UPDATED 4/16/12: A new final act after Shepard takes a breath...
#126
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 09:29
#127
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 09:30
Wow, I may just keep playing ME3 again!
#128
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 09:47
#129
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 10:03
Dark Gantros wrote... Also, since you are fighting in a vacuum, aside from the sound of your own breathing, and perhaps some coms from your teamates, there is no sound, not even music. I feel this would raise the tension considerably.
At least your own gunshots should be audible. Because the sound could travel directly through gun and armor.
#130
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 10:16
legion999 wrote...
Dark Gantros wrote...
legion999 wrote...
2. Shepard would understand the Prothean Reaper because of the Cipher.
Aside from those minor issues I think it's great.
2.) I admit I had not considered this when I first wrote it, but you could argue that the military consciousnesses of the Prothean Reaper spoke in an encrypted language that Javik could understand, but Sheperd could not. Also, the whole scene was for emotional impact, anyway.
2. Considering they can learn languages by touch having a military language makes sense.
Another way to do it would be to have someone else -- perhaps LI or squad member (from the shuttle, perhaps) -- ask, "What did it say?", and have Shepard respond, "(It said) 'Dismissed.'" while Javik is shown as overcome with emotion.
Overall, well done, OP.
Modifié par DanteImprimis, 30 mars 2012 - 10:19 .
#131
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 10:27
#132
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 10:46
#133
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 10:51
Abit to much happy-go around as well for my books.
#134
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:34
#135
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:42
#136
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 11:53
All of you should take a DEEP breath and wait. And do not limit BW by taking away the options they can use ;]
#137
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:01
hangmans tree wrote...
I have to say I'm tired of all the 'ideas' people keep posting. NONE of them will affect what BW will do in the future - just because of legal problems. Standard procedure in many other comapnies (eg Lucas Arts) is to detatch themselves from fanart and fan-made content. All things sent to them land in a shredder bin in an instant.
All of you should take a DEEP breath and wait. And do not limit BW by taking away the options they can use ;]
But don't they state that they listen to the fans and will react according to how the fans want?
#138
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:05
#139
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:06
Nawet nie warto się starać.fchopin wrote...
I can’t even get the Shepard breathing ending in my games as the best i done so far is 3550 EMS so i would like this fixed first before the ending is changed.
Few seconds of animated 2D painting... a little lame tbh. Dont bother, watch in on YT.
#140
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:07
Basically, every alternative you say valorizes Paragon choices. Renegade is not about shooting yourself in the foot, and is already punished by the game already as it is.
#141
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:07
When paired up with indoctrination theory, this is full of win. Plus, Elcor Tanks!
#142
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:18
#143
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:32
#144
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:34
Dark Gantros wrote...
Relwyn wrote...
Kudos@OP
Certainly something worth looking at if you're on the Bioware Staff...
If I ever receive a message from Bioware (not holding my breath) regarding my ending, I'll be sure to pass it on to all of you who have supported my amateurish writing ability.
amateurish F***K NO
This was an inspired piece of writing i'd slap anyone who said otherwise. .
#145
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:48
Modifié par Knottedredloc, 30 mars 2012 - 12:49 .
#146
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:49
#147
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:53
(but I am still going to read it... once I am back from work)
#148
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 12:56
#149
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 01:02
#150
Posté 30 mars 2012 - 01:14
Fingertrip wrote...
And people dying what makes what difference? It just makes it seem dramatic, but there's no evident consequences as to what happends. Fill in in the blanks.
Abit to much happy-go around as well for my books.
And people dying what makes what difference? <--------------------- what the hell does that mean
and fill in the blanks where? can you explain which blanks?
what are you actually asking dude?





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