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Really good ending in my opinion, I would pay for that if it was a DLC ending that good.

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I would so pay for this ending! Amazing job by the OP!

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asmodic zion wrote...

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I mean, I KNOW it is a game...so is it totally dumb that it upsets me that Wrex will never get to see his son due to being stranded on earth? Or that Tali never gets back to Ranoch?

And, umm, actually, Eve & Wrex' unborn son are actually dead. So is Ranoch. Since, you know, Mass Relay destruction is equivalent to a supernova. So that bothers me even more!



yo uknow i'm still not convinced that the way the mass relays blow up at the end of the game is the same as when you fly an asteroid into one. .

i mean asteroid mass/weight ect added to running relay = massive explosion

but an auto destruct may only destroy the contruct of the relay and eject the mass effect core leaving it inert. .   that may just be my way of rationalising it though lolImage IPB


All it would take to counter this issue (the mass relays blowing up) would be to show a quick clip of each of the major worlds looking up at the exploding relay and realizing they are cut off from the rest of the galaxy, but alive. But they didn't and the only envidence of what happens in that situation is complete system annihilation.

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Dark Gantros wrote...

asmodic zion wrote...

jsl1016 wrote...

I mean, I KNOW it is a game...so is it totally dumb that it upsets me that Wrex will never get to see his son due to being stranded on earth? Or that Tali never gets back to Ranoch?

And, umm, actually, Eve & Wrex' unborn son are actually dead. So is Ranoch. Since, you know, Mass Relay destruction is equivalent to a supernova. So that bothers me even more!



yo uknow i'm still not convinced that the way the mass relays blow up at the end of the game is the same as when you fly an asteroid into one. .

i mean asteroid mass/weight ect added to running relay = massive explosion

but an auto destruct may only destroy the contruct of the relay and eject the mass effect core leaving it inert. .   that may just be my way of rationalising it though lolImage IPB


All it would take to counter this issue (the mass relays blowing up) would be to show a quick clip of each of the major worlds looking up at the exploding relay and realizing they are cut off from the rest of the galaxy, but alive. But they didn't and the only envidence of what happens in that situation is complete system annihilation.


yup pretty much exactly my thoughts. .  . . . . . i dont get why everyone is worrying about the relays so much, i thought it was kinda the correct way to go, renouncing all things reaper made sense to me. . although the rest of the ending didnt make much sense. . . .  but yeah more explanation would definately be welcome,

i can imagine while runnig through some of the parts in YOUR ending,  getting reports from other squadmates saying, how the F**k am i going to get home once they realised the relays were exploding . . . . . esp tali if she was your LI . .

we'll see what happens with the dlc when it does get released  . . . .

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asmodic zion wrote...

Dark Gantros wrote...

asmodic zion wrote...

jsl1016 wrote...

I mean, I KNOW it is a game...so is it totally dumb that it upsets me that Wrex will never get to see his son due to being stranded on earth? Or that Tali never gets back to Ranoch?

And, umm, actually, Eve & Wrex' unborn son are actually dead. So is Ranoch. Since, you know, Mass Relay destruction is equivalent to a supernova. So that bothers me even more!



yo uknow i'm still not convinced that the way the mass relays blow up at the end of the game is the same as when you fly an asteroid into one. .

i mean asteroid mass/weight ect added to running relay = massive explosion

but an auto destruct may only destroy the contruct of the relay and eject the mass effect core leaving it inert. .   that may just be my way of rationalising it though lolImage IPB


All it would take to counter this issue (the mass relays blowing up) would be to show a quick clip of each of the major worlds looking up at the exploding relay and realizing they are cut off from the rest of the galaxy, but alive. But they didn't and the only envidence of what happens in that situation is complete system annihilation.


yup pretty much exactly my thoughts. .  . . . . . i dont get why everyone is worrying about the relays so much, i thought it was kinda the correct way to go, renouncing all things reaper made sense to me. . although the rest of the ending didnt make much sense. . . .  but yeah more explanation would definately be welcome,

i can imagine while runnig through some of the parts in YOUR ending,  getting reports from other squadmates saying, how the F**k am i going to get home once they realised the relays were exploding . . . . . esp tali if she was your LI . .

we'll see what happens with the dlc when it does get released  . . . .


Even if it was a 'controlled demolition', the destruction of the relays would still spell doom for the vast majority of the civilizations that depend on them. Imagine what would happen if humans today suddenly had no electricity and all electrical devices stopped functioning? a vast swath of the human race would die of starvation alone, because without machine labor, we couldn't produce enough food fast enough to support 7 billion people.

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If this was made I'd give them $10.00 as soon as it came out.

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Guys... just one thing. Don't get your hopes up too high or you can only end up disappointed.

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Zolt51 wrote...

Guys... just one thing. Don't get your hopes up too high or you can only end up disappointed.


TBH, I'm rather pessimistic about what the official change to the ending is going to be. Unless they had it planned it all along, I imagine that they will do nothing to actually change anything aside from some unneccessary exposition to justify the ending we got, which will only make things worse.

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That's a hell of a lot of great ideas. That I would dig.

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This is epic! Get a job at bioware ;)
this would be perfect but with maybe a bigger 'boss fight' with harbinger where we destroy him. And a big decision that can massively affect the ending scenes, like where we ultimately choose a side [harbinger/TIM/alliance]... dunno, but we should have an ending where we can fail in all of those too. but good job!

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Why don't all these people writing their random endings send a CV to Bioware instead of wasting everybody's time here?

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It's perfect bar one thing.

There are NO Prothean Reapers.

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To be honest, I don't need all these epilouge scenes with your squadmates. I would enjoy a scene where all your mates are together, just so I may know that they are alive. I think all these scenes wouldn't work.

Also, the rachni queen suddenly shows up and saves the day, just like that? Otherwise, it's good.

Modifié par Wuartz, 03 avril 2012 - 04:47 .


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Shallyah wrote...

Why don't all these people writing their random endings send a CV to Bioware instead of wasting everybody's time here?


I posted this idea on their ending suggestions board.

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Rooster8227 wrote...

This is epic! Get a job at bioware ;)
this would be perfect but with maybe a bigger 'boss fight' with harbinger where we destroy him. And a big decision that can massively affect the ending scenes, like where we ultimately choose a side [harbinger/TIM/alliance]... dunno, but we should have an ending where we can fail in all of those too. but good job!


Again, having TIM be an 'avatar' of Harbinger is a final insult to his intelligence and lust for power, maybe it would be better if he is fully aware but not in control of his body, so while he fights you, TIM and Harbinger alternatively encourage and belittle you. Harbinger's destruction at the hands of Reapers seems a fitting end where self-determination wins out over subjugation. The ending I wrote is a straight line if you do everything right and is mostly intended for Paragon choices, failures could happen at any point along the storyline.

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Great ending. Kind wish there was something about Miranda and Shep if you stayed with her as your LI. Seeing her in the battle too, with I think was fighter squadrons, would be great but hey. It's still better than what we've got at the moment.

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orenjikitty wrote...

Great ending. Kind wish there was something about Miranda and Shep if you stayed with her as your LI. Seeing her in the battle too, with I think was fighter squadrons, would be great but hey. It's still better than what we've got at the moment.


I had a brief epilogue where she, her sister, and (if LI) Shepard are sitting together on the Presidum watching the Memorial ceremony from afar. It isn't a detailed epilogue but it's a light enough touch that you can be assured that they are ok.

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Some plot holes in the ending with team members being on the citadel when they were supposed to be elsewhere. Maybe you covered them over the course of the thread but I didn't go through it all... sorry.

Anyway it's an amazing happy ending otherwise and I do like the whole "joker" thing happening again, as well as getting to play with no guns and shields etc. Makes for an epic finale, no matter what the ending you get is.

Good job :)

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Amazing how some guy from BSN can create a far better ending than a team of writers at Bioware.

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Mesmurae wrote...

Amazing how some guy from BSN can create a far better ending than a team of writers at Bioware.


Mind you, that's not a fact.

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Dark Gantros wrote...

orenjikitty wrote...

Great ending. Kind wish there was something about Miranda and Shep if you stayed with her as your LI. Seeing her in the battle too, with I think was fighter squadrons, would be great but hey. It's still better than what we've got at the moment.


I had a brief epilogue where she, her sister, and (if LI) Shepard are sitting together on the Presidum watching the Memorial ceremony from afar. It isn't a detailed epilogue but it's a light enough touch that you can be assured that they are ok.

Didn't realize that Shep would be there too. Thank you for your clarification.

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AnthonyDraft wrote...

Mesmurae wrote...

Amazing how some guy from BSN can create a far better ending than a team of writers at Bioware.


Mind you, that's not a fact.

No, but it definitely seems to be popular opinion.

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 I really like the epilogues. Nice work!