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Dark Gantros

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Atrumitos wrote...

Some plot holes in the ending with team members being on the citadel when they were supposed to be elsewhere. Maybe you covered them over the course of the thread but I didn't go through it all... sorry.

Anyway it's an amazing happy ending otherwise and I do like the whole "joker" thing happening again, as well as getting to play with no guns and shields etc. Makes for an epic finale, no matter what the ending you get is.

Good job :)


I'm assuming you are referring to the shuttle launch in the final battle? I wrote that so that your squadmates would come to your rescue in dramatic fashion for the final battle, when you only had the aid of old friends and strangers on Citadel in your fight to the Council Chamber.

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Dark Gantros wrote...

Rooster8227 wrote...

This is epic! Get a job at bioware ;)
this would be perfect but with maybe a bigger 'boss fight' with harbinger where we destroy him. And a big decision that can massively affect the ending scenes, like where we ultimately choose a side [harbinger/TIM/alliance]... dunno, but we should have an ending where we can fail in all of those too. but good job!


Again, having TIM be an 'avatar' of Harbinger is a final insult to his intelligence and lust for power, maybe it would be better if he is fully aware but not in control of his body, so while he fights you, TIM and Harbinger alternatively encourage and belittle you. Harbinger's destruction at the hands of Reapers seems a fitting end where self-determination wins out over subjugation. The ending I wrote is a straight line if you do everything right and is mostly intended for Paragon choices, failures could happen at any point along the storyline.


Yeah, i see your point but he's too much of an interesting character to kind of  be wasted as an 'avatar' but i think that the constant war between the two whilst harbinger controls his body is a pretty good idea. i just think where's the huge ending if we don't destroy harbinger? when he's the oldest reaper... and why would the reapers choose to kill him?
true, true. could prove interesting with an ending like this :happy:

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Rooster8227 wrote...

Dark Gantros wrote...

Rooster8227 wrote...

This is epic! Get a job at bioware ;)
this would be perfect but with maybe a bigger 'boss fight' with harbinger where we destroy him. And a big decision that can massively affect the ending scenes, like where we ultimately choose a side [harbinger/TIM/alliance]... dunno, but we should have an ending where we can fail in all of those too. but good job!


Again, having TIM be an 'avatar' of Harbinger is a final insult to his intelligence and lust for power, maybe it would be better if he is fully aware but not in control of his body, so while he fights you, TIM and Harbinger alternatively encourage and belittle you. Harbinger's destruction at the hands of Reapers seems a fitting end where self-determination wins out over subjugation. The ending I wrote is a straight line if you do everything right and is mostly intended for Paragon choices, failures could happen at any point along the storyline.


Yeah, i see your point but he's too much of an interesting character to kind of  be wasted as an 'avatar' but i think that the constant war between the two whilst harbinger controls his body is a pretty good idea. i just think where's the huge ending if we don't destroy harbinger? when he's the oldest reaper... and why would the reapers choose to kill him?
true, true. could prove interesting with an ending like this :happy:



Harbinger is destroyed, by the other Reapers in a form of poetic justice.

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Dark Gantros wrote...

Rooster8227 wrote...

Dark Gantros wrote...

Rooster8227 wrote...

This is epic! Get a job at bioware ;)
this would be perfect but with maybe a bigger 'boss fight' with harbinger where we destroy him. And a big decision that can massively affect the ending scenes, like where we ultimately choose a side [harbinger/TIM/alliance]... dunno, but we should have an ending where we can fail in all of those too. but good job!


Again, having TIM be an 'avatar' of Harbinger is a final insult to his intelligence and lust for power, maybe it would be better if he is fully aware but not in control of his body, so while he fights you, TIM and Harbinger alternatively encourage and belittle you. Harbinger's destruction at the hands of Reapers seems a fitting end where self-determination wins out over subjugation. The ending I wrote is a straight line if you do everything right and is mostly intended for Paragon choices, failures could happen at any point along the storyline.


Yeah, i see your point but he's too much of an interesting character to kind of  be wasted as an 'avatar' but i think that the constant war between the two whilst harbinger controls his body is a pretty good idea. i just think where's the huge ending if we don't destroy harbinger? when he's the oldest reaper... and why would the reapers choose to kill him?
true, true. could prove interesting with an ending like this :happy:



Harbinger is destroyed, by the other Reapers in a form of poetic justice.


hahaha, fair enough :D

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Damn that was..........EPIC!
So much better that what bioware delivered.
Kudos to you man

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This is amazing.

Edit: It's sad how the fans are coming up with endings that are so much better.

Modifié par Grimez7, 03 avril 2012 - 11:56 .


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I think this sort of ending would have guaranteed a GOTY and enshrined ME as the epic of this generation.

Instead we got... what we got... ho hum.

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First off I want to say, all great ideas and glad to see so many taking interest with this like I am.

I was for some sort of DLC to put a justice to the end, Shepard waking up, realizing everything was in his head and then him ACTUALLY trying to stop Harbinger, I was so disappointed he didn't have a bigger role in the end! Everyone knew he had a strange liking to Shepard...
I also wanted the final Chapter fight to be in the Normandy I thought it would be awesome if you could control it for once! To battle countless Reapers just to get to Harbinger then fight him and have some final board Harbinger to kill him from the inside out. Then Shepard does some heroic run to get to Harbingers core to blow it up.
Then Que cut-scene, showing all your war assets about to be over run, some getting injured or killed and on the brink of destruction until Shepard saves the day one last time.
A optional idea is, if they run with the Indoctrination Theory, have Shepard link his mind to Harbinger and have some sort of a cut-scene showing Shepard's "will" destroying all the remaining Reapers through the Cipher and Citadel.

Then if doing it on Insane, have some secret ending to maybe hint at a ME4 explaining about the Reapers and them actually being Indoctrinated to kill all life every cycle because of some bigger threat that was around before even the Inusannon and their ancestors. Let me know what you guys think on this, please be civil about it if you don't agree.

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"After the Credits, The Grandfather relates this to his grandchild, but instead of the double moon/planet in the night sky, it's the Earth's moon with the Citadel distantly but clearly visible behind it. The Grandfather begins to tell another story of what happened after..describing how the freed Reapers that didn't sacrifice themselves, sought to make themselves into gods, gradually building power, threatening to destroy the future that had been so hard fought for...To be continued?"

I agree, reapers put the mass in mass effect, and I hate Bioware for being SOOOOO blind.

Would be illegal if someone changed the game code to incorporate better endings and then distributed them for free?

Modifié par Chaoswind, 04 avril 2012 - 12:22 .


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To bad the "fixed" ending will probably be nothing like this. Kudos for trying though. I just hope your heart doesn't get broken again.

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This is amazing ! I actually thought I was reading spoilers a few times (What ? Stop reading this, you'll ruin the DLC ! Oh, right ... ) It would be so very epic. Seeing all those characters I love going on, that would be awesome. I'd get a little teary-eyed, or burst out crying (probably the latter). Make this real Bioware !

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Yes to all of this. Goodbye skittles ending, hello reasonably good one!

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This is the kind of ending mass effect deserves, only one thing, Javik only says he'll commit suicide if he touch the memory shard, so i think his fate at the epilogue should be different if he didn't touch it(he said something about writing a book with Liara i think).

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Amazing. I like how you incorporate all assets and characters in some way.

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Grimez7 wrote...

This is amazing.

Edit: It's sad how the fans are coming up with endings that are so much better.


I have to agree with you, its upsetting we thought of all these good endings, so much they couldve done with the end.
IF Bioware releases DLC or another game with a start to clarify the ending then they'll look smart, almost like they ment to leave us hanging for more. Right now I don't feel that lol.

#291
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What an amazing epilogue. I applaud you Dark Gantros; this really inspirational I loved it.

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I like some things. The way you portrayed some characters (uhh Garrus) I do not agree with. The harbinger theory... golden

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I would be completely satisfied if this was the new ending. Dark Gantros, you should have applied to work at BioWare lol

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Volkrex wrote...

This is the kind of ending mass effect deserves, only one thing, Javik only says he'll commit suicide if he touch the memory shard, so i think his fate at the epilogue should be different if he didn't touch it(he said something about writing a book with Liara i think).


Hmmm, maybe if he touches the shard he does my ending, and if he doesn't, we see a scene of him talking to Glyph.

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Bioware found the best solution (sarcasm)

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This is definitely the best "fixed" ending suggestion I've seen. I would love to see this implemented into the game.

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That's pure concentrated awesome idea. If we got something like that in the ending we would be singing praises right now.

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Sageofnightmares wrote...

I would be completely satisfied if this was the new ending. Dark Gantros, you should have applied to work at BioWare lol


you're the 4th or 5th person to suggewst that Bioware hire me,m and god knows I need the work.

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Phenoomenonal.

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You know above all other things i really respect Dark Gantros for keeping up with the replies on this thread, so many people post stuff on here and hardly post afterwards. . .if anything else it gives everyone a chance to discuss the ideas rationally and i've seen loads of people put some great input into possibilities for an ending we could all love. . . tbh even if the ending is nothing like what dark gantros has written i may well give him a shout and see if i can get some artists together and maybe do this as a comic . . . . . . can you imagine if we actually managed to finish a comic with this idea and then email a copy to bioware . . . hell if it was finished i mean like quality finished, it would be one hell of a smack in the teeth if what they come up with is bad. . .. . .i'm still hoping the dlc is going to be epic. . but even if its not i dont care! we'll arrange our own ending and finish it ourselves :)