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UPDATED 4/16/12: A new final act after Shepard takes a breath...


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Mushufasa1512

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Very cool. If this was how things actually had ended ME3 would easily be one of if not the best game I ever played.

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MnTalez

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I really like this ending!!

Wow, I may just keep playing ME3 again!

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Edrick1976

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OMFG THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!

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Bravenu3

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Dark Gantros wrote... Also, since you are fighting in a vacuum, aside from the sound of your own breathing, and perhaps some coms from your teamates, there is no sound, not even music. I feel this would raise the tension considerably. 


At least your own gunshots should be audible. Because the sound could travel directly through gun and armor.

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DanteImprimis

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legion999 wrote...

Dark Gantros wrote...

legion999 wrote...

2. Shepard would understand the Prothean Reaper because of the Cipher.

Aside from those minor issues I think it's great.


2.) I admit I had not considered this when I first wrote it, but you could argue that the military consciousnesses of the Prothean Reaper spoke in an encrypted language that Javik could understand, but Sheperd could not. Also, the whole scene was for emotional impact, anyway.


2. Considering they can learn languages by touch having a military language makes sense.


Another way to do it would be to have someone else -- perhaps LI or squad member (from the shuttle, perhaps) -- ask, "What did it say?", and have Shepard respond, "(It said) 'Dismissed.'" while Javik is shown as overcome with emotion.

Overall, well done, OP. 

Modifié par DanteImprimis, 30 mars 2012 - 10:19 .


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flip240

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I love this ending!

#132
MnTalez

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I wish the Bioware team can see this thread... holding the line.

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Fingertrip

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And people dying what makes what difference? It just makes it seem dramatic, but there's no evident consequences as to what happends. Fill in in the blanks.

Abit to much happy-go around as well for my books.

#134
Ninjatroll

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Realy good one,much prefer this to the end we got.

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MnTalez

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Especially the LI ending Shepard and Liara... it will be awesome to see Shepard and Liara living on Thessia, rebuilding, and building a home or two between Earth and Thessia for their Asari children.

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I have to say I'm tired of all the 'ideas' people keep posting. NONE of them will affect what BW will do in the future - just because of legal problems. Standard procedure in many other comapnies (eg Lucas Arts) is to detatch themselves from fanart and fan-made content. All things sent to them land in a shredder bin in an instant.

All of you should take a DEEP breath and wait. And do not limit BW by taking away the options they can use ;]

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MnTalez

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hangmans tree wrote...

I have to say I'm tired of all the 'ideas' people keep posting. NONE of them will affect what BW will do in the future - just because of legal problems. Standard procedure in many other comapnies (eg Lucas Arts) is to detatch themselves from fanart and fan-made content. All things sent to them land in a shredder bin in an instant.

All of you should take a DEEP breath and wait. And do not limit BW by taking away the options they can use ;]


But don't they state that they listen to the fans and will react according to how the fans want?

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I can’t even get the Shepard breathing ending in my games as the best i done so far is 3550 EMS so i would like this fixed first before the ending is changed.

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fchopin wrote...

I can’t even get the Shepard breathing ending in my games as the best i done so far is 3550 EMS so i would like this fixed first before the ending is changed.

Nawet nie warto się starać.

Few seconds of animated 2D painting... a little lame tbh. Dont bother, watch in on YT.

#140
KaeserZen

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It's a good idea, however I feel you punish too much for Renegade choices.

Basically, every alternative you say valorizes Paragon choices. Renegade is not about shooting yourself in the foot, and is already punished by the game already as it is.

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hmm...perhaps to add the "bittersweet" aspect to it, have Shepard potentially collapse from the fact that the Prothean Cipher and/or attempted indoctrination has finally overloaded his brain (there has to be at least some consequences, apart from nightmarres).

When paired up with indoctrination theory, this is full of win. Plus, Elcor Tanks!

#142
MnTalez

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I thought the idea of Javik dying with the last Reaper is quite nice.

#143
Steffi2206

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This is one of the best fan-made endings I've seen. Good job OP!

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asmodic zion

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Dark Gantros wrote...

Relwyn wrote...

Kudos@OP

Certainly something worth looking at if you're on the Bioware Staff...


If I ever receive a message from Bioware (not holding my breath) regarding my ending, I'll be sure to pass it on to all of you who have supported my amateurish writing ability.


amateurish F***K NO 

This was an inspired piece of writing i'd slap anyone who said otherwise. .  

#145
Knottedredloc

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Dude this is awesome. I am always amazed at the Mass Effect community. We may disagree and complain about petty things from time to time but you cannot deny our passion. If this would have been the one of the options for an ending, this game would have easily been best game I have ever played. It's almost sad to read because our culture of corporations with intellectual arrogance and fleets of lawyers will more that likely prevent anything close to what you have suggested to be realized. Nevertheless, thank you! Because even if nothing is done to correct the obvious let down the current ending is for those of us who have immersed ourselves into this universe since ME1, your ending is the one I will think of when turning the game off just after killing Marauder Shields.

Modifié par Knottedredloc, 30 mars 2012 - 12:49 .


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Xyrm

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Wow...I wish this fanfic was real. This would have made an incredibly satisfying ending... I hope Bioware gets at least some inspiration from this for ending DLC.

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Kondorr

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I don't even see the need to read that to be 100% sure, that the proposed ending will be better than what we got...

(but I am still going to read it... once I am back from work)

#148
MnTalez

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Unshackled Fan. So to speak

#149
MyAwesomeAfro

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HIRE THIS MAN

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Fingertrip wrote...

And people dying what makes what difference? It just makes it seem dramatic, but there's no evident consequences as to what happends. Fill in in the blanks.

Abit to much happy-go around as well for my books.



And people dying what makes what difference? <--------------------- what the hell does that mean

and fill in the blanks where? can you explain which blanks?

what are you actually asking dude?