope (a connection made because she was taken by the Thorian) is stronger than the Reaper voices, thereby drowning it out.
I have to bring it up - TIM was partially indoctrinated for years, and he defeated it until he decided to modify himself like his soldiers - only then did the Reapers control him. It can be successfully combated.
For whatever reasons. TIM was not effected by the monolith on Shanxi the same way everyone else was. I do not think he was indoctrinated to begin with.
Uh-huh. Just admit I have a point, and it's possible Shepard can overcome indoctrination.
Nowhere during this period did he "overcome" his indoctrination. Until the end of ME3, he wasn't even aware he was being indoctrinated at all. They made him think he was in complete control.
#170
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:20
It's even sadder when it's so bad that they continue to cling to the theory after you tell the "No guys, seriously that's how it ends."
#171
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:27
#172
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:28
#173
Guest_Arcian_*
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:36
Guest_Arcian_*
ME3 had the franchise's shortest development cycle, but was planned to have the most content.MOIST N FLUFFY wrote...
It seems like a lot of bad writing, and if you look through these forums there are many threads pertaining to the various ways in which ME3 is not ME quality.
That should speak volumes about everything that went wrong.
#174
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:39
You'd think they'd learn from the DA2 thing, but noooo....Arcian wrote...
ME3 had the franchise's shortest development cycle, but was planned to have the most content.MOIST N FLUFFY wrote...
It seems like a lot of bad writing, and if you look through these forums there are many threads pertaining to the various ways in which ME3 is not ME quality.
That should speak volumes about everything that went wrong.
#175
Posté 26 mars 2012 - 02:42
Arcian wrote...
ME3 had the franchise's shortest development cycle, but was planned to have the most content.
That should speak volumes about everything that went wrong.
Really? I thought they started making the game even before ME2 was released. Where did you get this information?





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