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If only....

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Documental wrote...

Damn, this is good.


took the words right off of my keyboard.

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I like it but I noticed one thing. You were talking about a prothean reaper but I swear somewhere in the game it's explained that the reapers failed at making a prothean reaper and that they used them as husks/slaves (collectors) instead, I'm not sure though. (bad memory xD)

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Eh, it's great to theory craft your own ending and all but it becomes a large disappointment when the game doesn't end like that. As good as it would be. A trudge through the Citadel again would be a nice touch though, kind of what I wanted to see. Mix in an ambush of Cerberus where you think you're out numbered and then the Citadel's resistance pops up to save the day - Shepard continues on.

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MattFini wrote...

Another fan ending that far exceeds what BioWare came up with.

Seriously, wtf, there are about 10 really good ideas that would've been excellent.



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Do want.

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Hm, I don't know if I like the idea of Reapers still floating around the galaxy. I would still like for them to be permanently wiped out. However, the big final battle for the Citadel would have been an excellent way to see our war assets actually count for something. Some could play out on the battlefield in London, others on the Citadel. I think post-Harbinger Shepard would be a bit too beat for this, but making his injuries just a bit less severe could fix that.

Also, an Illusive Man being directly controlled by Harbinger would be an awesome final boss. You'd have the chance to kill the biggest two birds with one stone. Good thinking.

And I get to have those blue babies :3

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Dark Gantros wrote...

mbr.to wrote...

i would prefer to read some actual criticism instead of fanfiction.


I'm afraid I don't follow what you mean.


Agreed. Many criticisms of the ending just seem to offer less intelligent and irrelevant alternatives. This is a story produced by other writers. Its theirs. Like it or don't like it, suggesting completely alternative stories is just fanfiction. (which there's nothing wrong with)

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jmaster888 wrote...

I like it but I noticed one thing. You were talking about a prothean reaper but I swear somewhere in the game it's explained that the reapers failed at making a prothean reaper and that they used them as husks/slaves (collectors) instead, I'm not sure though. (bad memory xD)


I think someone mentioned EDI stating her suspicion that the Reapers failed to create a Prothean reaper. I thought that merely meant a unique Reaper as opposed to the HUman Reaper. I thouoght that perhaps at least one of the reaper shells contained protheans.

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taylortexas wrote...

Hm, I don't know if I like the idea of Reapers still floating around the galaxy. I would still like for them to be permanently wiped out. However, the big final battle for the Citadel would have been an excellent way to see our war assets actually count for something. Some could play out on the battlefield in London, others on the Citadel. I think post-Harbinger Shepard would be a bit too beat for this, but making his injuries just a bit less severe could fix that.

Also, an Illusive Man being directly controlled by Harbinger would be an awesome final boss. You'd have the chance to kill the biggest two birds with one stone. Good thinking.

And I get to have those blue babies :3


I just wanted to leave an opening for a new entry in the franchise. Imagine it's a couple generations later, a la Fallout. The Galaxy is still recovering, but in renewal. You DO NOT play as a descendant of Sheperd. Say that Relay technology has been unlocked and you are part of an expedition to find new places to build them. While exploring the surface of a planet, you encounter a new species that worships something that suspiciously resembles a Reaper. Upon investigating, you realize it is a living Reaper, overgrown with vegetation, and has been passing on the knowledge of it's original culture on to the natives. Do you let it continue? Or do you arbitrarily destroy it?

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Ah you got around to making a forum of it for yourself :D glad to see that. Now i can link this forum rather than your comment on the other forum when I want people to see this.

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Curtis255 wrote...

it only lacks a reason, maybe i missed it, why you wake up after the destroy choice


They could easily make it where rather than waking up after the destroy ending, they scrap everything that happens after you get hit by harbinger and instead you get up with your crew and stumble to the beam and then OP's ending happens, rather than TIM and anderson ordeal and the god-child.

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scolack wrote...

Curtis255 wrote...

it only lacks a reason, maybe i missed it, why you wake up after the destroy choice


They could easily make it where rather than waking up after the destroy ending, they scrap everything that happens after you get hit by harbinger and instead you get up with your crew and stumble to the beam and then OP's ending happens, rather than TIM and anderson ordeal and the god-child.


As much as that would be nice, in the context of my idea, leaving it would give the option of a 'bad end' if you chose synthesis or control. Give Bioware the chance to take credit as the greatest trolls ever.

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scolack wrote...

Ah you got around to making a forum of it for yourself :D glad to see that. Now i can link this forum rather than your comment on the other forum when I want people to see this.


Actually this post came up first, another user suggested I paste on the suggestion boards

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As soon as you said Jondum Bau swings in through a window and saves the day I just agreed with everything else you said.

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Oh heck yes.

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You really don't need any dialogue either, just can be scenes, for the epilogue. Sounds awesome.

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Wow that's pretty amazing, the only thing I would add between the different areas you progress through would be cinematic showing the battle raging in space, on earth and other planets. Would be nice to see those war assets actually being used.

Bioware should make you their lead writer, well done

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dmonorato wrote...

Wow that's pretty amazing, the only thing I would add between the different areas you progress through would be cinematic showing the battle raging in space, on earth and other planets. Would be nice to see those war assets actually being used.

Bioware should make you their lead writer, well done


Yeah I like that, and if you simply blazed through the main story, you see your friends in space and on the ground falling in battle, i.e Wrex being swarmed by husks, several Quarian live ships exploding

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I think that bioware needs to see this.

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mxfox408 wrote...

You really don't need any dialogue either, just can be scenes, for the epilogue. Sounds awesome.


That is how I intended it, save for the memorial speech by Hackett/Anderson

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Seriously if bioware doesnt read this and at least take notes its going to be a very very poor result we're gonna get from them. . . .. . .Maybe they shoudl just say F**K it and announce Mass Effect 3.5 including said story above plus pretty much a whole new multiplayer mode where your basically clearing up the rest of the reaper forces on each planet, city by city world by world. plus then all the sideplots you could have from people trying to loots dead planets, the political crazyness that would then unfold after every race in the galaxy having little or no forces left. . .  finding hidden tech on new dead planets, like the colony that nuked itself after reapers invaded to stop themselves from being indoctrinated. . . .and the craters left in the surface allow scans to show the tech hidden underneath (possible idea for creating new mass relays using technology previously hidden) . . . or possibly TIM manages to survive shooting himself in the head and tries to continue reaper work ect , these are all just silly ideas, but maybe i should expand on them. But before anyone starts looking for plot holes i'm working on the assumption that reaper forces are still active after the reapers are destroyed/controlled, but are absolutely mental . . .. ie once reaper control is ended, the mutated bodies of the brutes,banshees, harvesters cannibals ect are completely insane and are just destroying everything in sight.

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I would pay for this ending minus that horrible Tali face. It scares the **** out of me.

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The more i read of these the more i get disappointed in what we got from bioware..... thanks i think lol

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